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SIS Book 2 Chapter 35: Sister and Parents [First Draft]

 

Daz, now ten-years-old, had been called back to the family house by his father for an unknown reason. He calmly walked through the hallways of the mansion by himself as the servants and maids ignored him entirely.

'At this point, I wonder what that bastard wants? Can't he just leave m in peace with Maddy? I'll marry that girl, Aila, and endure his torture, but does he really need to make me come back here only to see him?' Daz thought with spite clouding his mind. View Post

LTW Book 3 Chapter 76: Skills and Confession [First Draft]

 

It had been almost four months since then, and a lot had changed. For starters, everyone possessed more strength now, some, more than others.

Lone was at the bottleneck to becoming an A-ranker and just needed a little push to cross the gap. Breena herself had already become a B-ranker with the help of the spirit essence which she'd completely used up now.

Swind had managed to become a G-ranker only six days ago, but everyone was still proud enough of him to throw a litt...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 75: Gift and Partners [First Draft]

 

Swind approached Lone curiously and gently took the arm from him. "... This-ss is-ss?"

"It's your arm. No need to hesitate, put it on," Lone urged with a pleasant smile on his face.

Swind did as instructed, and held the arm next to his stump of a shoulder. Before he could lock it in place with the leather straps, it snapped to life and a surge of energy entered Swind's brain.

"Ah," Lone called out. "The straps aren't needed. You can move the arm with your mind, though ...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 34: Departure and Return [First Draft]

 

"He actually won?" Adam said with a dumbstruck expression on his face as he stared at Sek's clone that was slowly walking down the crater.

He, Ben, and Commander Zach were waiting anxiously at the entrance to the inner city with forty survivors and their remaining six tanks. They were ready for the worst, but it would seem that the impossible had happened and Sek and Crusher had actually succeeded.

Sek's clone stopped just before he reached their forces. "The original t...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 74: Missions and Arm [First Draft]

A/N: There is a system message in this chapter that hasn't appeared in the story thus far, and that is because it is one I plan to add during the rewrite and it is only in the 5th chapter of book 1's rewrite thus far.


Sophie stroked Kyuubi's fur as the two of them walked behind her team. The mission they had been assigned, was to inspect the great barrier that shielded the world tree and to ensure that there weren't any signs of invaders planning on attacking the tree.

It...

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Two Updates

I was finally given the option to change my payment system to charge up front. Don't worry though, this WILL NOT affect you at all and you will still only be charged once per month. I only changed it to this to prevent samplers, you know, people that become patrons only to dip on the 30th or 31st to avoid payment.


I finally got around to adding discord roles on my discord server. Basically, you get a fancy role and access to an exclusive channel that will have links to the most rece...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 33: Snapping and Deal [First Draft]

 Edward was panicking. 'Fuck! I didn't know they were this strong! Harriot should have just used her identification on them even if they could detect it! Then, we could have at least left them alone and waited a few more days...'

His eyes glanced at the seated Crusher and he frowned deeply. 'There's no way that we can fight both of them at once. I don't know why, but if she's planning on not getting involved, then maybe we have a chance!'

Jo, who was stan...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 73: Elestia and Luckful [First Draft]

 

"So where are these Darkness monsters?" Lone asked as he and his team followed Tal'hat'mata down the wooden hallway.

When he waited for a reply, he glanced at the message from the system which had appeared, confirming that they were all, indeed, within the world tree's dungeon.


The user has entered the dungeon: Elestia's Heart

Description

Created by the joint effort of the Western World Tree, Elestia, and the ...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 32: Rebirth and Hand-cannon [First Draft]

 "Hey, Boss," a tall man with a black mohawk shouted as he walked towards Edwards. Thankfully they were all hidden in a building that was a few hundred feet away from the city of Middletown, so his loud voice didn't bring with it the risk of being detected before they launched their attack.

"Yes, Jo?" Edward replied stoically as he kept his eyes peeled on the M1 Abrams that was still slowly making its way out of the city's boundaries.

"Ain't we gonna steal that tank? Seem a waste to...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 72: Prejudices and Core [First Draft]

 

King Ele'hunda held his chin as he stared at the piece of paper in his hand. There was a frown on his face and he clearly seemed to be angry about something.

He tore his eyes away from the parchment and looked at his precious daughter. "Dear, order Al'ka to investigate Elder Shan'len thoroughly," he requested without the power that his voice usually contained.

"Did he do something wrong?" Her Highness asked. She wasn't very aware of the inner politics of the council and her ...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 31: M1 Abrams and Bonus [First Draft]

Baetylus [S-Rank (Middle Tier)]

Description

The corpse of a powerful celestial being that lived its life as a meteor until crashing onto a planet and going on a rampage in its final moments.

Sold off to the system at a young age, this Baetylus was unable to fully mature before being forced to crash onto a planet for the sake of an experiment.

This body can be processed and turned into powerful S-rank armou...

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Reward Update

 Just added another early chapter for LTW to the $10 tier. 

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 71: Awkwardness and Problem-Child [First Draft]

 

Eko and Sophie had been left with their external leader, Letmir Alost'ra, at the Blue team's headquarters, and the three of them were sat in a waiting room as they waited for the other two members, Falin and Tathaln Omatoris to arrive.

Letmir was a petite High Elven woman with swept back auburn hair and she had a very serious expression on her face.

'I can't believe I got promoted so soon... These kids though, to think that they became Blue team keepers straigh...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 70: Teams and Herbs [First Draft]

 

Lone and Sophie were the last to arrive after having been summoned by Letty, and everyone noticed that there was a certain atmosphere around the small girl and nine-tailed Foxkin. This was made especially obviously by Sophie, who was clinging tightly to Lone's waist with a massive grin on her lips as the two approached.

Eolande couldn't help but sigh internally at this blatant display of affection. 'Would you look at that, they only ended up getting closer... Well, t...

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LTW Artwork: Sophie On Her Barrier

Finally time to deliver on my artwork promise. xD

Please ignore the wonky left leg. I tried my best to tell the artist over and over again that it looked wrong, but he eventually gave up and this took literally close to 4 months since he had no motivation to fix it.

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 30: Scouts and Bunker [First Draft]

 

After exchanging a few light conversations with Daz and Crusher, Sean decided to go to sleep, leaving the two powerhouses alone in the large living room.

"So, Lord," Crusher called Daz as she grabbed a biscuit from the coffee table in front of her and stuffed it into her mouth, "What's the plan here?" she asked.

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 69: Frustrations and Euphoria [First Draft]

A/N: The end of the chapter is very sexual and not safe for work.


 

The rest of that day was spent very peacefully. Swind and Breena both ended up drinking some of their spirit essence. Swind could only drink half of his first bottle before he felt full. This was a sign of reaching the bottleneck for his rank, so given enough enlightenment, it wouldn't be long until The Wanderers would welcome their first G-ranker.

Breena, on the other hand, had to consume...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 29: Crater and Edward [First Draft]

 

Daz continued driving through the border of the city after Rocky had returned to the car and he was shocked by what he could see. 

Almost the entire outskirt was full of nothing but empty and partially destroyed buildings that only had the jewelled lamps to illuminate them with. As far as he could tell, the roads had manually been cleared of debris and cars to make room for travel.

The thing that surprised Daz the most was that the centre of the city which they were now...

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Reward Update

Just added another early chapter for SIS to the $10 tier.

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 28: Benjamin and Trench [First Draft]

 

After having checked all of Adam's skills and inspecting his class and race, the young Reaper concluded that, while the man was very capable, he wasn't a threat to Daz nor to Crusher. With that confirmed, he moved on to inspecting the childish and energetic Rocky.


Benjamin Rock's Status

Basic Information

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Race: Ruby Sentinal

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 68: Void and Licking [First Draft]

 

"Well, now that that's out of the way, Eolande, do you mind helping me enter my mind again?" Lone asked, completely defusing the prior atmosphere.

Sophie puffed up her cheeks and dragged Lone to a sofa before she forced him to sit down and then placed herself on top of him. "Do it like this," the small girl filled with jealousy ordered Eolande.

Swind had a curious look on his face. 'So this is a form of jealousy, not just embarrassment? Very interesting.'<...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 27: HUMV and Smoke [First Draft]

 

Daz and Crusher were now on the highway in the M939 truck and they were slowly snaking their way through the many car wreckages which littered the road.

"I wonder why all of these vehicles are just lying around all over the place," Crusher said as she peeked her head out of the window.

"Can't you see the bodies? Obviously, they panicked when they saw the first blue screen from the system," Daz explained as he kept his eyes on the road. He was still an inexperienced driv...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 67: Bronze and Growling [First Draft]

 

"So this is spirit essence?" Lone mumbled as he closely inspected the small spiralled vial that was in his hand.

It was half full of a pure white and almost milky substance that radiated raw energy. Sophie was sat on his lap and she was staring at the small bottle with wonder in her eyes much like Lone was.

The two had returned to their housing along with the rest of their companions after the tests had ended and they were told that they would be notified tomorrow by their t...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 26: Food and Concoction [First Draft]

 

As Daz had expected, Fiona happily accepted his proposal. While she was currently on the track to becoming morally corrupt, her affinity was still labelled as 'good' for now and she was an impressionable teen who loved art.

Fiona had always wanted to show her work to others, but due to her secluded lifestyle, the only person that ever got the chance to appreciate her hobby was her father, and obviously, he didn't have the time to grant his daughter the attention she needed and des...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 66: Losers and Winners [First Draft]

 

After having watched Sophie's display of raw power, everyone was left speechless and even the now pride-filled Demon Princess was frightened of Sophie's capabilities.

As soon as the final match between the two started, the Demon Princess simple admitted defeat. Despite her newfound arrogance, she knew that her legendary greatsword couldn't match up against so much magical energy. Everything had limits, after all, even an ability to nullify magic.

It was fortunate for Sophie ...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 25: Changes and Entertainer [First Draft]

 

Daz grasped the situation quickly  and replied to the four-armed man, "I'm new to the system, so if it's not a bother, could you answer some questions for me?"

"Absolutely, Sir Reaver. That is my job and my honour," with a bow, the man answered humbly.

"Okay." Daz collected his thoughts and asked, "First, why can't I see anyone's faces except for you employees? I'm assuming you're an employee, by the way. Correct me if I'm wrong, please."

"Very astute, Sir Re...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 65: Caravel and Guildmaster [First Draft]

 

Two Dwarves and a single Dragonkin were sat on the beach of an island unfamiliar to them. The older Dwarf, Grimsley, stood up and grabbed a stone before tossing it into the ocean. It skipped along the water twenty-four times before it finally sank.

"Excellent throw," Gilbert, the Dragonkin praised with a deadpan expression on his face.

"A've been workin' on my arms lately since ye've been forcin' me te learn how te use a war'ammer," Grimsley shrugged.

The elderly ...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 24: Foot and Bank [First Draft]

 "Was that Crusher just now?" a mildly confused Jorden asked the twins, Sarah and Ellie.

The three had been practising their skills near Heather's pond when the massive Titan form of Crusher had suddenly jumped over the wall, astonishing them.

"... Should we go check?" the adventurous Sarah replied with as much uncertainty in her voice as was in Jorden's.

The young girlish boy, Jorned, and her twin, Ellie, both nodded in agreement, so they made their way up onto the outer...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 23: Titan and Chips [First Draft]

 

Daz planted the copied law sign at the centre of the cabins that housed his citizens in the outer fort. Naturally, several people saw him do this and went up to investigate.

Sandy was one of the people that came to check out what Daz had done and nodded his head while he held his chin. "the kiddo's mellowed out a bit if he's changed it this much. Maybe I should treat him to some of my 'special' tobacco tonight?"

Bobby was stood next to him and frowned. "Lunchtime's over, San...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 64: Healer and Blades [First Draft]

 

Thankfully for Lone, the fights proceeded smoothly and the third round ended almost as soon as it had begun after his 'fight' with Sophie.

Since the third round only had thirty-two participants in it, there were a total of sixteen battles.

Out of the people that interested Lone, Breena was the first to fight. Thankfully, her opponent was very lucky thus far and had managed to fight the weakest of the Elves consecutively, resulting in Breena being able to win without any trou...

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