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Updated page 2

Just the face.

Updated page 1

As I mentioned last post, I'm changing Robin's fece in some panels in the first pages since I ended up drawing her quite different in the last ones and it was bothering me.

Also, I decided to keep the title simple and straight forward.

Pages 1 to 9

I'm not including the rest of the pages this time because I'm currently tweaking them. I want to change a bit of the dialogue and some of Robin's faces, since there's a noticeable difference between how I drew her at page 1 vs page 9.

I'll update this post to include them once I'm done with them. I'll tick the option to notify you when I edit the post so you don't have to keep cheking if I updated it already.

There's one more page left btw.

EDIT: Added pages 1, 2 and 3 (I ch...

Did a bunch of small changes to page 9

Didn't want to keep updating the previous post over and over.

First one is the updated one.

Finished page 9

Like someone pointed out in a previous post, this page is arranged in a kind of chaotic way so it conveys the panic state of Robin. Panels go over eachother and bubbles go over panel separations. And I was worried this would make it hard to read.

But I think in the end I managed to make the page readable while still chaotic, except for the one speech bubble in the top right that's honestly poorly positioned. As I illustraded in the third image, the eye will probably naturally skip it. S...

Page 9 progress

I'll talk a bit about the composition when it's finished.

Finished page 8

I'm gonna try talking a bit about page composition/design choices in these posts, maybe some of you are interested. (I'm no expert in comic visual narrative, I'm figuring it out as I go)

I like to use kind of "theatrical lighting" some times but maybe I've overdone it a bit on the first panel haha. If you think so, you can let me know. The goal, as you might have guessed, is to convey her shock.

The autoflush closeup panel is in the center since it's the answear to "what happened ...

Progress on page 8

Finished page 7

Progress on page 7

Page 9 ink

Page 9 ink progress

I'm going pretty slow with this one, sorry.

I haven't been able to draw as much as I'd like these past few days.

1/2 of page 9 ink

Page 8 ink

I just noticed the "collections" feature

I organized all the different projects I've done so far using the feature. Way better than just tags..

Let me know if you think I should organize them in a different way.

Also do let me know if there's some other thing I should do to make the  patron experience better. 

1/2 of page 8 ink

Page 7 ink

Included with and without text and ink because you can't read fucking anything in some panels lol.

(It will read just fine with speach bubbles obviously)

1/2 of page 7 sketch

Decided I'll do these three first and the the last one.

Page 9 sketch

Hopefully it's not too messy composition wise.

1/2 of the page 9 sketch

Still haven't decided on the name of the local, hence the "(name)".

Also, looks like there will be 4 pages in this last batch.

Page 8 sketch

Page 7 sketch

This can't be the first page her name shows up lol. I still have to fit it in one of the first ones. I'll revise all of the dialogue once it's drawn. 

By the way, I'm also thinking about changing Eileen's lines a bit so it looks less like she's domming Robin and more like she's enabling her. I'm thinking about it, not sure.

4k Box Opening Comic

EDIT: Minor changes to a couple things like the vibe's movement lines and her pussy drool.

Box opening Page 3 finished

Box opening Page 2 finished

Box opening Page 1 finished

Box opening page 3 ink

Box opening page 2 ink

I'm worried the vibration lines on the vibe kinda look like they're just part of the texture of her pussy walls. Maybe I'll just write "buzzz" next to it so you can tell it's on.

Box openoing page 1 ink

Box opening page 3 sketch