A Different Annie WIP
I was considering something like this. I was thinking overalls and a tube top?
2021-06-09 10:51:09 +0000 UTC View Post
I was considering something like this. I was thinking overalls and a tube top?
2021-06-09 10:51:09 +0000 UTC View Post
I wasn't sure how I wanted to finish panel two, I erased Annie and plan to redraw her. But I wanted to make some progress so I colored all of the finished parts of the page.
There's a few mistakes I still need to fix though- Evilyn's eye color in panel 3 and Annie's right leg in panel 5.
2021-06-09 10:27:29 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, the next two pages, up to the end of the chapter.
Page 435-
The door opens and they hear Mira. When she enters it seems like there's no one there. Jessica says they are still in there, Mira lifts up the desk. Evilyn says "Oh, Hi Mira. ...I hope you are not upset about Arim..."
Page 436-
Mira carries Annie and Evilyn into another room-- and then drops them. She says they've talked it all over and they...
2021-06-08 10:30:01 +0000 UTC View Post
Again, another one I'm not sure if it would make more sense as a three-panel comic. Nani the ninja is super-strong for limited amounts of time. I thought she might be wondering around and decide to test herself. She doesn't look like she's really straining because this probably isn't near her limit. This took some effort, but it's not a strain.
I was going to put something on her shirt, but I couldn't think of anything that didn't suggest she wasn't just there by...
2021-06-05 09:26:10 +0000 UTC View Post
I made three little Peeved one-shot illustrations of a scene. Should I have made these into three panel comics? Is this enough of a story? Should I add a little title at the bottom that says "The Smallest at the Big Girls Spring"?
If a three panel comic, I'd probably have it so that these three, Sara and Sena were at a hot-springs that separated women by bust size. Eve slightly teased about being in the bigger one, then regrets it?
--Or is this just best th...
2021-06-04 09:24:07 +0000 UTC View Post
At this point, I wanted it to seem like her powers might be too dangerous to keep, but with an opening for some hope. There's some important information on the next page though-- then continue on with this into the next chapter.
Mira is here, and she'll be in the story, but not until page 435.
2021-06-03 10:10:10 +0000 UTC View Post
I think two more pages to this part of the story.
2021-06-02 01:01:08 +0000 UTC View Post
I must have had the sketch dump version flipped horizontally. I think the rain turned out okay, that's one of the hardest things to draw well.
2021-05-31 11:16:11 +0000 UTC View Post
Just some WIP stuff and sketches-
Okay, it seems likely that "twice as big" will end up winning. Any suggestions or requests on what the content should be? Should she have grown? Be growing? Or some kind of joke? Should it be something funny, or a pinup? Or what?
2021-05-30 08:43:11 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm not sure if the dialog is that easy to read. I have terrible hand-writing. It might change in the final version, but this is at least the right idea I think.
2021-05-29 09:49:35 +0000 UTC View Post
Moving along. Still have a lot of little details to finish.
2021-05-28 10:36:22 +0000 UTC View PostIt looks like "bigger breasts" will be impossible to beat. So, how big?
(I have no idea what would win in this kind of poll. I'm adding crazy options just because I'm curious.)
2021-05-27 22:49:52 +0000 UTC View Post
The start of some important information about Evilyn. This deal with her Father is important, but I don't know if I should give anything away yet here. I might give some hints later in the story.
I'm assuming not ALL powers are listed in the records, like I bet Lucy's aren't listed. But she isn't an active superhero.
2021-05-27 10:18:05 +0000 UTC View Post
I did move the folder up in panel 4 so Annie is resting it on her chest. It kind of looks silly now though. Still have Evilyn to finish in panel 3, and her head in panel 5.
2021-05-26 09:38:51 +0000 UTC View Post
I'm not sure I made Rikku busty enough in the first panel, that's why there's the gray lines.
2021-05-26 09:30:55 +0000 UTC View Post
Not sure if I'm considering Annie's chest enough in panel 4. If she's reading the papers in that folder, she could probably only see the very top of the pages at best. Maybe I should adjust the picture so that she has the folder sitting on her chest more like in panel one.
2021-05-25 09:04:37 +0000 UTC View Post
Okay, here's that really big Amy from the previous poll.
2021-05-25 07:36:12 +0000 UTC View PostIf I were going to draw Annie different in some way than normal, what would you want? For an experiment picture.
(I don't know if I should have put all of these together, some are themes for pictures or outfits, others are ways she would look physically different. But I wanted to give a lot of choices.)
2021-05-24 21:39:11 +0000 UTC View Post
Just some sketches and WIP stuff-
Just something simple. I kind of feel like it lost some energy from the sketch.
2021-05-21 23:41:53 +0000 UTC View Post
Trying to draw some characters I don't usually draw. Aika from the Dreamcast and Gamecube RPG Skies of Arcadia from 20 years ago.
2021-05-21 00:07:03 +0000 UTC View Post
Evilyn's clothes are a little off here, I changed her clothes when inking page 431, and haven't edited these yet.
On the second page that has no dialog, Annie's asking about Mean Evie.
On the third page, we're getting to the point of why Mira was so interested in Evilyn keeping her powers. She knows Evilyn will have to go to jail again.
2021-05-20 11:20:10 +0000 UTC View Post
Here's Evilyn. The easiest way to continue her narrative is to bring in Annie. We're going to get a few pages about Evilyn's life and powers, and then get to Jessica and Mira's crazy plan about how to solve "Mean Evie".
I thought I'd have Annie here more tempted to fight Evilyn, but she doesn't have any power left in her, so I can't imagine she thinks fighting Mean Evie is an option today. (Although she probably does end up fighting her coming up when things spin out o...
2021-05-20 08:49:27 +0000 UTC View Post
I think the art is done. I just have to letter it.
2021-05-19 10:09:30 +0000 UTC View Post
So this is what I've go so far for the rest of the story until the end.
Page 23- The Doorman open a doorway and they jump through. I wanted them to jump through to show they really wanted to make sure they didn't miss getting back a second time. He tells them he didn't have to sent anyone to rescue them. Maybe he asked them if they had fun?
Page 24- Here they either comment they had fun, and or they plan to go back. Maybe t...
2021-05-19 08:06:19 +0000 UTC View Post
Almost finished in some places, very rough in others. There won't be any dialog here, it's a montage of the rest of their day.
Annie's top is accidentally reversed in panel two now that I look at it. I usually draw one layer, then reverse the canvas and draw the second more finished layer, then reverse the canvas back to normal to ink-- but that can sometimes throw you off about which way is which unless you are really paying attention.
2021-05-18 08:48:23 +0000 UTC View Post