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Dress of Charisma +3

A sketch I inked and colored.

Nani BE Comic WIP 2

How about this?  Is the dialog better?  (the first dialog needs to end with a question mark.)  My intention was the joke of the second panel was partly that it wasn't logical that she could have grown so much and it not be noticed before.

Any thoughts about Sara's hair?  I guess her remake look was barely shown in anything.

Just Juno

Just Juno and nothing else.

Blue Dress Tifa

I didn't look up the dress Tifa wore in the flashback during the game, but I think it was something vaguely similar to this maybe?

Pulse 441 + PSDs + WIPs

Okay, there's obviously three different things going on here-

• One is Mean Evie doesn't seem like much of a threat yet.
• One is Annie is being adventurous as always and trying to come up with a way to fuel her suit (considering she's already out of power, as said a few chapters ago).  I was going to have a joke about where she was hiding her ring (Tabitha gave her advice to keep things in her cleavage, her "vault"), but cut it for space.  While An...
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Pulse 441 WIP 4

A lot of little things left.

Maximum Max 11-17 WIP

Okay, here's my plans for the next few comics-

Comic 11-

Max stops her sister from showing too much affection (for Sam) by getting her Mom and Sam to hug-- allowing Max to mingle.

Comic 12-

Trying to show time is passing.  I don't know if I should try to show every female here as bustier than Max?  Even if they don't look related?  (i.e. should both women here be bustier, even if the dark haired one at best must be less ...

Pulse 441 WIP 3

Starting to fill in the empty places.  I keep erasing and redrawing Annie's upper half in panel 5.

Nani BE Comic WIP 1

It looks like Nani from Peeved won the poll.  Here's my first idea for the result, I'd like to see what's thought of it.  I drew this from memory, so anything I needed reference isn't complete.

Although I could have just used Sena's magic for a reason, I thought there would other silly ideas too.

Here's my rough ideas for the dialog, featuring short ninja Nani and her grumpy roommate Sara-

Panel 1

Sara: We'll be late if you don't hurt, shorty...

Pulse 441 WIP 2

Okay, so Annie looks down on the group controlling Mean Evie.  Mastermind and Mira continue with their plan to enter Evilyn's mind.  Annie is blinded by the bright light from that, and then she decides to try to find a way to help by finding an alternative power source.  Then Mastermind and Mira inside Evilyn's mind.

Materia Enhanced IV, page 13

I noticed the feedback about the last word bubble.  But I thought it was kind of funny that they are either suggesting that Tifa's strength equals two of their stats, or that she was more than one strength stat.

Any thoughts on that?

One more page to this section of the comic.

If I were going to draw a BE picture, who should it be?

I'm excluding Annie, Juno, Eve, Sena, Xom, and the non-OCs just to see the result.  I'm curious who would win if I excluded the characters I think could easily win.

Pulse 440 + PSDs + WIPs

I didn't want Mean Evie to steamroll them yet.  She only has two horns so far, so she's just the strongest C-Class, she isn't a threat yet to a B-Class.  This page is to show there's a big difference between Mira and Tabitha who struggled with two-horn Mean Evie and her versus the elite.

It'll also be more fun when she's stomping them later if they've not taken her seriously earlier.

Pulse 440 WIP 2

A lot of progress today, but still not enough for me to be certain it'll be done on time.

Pulse 441 & 442 WIP

A little ahead planning.

Page 441-

• Annie looks own from the control room.
• Mira takes a defensive position protecting Mastermind.
• Mastermind's helmet glows brightly as she has her hand on Mira's shoulder.
• Annie above has to cover her eyes from the light.
• Annie looks at her ring and comments she wouldn't be waiting up there if she had some power (I thought about giving an explanation to how and why she had the ring, but thou...
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Pulse 440 WIP 1

Okay, so this page is to show off that even with two horns, Evilyn isn't nearly a B-Class... and also to make them feel like there's nothing to worry about.

What Would You Like to See Here?

I feel like I've always been uncertain what people want, that's why I ask a lot or have polls.  You CAN choose more than one option, hopefully it doesn't become confusing doing it that way.

Annie Bikini

Okay fixed her cleavage line, and went with blue for her bikini.

Annie Bikini WIP

Not sure if I'll get a chance to color this right away, so I thought I'd post a WIP here.

Any suggestions for the color of her bikini?

Materia Enhanced IV page 13 WIP 2

Moving along.

Pulse 439 + PSDs + WIPs

I wanted to start showing the complications of trying to handle someone who can become more powerful by hurting themselves-- and also add some mystery when Jessica is trying to communicate with Evilyn telepathically.

Even with two horns though Evilyn should be much weaker than everyone but Mira and Pulse, but the stronger she gets, the harder it is to control her without hurting her.

Pulse 439 WIP 3

Progress is going pretty well I think.

Pulse 439 WIP 2

Started inking.

Pulse 439 WIP 1

They're being surprised here, but things aren't spinning out of control yet.  Two horns should still be easily managed by a B-Class.

• Normal Evilyn is just a normal human.
• One horn should be about equal to Pulse.
• Two horns is stronger than Mira and Arim (so the best C-Class)

I'm assuming she goes up to at least four horns, so that should be strong enough to at least be a challenge for all of these B-Class combined.

Mega Yuffie

Kind of a simple picture.

Maximum Max 1-10 Edits

How about this?  I altered the fourth-wall text again to be yellow.  It's the same color as the narration boxes in my comics.

Is this better?  I considered using a different font too, but someone a few years ago convinced me that using too many different fonts made the comic more difficult to read.

...This comic will have NSFW pages eventually, it's just been a lot of setup.

Grace Dress

Trying to wrap up unfinished stuff.

Maximum Max 10

How about this as a test for what the fourth wall breaking bubbles should look like?  I thought changing the font might be distracting on pages where she switches, and also changing the color of the outline might make it hard to have the bubbles cut out of the panels (to save space).

I have to experiment with the method to color the bubbles, sometimes only some of them in a chain, and see if I can come up with a really simple method.

Pulse 438 + PSDs + WIPs

I'm trying to be realistic here that even if Annie had the energy to power her suit she's only be slightly useful, but she's still unhappy there's nothing she can do so far.

I'm also trying to show that Mira isn't as cold-hearted as she sometimes seems.  She's trying to help Evilyn because she cares.

Pulse 438 WIP 3

Still need to add color and letter it.