First of, Damn you Disney for making the name of this tier the same as your worst-ever show. (Even the Xmas Special from 1978 has a better rating on Rotten Tomatoes).
Anyway...
The draft/Mk1 of chapter 6 of book 3 of A New Player.
This chapter deals with the aftermath of events in the previous chapter, and then has Cam and Anakin move on to their next place of training: The Echani.
The draft/ Mk1 version of chapter 3 of the 5-chapter arc (and 38th overall) for Game of Kingdoms.
In this, we see Cregan using Rian and the gulls he brought with him to maximum effect, while Daemon leads the defence of a recently taken port.
2024-07-05 11:00:14 +0000 UTC
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This month's public chapter for Còir Buaidh, and the first chapter of Dòmhnall's first year at school.
Before he can get there, however, he has to deal with boarding the Express, which in this universe, is far a more complicated process than in the canon timeline.
As always with draft chapters, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary.
This month's public chapter for A New Player.
Chapter 5 of Book 3.
This chapter deals with the cliff-hanger of the last one, and follows both Cam and Anakin heavily.
As always with draft chapters, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary.
2024-07-02 11:00:07 +0000 UTC View PostThis month's public chapter for Game of Kingdoms.
Chapter 2 of the 5 chapter arc (and 37 overall).
This chapter brings our first POV not linked directly to Cregan, before returning to our 'hero' as he deals with the first pirate lord of Redwater.
As always with draft chapters, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary.
Part 2 of Cam's first year at school. However, first he has to get to the castle and be sorted.
Which is slightly different than he had expected.
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2024-06-22 11:00:09 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 6 of book 3 of A New Player.
This chapter deals with the aftermath of events in the previous chapter, and then has Cam and Anakin move onto their next place of training: The Echani.
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Redraft of chapter 38 of Game of Kingdoms.
In this, we see Cregan using Rian and the gulls he brought with him to maximum effect, while Daemon leads the defence of a recently taken port.
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Part 2 of the Year 1 arc for Còir Buaidh.
Cam has arrived at school, but things aren't quite the same as in canon.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Sz7GsVa7bQX4Qd-8WDl0nHMQkGypkYSZ_lZpxgsB0Nc/edit?usp=sharing
2024-06-12 11:00:06 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 6 of Book 3 of A New Player.
This chapter deals with the aftermath of events in the previous chapter, and then has Cam and Anakin move on to their next place of training: The Echani.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hqkjgg8CvvrtH-rnjVxD8hWAiEF_bB2xgGrbLK8x5KA/edit?usp=sharing
2024-06-11 11:00:03 +0000 UTC View PostDraft of chapter 38 of Game of Kingdoms.
In this, we see Cregan using Rian and the gulls he brought with him to maximum effect, while Daemon leads the defence of a recently taken port.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ll7aNRC8F7VB2nqwSqQa7T9T_WnJgBNHZD9ZuBS8pFQ/edit?usp=sharing
2024-06-10 11:00:04 +0000 UTC View PostThe draft of the first chapter of the Year 1 arc for Còir Buaidh.
It's time for Domnhall to make his way to Hogwarts. First, however, he has to deal with boarding the Express, which in this universe, is far more complicated than in the canon timeline.
As always with draft chapters, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary.
Draft of chapter 37 of A Game of Kingdoms.
In this, Cregan's forces take their first holdings on Redwater, though not before we get our first POV showing that Cregan's actions aren't happening in a vacuum.
As always with draft chapters, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary.
The last chapter of the Year 0 arc.
This chapter deals with Dòmhnall scouting possible allies for the future (in ways I freely admit might come across as creepy), and him finally craving his first Flesh runic Array into his body. There's also a little bit about the difference between this Hogwarts and the canon one; at least with regards to how the students getting to the school is handled.
As always, comments, mistake spotting and ideas are more than welcome on the GDoc or Disco...
2024-06-03 11:00:07 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 4 of Book 3 of A New Player.
In this, Cam, Anakin, and Simvyl train with a Matukai Instructor, and then once the training is over, leave the planet intent on heading to their next destination.
As always, comments, mistake spotting and ideas are more than welcome on the GDoc or Discord.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XzIQatvsvew5d6O...
2024-06-02 11:00:06 +0000 UTC View PostThis is the start of a 5-chapter run of Cregan's moves against the Pirate Lords of Redwater. Before then, however, Cregan has to bring his squires in on his secrets, as without doing so he cannot fulfil the promise to Doran Martell for teaching Trystane magic. And then have one final body join the voyage to Redwater.
As always, comments, mistake spotting, and ideas are more than welcome on the GDoc or Discord.
Another session of the Dragon Chat. This one covers with Lifting the Shroud 1; the first chapter of the arc covering Cregan's campaign in The Shrouded Isle.
2024-05-30 17:28:20 +0000 UTC View PostPart 2 of Cam's first year at school. However, first he has to get to the castle and be sorted.
Which is slightly different than he had expected.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Rx7AxhrtGa749HAygjeg3Brp3oOh-f6iQ1Wj6H03iK4/edit?usp=sharing
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2024-05-27 11:00:04 +0000 UTC View PostAs has become the norm, this Dragon Chat deals with a single chapter of one story.
In this case, it's Còir Buaidh's Year 1 Part 4.
This chapter deals with Domhnall's time settling into life at school with a focus on a few moments from his first week.
2024-05-23 20:13:52 +0000 UTC View PostThe redraft of Year 1 Part 1 of Còir Buaidh.
As always, comments, mistake spotting and ideas are more than welcome on the GDoc or on Discord.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/11xOR5x8BTM1Zqy7qiLQaKeJHt4HPJvFpvDSVGk_QDhY/edit?usp=sharing
2024-05-22 11:00:08 +0000 UTC View PostThe redraft of chapter 3.05 of A New Player.
As always, comments, mistake spotting and ideas are more than welcome on the GDoc or on Discord.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XplgkKUIFDgq_lgdKH2GI7L2ReBnh-Ltrg4Drko0plg/edit?usp=sharing
2024-05-21 11:00:02 +0000 UTC View PostThe redraft of chapter 36 of Game of Kingdoms.
As always, comments, mistake spotting and ideas are more than welcome on the GDoc or on Discord.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IfkitYkjoDVfEbnnq1PcSBe2gVayGHa29w9eXuuuu-4/edit?usp=sharing
2024-05-20 11:00:04 +0000 UTC View PostThe draft of the first chapter of the Year 1 arc for Còir Buaidh.
It's time for Domnhall to make his way to Hogwarts. First, however, he has to deal with boarding the Express, which in this universe, is far more complicated than in the canon timeline.
As always with draft chapters, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary.
The first draft of chapter 5 of Book 3 of A New Player.
It deals with events at the end of the previous chapter, seeing events unfold through the eyes of Cam and Anakin.
As always with draft chapters, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary.
2024-05-11 11:00:06 +0000 UTC View PostDraft of chapter 37 of A Game of Kingdoms.
In this, Cregan's forces take their first holdings on Redwater, though not before we get our first POV showing that Cregan's actions aren't happening in a vacuum.
As always with draft chapters, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary.
Due to a shift I brought in last month of altering what each tier can see, there are no new drafts for Acolytes this month.
Sorry about that.
In case anyone missed it last month, the following are the advanced drafts for Acolytes.
GOK: The Water Runs Red 1:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zVyesgeBjz4NahpNuTcfaJZre...
2024-05-05 11:00:03 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 5 of 6 of the Year 0 arc for Còir Buaidh.
Finally, after several years, Dòmhnall opens the fleshcarving tome. Of course, things are never that easy. Also, Bradley has the pleasure of meeting another pureblood beyond Dom, which sees the first admissions of Dom's intentions for the world.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1X6F3Y4SS91ui6ED26E...
2024-05-03 11:00:07 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 3 of book 3 of A New Player in the Force.
In this, Cam learns how Serra is doing, though he's is unable to speak with her directly, and then Raven gets examined by Raith Sienar and his engineers.
As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.
Chapter 35 of Game of Kingdoms.
This chapter answers the question of why Oberyn was so happy at the end of the last chapter. There are also the first POVs not from Cregan.
as always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.
Another session of the Dragon Chat.
This one focuses on 3.09 for A New Player in the Force, where Cam and Anakin go to Kro Var for training with the Shapers. An inherently Dark Side sect that imprisons anyone who uses the Force for mental actions.
2024-04-29 08:33:56 +0000 UTC View Post