Pulse 459 WIP 2
I'll be late with this page. Just been crazy busy the last few days.
2021-12-17 10:22:15 +0000 UTC View Post
I'll be late with this page. Just been crazy busy the last few days.
2021-12-17 10:22:15 +0000 UTC View Post
Just needs color and lettering I think.
2021-12-12 10:52:47 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm trying to consider all of the issues here in deciding how it should end. I need to show that Evilyn is more powerful than expected, but also that she's not the most powerful being ever either. I also wanted a win that didn't seem cheap or some magical solution.
Mira being in Evilyn's mind is the ultimate way to solve this right now. Although it's not all over yet, it'll have to be something the story comes back to later. Just like Grace's powers being too str...
2021-12-09 21:35:11 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm trying to find a balance between making Evilyn seem overpowered, and making her seem like she's not the most powerful person ever.
One issue she'd have if the fight continued is if she can only have five horns, she and the group she is fighting are on equal ground and they can hurt her. That must be some kind of advantage for them.
This is almost the end of the fight. This ends up somewhat unresolved for now. What I'm trying to do is give each of the characte...
2021-12-07 11:21:47 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm trying to decide what each of these two do for a living. I've thought about Mimi being a radio DJ, not sure about Jen yet.
Edit: fixed two typos.
2021-12-06 10:55:25 +0000 UTC View Post
Redrawing a picture from 2008. Annie in a Pulse T-Shirt.
Thoughts or critique welcome. Should I make an edit where she's as busty as in the older picture?
2021-12-05 11:45:26 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, I wanted to move things along with having Evilyn be hurt again so she'd get to five horns. But I didn't want the reason to be someone being stupid. This seemed like a way that would involve Annie, not require anyone to be stupid, and not require anyone to be suddenly amazing or more effecting.
I think there are three pages left to this chapter.
2021-12-03 11:39:32 +0000 UTC View Post
A bunch of sketches-
Starting on this. With Jen at her big size, it's hard to come up with interesting angles in this tight space. I'll need to work on Mimi's southern speech when I letter it.
2021-11-28 12:02:00 +0000 UTC View Post
Late, but still working on it. Might end up working on something else and letting this slip until next week.
The middle panels will be a little tricky. I need to show Evilyn disappearing into smoke in panel 2, and her reappearing in panel 3. Something looks a little off about Annie in panel 3, and I need to erase Evilyn and draw her again in a more interesting pose.
This page was about trying to get Evilyn into having five horns as quickly as possible-- but witho...
2021-11-27 13:12:13 +0000 UTC View Post
Here's the last bit of this done.
2021-11-26 10:44:54 +0000 UTC View Post
A little late in starting this. We're nearing the end of this chapter and story, so things need to be wrapped up. The first issue is that we need to see Evilyn with five horns-- so she needs to be hurt again. I didn't want to go with someone being stupid, so I had to come up with a way for Evilyn to be hurt that wasn't anyone's fault.
Panel 1-
The whole group (might want to redraw Annie to be more dramatic or something).
Panel 2- 2021-11-24 13:36:53 +0000 UTC View Post
There's a lot of little things, and Jen's head left.
2021-11-24 13:24:46 +0000 UTC View Post
There's kind of limited options for this page to be more than boobs with heads and arms around them-- even Mimi in the last panel based on the point of view and limited space.
The point here is that Mimi has two reversal methods she also bought, and she'll explain both. One of them gives Jen freedom- under certain hopefully funny conditions. Mimi will keep the other reversal option just in case, but she says she's always wanted to be really huge.
So Mimi will be the al...
2021-11-21 11:41:14 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, I'm trying to speed up the story here. The last page ended with Mastermind waking up and there's two bursts of speed behind her, so I wanted this to segway from that a little. The twins where trying to deal with Mean Evie after she confronted them and Pulse. The cloak guy and the blue guy work to put her in a trap.
Then we have Mira, who is there fighting Mean Evie in Evilyn's mind.
Then back to outside, but at least some small amount of time has passed, an...
2021-11-20 07:09:55 +0000 UTC View Post
This'll be late, but here's what I have so far. I think I need to make Evilyn's hips wider in the last panel.
2021-11-19 12:21:17 +0000 UTC View Post
I might end up being late, but here's some more progress.
2021-11-18 13:42:28 +0000 UTC View Post
This page is pretty background-heavy. Working through some of it.
2021-11-17 11:26:57 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, here's what I've got for the page for this week.
Last page had a pair of fast-motion walls of movement in the background, so I thought I needed to start with that. The twins are pulling Mean Evie into a trap.
Then we have Mira fighting Mean Evie in Evilyn's mind.
A panel of Mastermind and Pulse protecting Mira's body. Mastermind and Pulse look a little damaged here to try to show time is passing.
What I think I'm going to have here is that there's a s...
2021-11-16 10:00:31 +0000 UTC View Post
Seems like a lot of Rikku stuff, and one with Rikku and Yuffie. There was also a newer version of that Xom picture on my tablet.
Making some progress with this page.
2021-11-12 11:37:02 +0000 UTC View PostAny requests or suggestions on something to draw? Who or who not to draw? Would you want, or not want a BE picture?
Gimme some ideas. If it seems like there's a lot of different ideas, I'll have a poll-- but if there's a consensus, I'll just draw that.
2021-11-11 10:35:05 +0000 UTC View Post
I had to add more to the transition between the two upper panels. In the rough version of the page I thought the word bubbles would take up more space.
2021-11-11 09:20:30 +0000 UTC View Post
Spent some time on this page.
2021-11-08 10:45:51 +0000 UTC View Post