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Just A Little Warning To Avoid Confusion + News About DTD

Very soon I'm going to add the $15 tier, but, if any of you have been here long enough (which I know some of you have), I'm going to add to the tier chapter by chapter like I did with the $5 and $10 tiers.

This makes it so much easier for me instead of piling up 5 chapters of each story and posting them all at once.

This won't get in the way of the normal 2 chapters per story per week schedule BTW. I'm writing the extra chapters at the end of the week after all of my weekly obliga...

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LTW Book 4 Chapter 2: Honest Racism and Friendly Bribe [First Draft]

 

"Thank you, Mr Immortus," Swind said in a quiet voice.

Lone just nodded in response. There was no point in making a bigger deal out of such a small incident in his opinion.

Thankfully, no one else started any trouble with Lone's group as they waited in like. Twenty minutes passed before it was finally their turn to get registered with Felron. Just before they entered the border gate's registry office, Alisa pulled on Lone's sleeve.

"Hmm?" He looked at her curiou...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 12: Achievements and Cold Reunion [First Draft]

 

[Confirmed. Linking the host to the bidding room.]


This was the most efficient way for everyone to bid on the same item, apparently. It would link the minds of all of the interested parties and then you could make a higher bid than the current one with just a thought.

The system would add your bid or reject it depending on your merit points, making it a far simpler process than a normal auction. At least, a normal auction hosting over two-h...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 11: Pheldorapod and A VR Capsule [First Draft]

 

"System, invite the hosts, Vanessa Jakoby, Madison McArthur, Lyle Middletown and Mave Werthers to my suite, please," Daz asked as he got comfortable in his the glamorous and spacious lounge.

There was a bar sat just behind the sofa he had settled on which worked just like the one in the fighting room, so he was happy that at least his Sister and his room's guests would be able to get refreshments with ease.

Speaking of Rose, she was right up against the glass at ...

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LTW Book 4 Chapter 1: Felron's Border and Swind's Concealed Anger [First Draft]

 

Lone and Hazel's group walked through the massive light yellow rift and stepped onto the rocky plateau that it led them too. Once they were all through, Alisa willed the portal to close.

Lone enjoyed the light breeze that rustled his hair and tickled his skin. "Where is this? I don't remember anywhere like this near the world tree."

Alisa had a proud but shy look on her face. "M-My rifts can take you anywhere in any direction so long as it's within five-hundred&n...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 10: Data Tracker and The General Auction's Start [First Draft]


[Congratulations! You won the duel.

Your prize: [60,000] merit points.

The total balance of the host is now: 6,471,641 [+60,000].]


Daz rubbed his chin with a happy look on his face. 'Just under three million points in twenty-two hours... Amazing. I've learnt so much as well. I hope I made a good impression on everyone. The more people that wa...

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LTW Book 4 Prologue: Erion's Nostalgia and Sigmund's Annoyance [First Draft]

 

A/N: Sorry that this one is only 1,000-words. It's the prologue, so I didn't want to needlessly stretch it to the usual 2,000-words when it's fine at this length.


Headmaster Erion calmly paced through the hallways of his expansive academy, The Academy.

He laughed silently as he recalled the ridiculous way in which the most famous and powerful magic school on the continent of Teresta came to be named. It was a funny story that he knew no one would belie...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 9: Mu's Cardboard and Madison's New Worries [First Draft]

 

Mu was happily floating down the hallway in the General Amusement and Gambling Ring via his Cloud of Tartarus.

Of course, he had completely ignored the door for the champions since he had a feeling there wouldn't be many people in there, and consequentially, there would be less fun to be had.

People made way for him since his scythe was very dangerous-looking. Only the hardiest survivors tried to ignore his presence and act tough, though even amongst them, only one or...

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LTW Book 3 Epilogue: Eternal Allies and An Emotional Farewell [First Draft]

 

Lone met the criticizing and scornful gazes of the elves as well as the relieved and somewhat impatient looks of the fairies. He met them all and promptly ignored them.

Once he had reached the base of the world tree, he took Ele'hunda's now perfect body out from his Dimensional Storage and gave it to the elves in charge of burying him with his ancestors who also rested at the foot of the world tree, the safest place for them since there was a small garden warded v...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 8: Champion of Quarterstaves and Test of Strength [First Draft]

 

[Congratulations! You won the duel.

Your prize: [142,153] merit points.]


[The total balance of the host is now: 2,661,641 [+142,153].]


Once again, Daz reappeared at his and Rose's table alongside the four men. Each of them looked beyond traumatised and they hobbled away as if they were merely puppets being pulled by strings.

Ro...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 132: Swind's New Appearance and Building Resentment [First Draft]

 

Since he was immobilised, Swind chose to look at the few flashing notifications in the corner of his vision before trying to do anything else.


[Altros has recognised the host's incredibly strong will and thus altered the skill [Energy Absorption] accordingly.]


[World Skill: Energy Absorption

A skill that was granted to the host by the planet: Altros.

This skill allows the host to use thei...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 7: Translation Skill and Fighting Ring [First Draft]

 

[Welcome to [The Grand System Auction]'s waiting room. You have five minutes to prepare a mask and other various concealment items if you wish to hide your identity. All of these items will protect your true identity as system-bought or earned skills, items and traits will not see through them.

Once you are ready, please step through the door which you would prefer.]


Rose was just staring at her new laptop's centre screen w...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 131: Swind's Self-Hate and Energy Absorption [First Draft]

 

"Rachel..." Swind muttered as he sat next to the perfectly still and peaceful looking young girl who was actually eight years his elder.

The two of them were in one of the many rooms that belonged to the lodging cabin in Eolande's Glade.

Ever since they returned to the world tree, Swind hadn't left her side. He'd been patiently waiting for Lone to arrive and see what he could figure out about Rachel's soul and hopefully repair it.

Swind wasn't sure what tim...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 6: Alien Laptop and Dice Set [First Draft]


Rose was at the outdoor area of Bobby's Trashy Cookhouse enjoying a chocolate-filled croissant and a hot chocolate with marshmallows in it. Her table was empty save for her breakfast and, of course, her laptop that had a simple game of 3D chess being displayed on it.

"Hmm? Daz? Good morning," Rose absentmindedly said when she noticed her brother approaching her. It took a second, but she did realise that his halo was different now. "Interesting."

Daz grinn...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 130: Skill Gains and Garadia's Confusion [First Draft]

A/N: Reminder note about Soph/Sophie:  

Soph is the childish and shy one
Sophie is the violent and paranoid one 


Lone and Hazel's groups were now inside the outsider manor on standby. If all went according to plan, then they'd be able to hide in here for a few days and relax.

Worst-case scenario, the Taslo Empire weren't the ones in charge of the petrified triple-x-rankers and their army was still on its way. In that event, Lone would be informed via ...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 5: Holy Cross and Gambit's Signet [First Draft]



[Fruit of Luck [S-Rank (Higher Tier)]

Description

A fruit cultivated over the span of three decades by the prophetic clan of Fate Worshippers situated in the Sitronian Desert of Gug'la.

A fruit that's small, edible, a weird colour AND boosts your powers... Isn't this a Devil Fruit?!

Stats

Ripeness: Max

Durability: 25...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 129: XXX-ranker Army and Petrified [First Draft]

A/N: Almost onto the long-awaited Academy book now! I've been looking forward to this a lot. Just gotta wrap up this book and tie some loose ends. 


"Heh... So Headmaster Erion didn't like that little stunt we pulled?" Lone joked after hearing the kids' reason for coming to find him and Soph.

Emma cocked her head to one side. "Eh? What stunt? He just said that you guys showed him some hostility or something. Dunno how though, considering how far you guys are fr...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 4: Private School and Racial Change [First Draft]

 

Unfortunately, despite how much he really wanted to 'play' with Madison for the full hour, after thirty minutes, Daz had to call it quits. Both he and Maddy had to prepare a few things before the auction, him in particular, so he couldn't exactly run out the clock.

The two had parted ways after a quick shared shower. The first thing Daz did after that was get his merit points from the bank.


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Desmond The Demilich Prologue Teaser

A/N: Thoughts in the comments please! I really wanna write this story, so if you could be honest with likes and comments, let me know if you'd read this. I might be able to make it a weekly series with 1 chapter every week without affecting SIS or LTW. 



"No! This wasn't how it was supposed to go!" The Calamity of The Northern Continent screamed into the face of his most-trusted friend turned most-hated enemy.

Eta scoffed. "You're right. I'm only sorry th...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 128: Biting Fingers and Biting Words [First Draft]

 

Lone absorbed all of the energy in two of the mana orbs and most of the energy in a third to max out his mana points. Swind and Eolande had only been given ten mana orbs to fill and he was wondering if he should send them back out to fill more in a few minutes since Eolande, Lipsilk and Soph has rock-bottom or absolutely no mana as well.

Placing the dust of the two drained and now shattered mana orbs in his inventory, Lone put one of his hands on Soph's head and the other j...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 3: Steven's Approaches and Poor Timing [First Draft]

 

Tall, sharp looks, a trimmed stubble, short and wavy blonde hair which had clearly been styled, an ear-piercing in his left ear, low-hanging and almost lazy eyes. Dark skin, but not quite black. Perhaps from mixed parents. His clothes were nice. If Daz had to hanker at a guess, maybe designer brand. He'd never cared much about fashion anyway, so he wasn't sure.

The man sauntered into the throne room and only stopped when he was a few feet away from the throne itself. H...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 127: A Love of Cuteness and A Bucket of Blood [First Draft]

 

Emma was the first to react by shrugging. "It's just contract magic, right? We can remove it if we need to. Not saying we will, but the option's there."

Lone shook his head. "It's one of my special powers." He thought for a second before coming to a decision. "Since Hazel is here, there's not much point in hiding it. Another one of my unique skills is called The Summoning Room. It's basically a pocket dimension that can't be accessed by anyone except my contracted...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 2: Sally and Rimmy's Fans [First Draft]

 

A middle-aged woman slowly entered the throne room being led by one of the keep servants. She was moving so slowly and so carefully, that it was obvious to all that she was a bit nervous.

Her beige skirt was quite frilly for her age, but it worked well with her loosely tucked button shirt. Her fashion sense reminded Daz of Madison's a bit, though he had to admit, this woman was far less attractive than his girlfriend was. No fault of her own since Madison was a high bar to ...

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SIS Book 3 Chapter 1: Grave Butchering and Completed Records [First Draft]

 

Daz opened his eyes and was met with the sight of a toothy grin. He was only in his boxers and a mist covered graveyard filled his surroundings. "Hi, Cecil."

"Howdy, Buddy," the old man with a straw hat replied. For once, he wasn't sitting on a tombstone doing his back in. He had actually balanced his regular-looking shovel between two graves and was using it as a chair.

Cecil cackled a bit. "Ya look a bit different. Nice halo, by the way. Really brings out yer eyes."...

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SIS Book 3 Prologue: Venice and Plans [First Draft]

 

Davido awoke from his slumber and stretched his body. He didn't even cast a glance at the foreign beauty laying in the sheets by his side. He simply left the bed, stretched lightly and walked out onto the terrace. He looked down at the sparkling city of Venice. His eyes were full of mystery as he smirked.

A thought that he had been having ever since the very first day of the system's tests entered his mind once again. 'The second the system allowed us to purchase b...

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SIS Book 2 Epilogue: A Thank You and First-time Lust [First Draft]

 

Daz met up with his other clone and dismissed it. The second clone seemed to have no distinct personality... yet. He was hopeful that it would never manifest one, but if it did, Daz made sure to make a note to come up with some plans for it depending on what parts it loaned from him. Immediately upon the clone's departure, a system message appeared in the young man's field of view, begging for his attention.


[Congratulations! The host has learned a new pa...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 126: Contracts and Awkward Siblings [First Draft]

 

The one to break the awkward silence was Lipsilk. He had just entered the tent with the returning Swind and Eolande and he immediately felt the oppressiveness in the air. There was tension here, and not the good kind. "Am I walking in on something I perhaps shouldn't be?"

Lone peeled his eyes away from his sister and looked at the Fairy. "It's fine. Her Highness?"

"In tears. She took it better than I did, but she's still a mess. Al'ka is equally shaken. Ele'hunda was ...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 125: Retelling History and The Death of Mr McCullen [First Draft]

[Congratulations! The host's passive skill [Acting] has levelled up! It is now Intermediate Level 2.]


[Congratulations! The host's passive skill [Acting] has levelled up! It is now Intermediate Level 3.]


[Congratulations! The host's passive skill [Acting] has levelled up! It is now Intermediate Level 4.]


[Congratulations! The host's passive skill [Acting] has level...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 124: A King's Veneration and a Sister's Self-doubting [First Draft]

 

Lone's group returning to the camp of the general army, creating an uproar of joy among the soldiers. Ythmagobla's corpse couldn't be seen, but their presence was proof enough of a victory.

Lipsilk was in the middle of a conversation with General Sal'ta and the other generals of the army. Most of its contents didn't interest Lone, but a two sentences gave his mind a vast sense of relief.

"We, unfortunately, couldn't witness the finale of Lord Immortus' and the da...

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$500 Reward Chapters Schedule

First off, I hope everyone had a great time over the holidays regardless of your beliefs and what you celebrate!

Now, onto the schedule. I've managed to finish up all of the reward chapters, but I don't want to flood my patreon with them since patreon isn't exactly ideal for posting in bulk. My plan in to post the three due LTW chapters shortly, and then the three SIS chapters tomorrow.

Hopefully, this keeps things from getting confusing, or at least, too confusing.

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