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LTW Book 3 Chapter 51: Demon and Changeling [First Draft]

 

"This place is really empty, huh?" Lone said as he looked around the Manor that was supposedly home for the new Keepers.

Letty, who had commandeered Kyuubi's back, much to the dismay of Eolande, scoffed and lazily replied, "Of course it is. It's only the afternoon, so the new Keepers are busy going through tests or working hard to maintain the World Tree."

Eolande glared at Kyuubi's comfortable back and sighed. 'To think that so many Fairies of such strength were hi...

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Announcement.

As stated on RRL, from this point on, I will be doing 2 chapters per week for both stories but the work count will be going up to at least 2,000 per chapter. Chapter 7 of SIS is sitting at 2,218 words and is the largest chapter ever for either of these stories.

Please let me know how you feel about this change and if the chapter felt better if you have $10 access and can read chapter 7 of SIS.

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 7: Barracks and Smithy [First Draft]

 

Daz and Ellie made their way to the exterior of Fort Skip and the two separated. Ellie had to focus on using her merit points since she had been too worried about Daz to spend the majority of them until now, and with his encouragement, she was planning to repair and upgrade the Makrov Mark V Automaton that she now possessed as much as her points would allow her.

Daz spent a total of two thousand and five-hundred merit points along with two-hundred and fifty base points to repair b...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 6: Rebuilding and Status [First Draft]

 

Daz and Ellie made their way down the ramparts, and before long, the two were stood in front of the small cabin that was partially destroyed by the final Automaton boss. Ten men and woman were busily moving as Sandy directed them. "I noticed in the afternoon, but I'm glad Sandy jumped on this immediately. If he can get it fixed by hand, then I don't need to waste merit and base points on repairing or replacing it," Daz commented.

Ellie smiled from his side and added, "There was a ...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 50: Letty and King [First Draft]

 

"So, Tal'hat'mata, mmm, that name's a mouthful for a non-native speaker like myself, can I just call you Tal?" Lone asked the Elven beauty as his group followed her through the luxurious city that expanded through the World Tree's branches.

Sophie suddenly tugged at Lone's sleeve and looked up at his face. Her eyes scared the powerful Foxkin. 'No. Nicknames.' she demanded icily via telepathy.

"Ah, er, scratch that. I guess I'll j...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 49: Sickness and Tal'hat'mata [First Draft]

 

"Is this the top? Why didn't Lipsilk bring us here directly?" Lone asked after he rubbed his eyes are adjusted himself to the sudden change in locations. For some reason, he felt queasy and abruptly fell to his knees before violently vomiting.

In fact, everyone did the same except for Sophie, Al'ka, Her Highness and, oddly enough, Kyuubi. Naturally, Sophie was fine since she was more than accustomed to teleporting and had long gotten used to the burden it put on the body. On the o...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 5: Lightning and Need [First Draft]

 

In the Richies room in their shared cabin, Ger approached and sat next to Ellie who had her head down and was staring at the floor. "Ellie, what's wrong? You've been sulking here all morning. Shouldn't you be happy now that Daz is awake again?" Ger asked as he put a hand on his upset daughter's back.

"Mmm," Ellie weakly replied with little-to-no enthusiasm in her voice.

Ger rubbed his temple and sighed. "This is about Madison, isn't it? Or is it about your skill that you hav...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 48: Portal and Interval [First Draft]

 

"This is amazing," Lone exclaimed as he looked at the city that was sprawled out before him. Inside of the World Tree lay a massive settlement of Wood Elves, as made obvious by the curved and wooden styled homes and buildings. However, Lone was aware that many races called the trunk of this World Tree their home due to being hand-picked to be World Tree Keepers like in Rachel's case. The whole concept of having a town like this inside of a tree genuinely excited Lone.

"Impressed?"...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 4: Cute and Tower [First Draft]

A/N: I've been very busy this week trying to set myself up as self-employed with financial support from an enterprise to fill in what I'm not earning from here to survive off of. (Not complaining, love you all. Just explaining why there was so little activity from me this week.)



Congratulations. Thought seed [Alliance with Fort Skip] successfully implanted into host [Greg Miller].


Daz heaved a breath of relief when this notifica...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 3: Watermelon and Whiskey [First Draft]

 A/N: This chapter took me way to long to write and I kept getting stuck so this will be the last chapter of the week. Hopefully, I can do three per story next week. Sorry about this.


"Seriously, where is everyone?" Daz asked rhetorically as he and Madison carefully made their way through Camp Waterford. 

Daz would be lying if he said that he wasn't tempted to steal some of the vehicles and weapons using this opportunity, but he had to hold himself back. 'I'...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 47: Itchy and Plans [First Draft]

 A/N: Bit of a short one. One of the characters here is very hard to understand. Try to figure out what he said by the other character's thoughts and responses please.


A darkly lit and seemingly abandoned mineshaft was currently being disturbed by the slithering of a very panicked Unhcegila, a very unique and thought to be extinct sub-species of the famous Water Dragons.

Such creatures were widely hunted several millions of years ago for the power the ...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 46: Lipsilk and Ythmagobla [First Draft]

 

"So this is a World Tree, huh?" Lone marvelled at the sight before him.

A trunk so large you couldn't even see the end of it. It was like looking at a never-ending wall of bark. If Lone craned his neck, he could see that the tree went up limitlessly as well. It truly was a sight to behold. Perhaps more importantly though, Lone could feel a wealth of energy in the air. 

"Impressed?" Al'ka asked from his side.

"Yeah...it's really something." Lone wasn't the only one...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 2: Gestures and Broken [First Draft]

 

Dorian tossed and turned in his bed sheets. 'I can't sleep.'

He was naturally too anxious. It had nearly been two and a half days now, but he still couldn't fall asleep. His mind wouldn't allow him. Dorian finally gave up trying and he threw his duvet across the room in anger. 

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 45: Oars and Youths [First Draft]

 

Somewhere in an unknown ocean, two Dwarfs and a Purity Dragonkin were sat in a rowboat while the older Dwarf of the two rowed it calmly. He seemed to be enjoying himself as he watched his Purity Dragonkin friend sweat while talking to a relative over the communication orb that they owned.

"Yes, Uncle. I understand, Uncle. I'm sorry, Uncle. Yes, I'm safe, Uncle." Gilbert looked tired. Out of nowhere, his uncle, Brahman Elksworth, has contacted him via the communication orb Lone had...

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An update.

As you might have read on RRL, I am taking a couple of days to unwind and relax. There will only be 1 LTW chapter this week and maybe 1 more for SIS. For more information, see here.

Sorry for this. Everything will be back to normal on Monday. c:

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 1: Beater and Titan [First Draft]

 

"Are you sure you won't be staying with us? A lunatic like him doesn't deserve someone as brave as you by his side," General Miller said to Crusher, who had just woken up after several hours of sleep.

Crusher grinned before replying, "He has a few loose screws, but he's a nice enough guy and his heart's in the right place. I can't fault him for making a few mistakes...after all, we all make mistakes, don't we? hahaha!"

General Miller looked bitter at hearing C...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 44: Flames and Victim [First Draft]

 Fire Magic Skill: Flame Cloak

Allows the User to gather the prime essence of the Fire Magic affinity and use it to cloak the User in flames, boosting all Fire Magic by 15%.

Cost: 500 MP (per second)

Mastery: Beginner Level 1


Fire Magic Skill: Fireball

Allows the Host to gather the prime essence of the Fire Magic affinity and use it to create a ve...

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SIS Book 2 Prologue: Aila and Punishment [First Draft]

A/N: A bit short, but it is the prologue, so apologies for that. 


A young boy, no older than six, got out of his luxurious bed and dressed himself. He had an expressionless look on his plain face and he looked very bored with everything. Once he was properly clothed, the boy left him room and began walking through the lavishly decorated mansion in which he lived.

'I'm supposed to be choosing one today, aren't I? How stupid. I can't help but think they're all idiots fo...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 43: Gluttony and Counter [First Draft]

 

Lone instantly knew he couldn't dodge or block the one-hundred fireballs, so he channelled his mana into Dawn and created several lighting waves, each of which built up behind him to create an even more powerful lightning wave. 

Lone didn't possess Rachel's level of magical control nor mana points, so he could only make a total of seven lightning waves before he was at his limit.

Rachel wasted no more time and lowered her hand, resulting in all one-hundred fireballs of ...

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SIS Book 1 Epilogue: Puzzle and Dream [First Draft]

 

Ellie stalked off the ramparts with a downcast look on her face. She didn't speak any further and just left without saying any further words. Madison looked at her curiously. "New Girlfriend?" she asked with a tilt of her head, making her look particularly cute.

Daz looked at her strangely. Madison had a curious and almost blank look on her face as she hugged Daz. "You really are very strange. But that's what I like about you."

Madison slowly raised her hands and held D...

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Another Announcement.

Hey! I'm going to try to commission at least 1 piece of artwork per month or per second month and all of you lovely patrons will get access to any of that artwork 1 month before the public will on RRL!

Just figured that since I lowered the goal rewards, that I should increase the monthly rewards!

The first pieces of artwork should be ready in about two weeks. They will be character art of Sophie from LTW and Daz from SIS (if everything goes to plan).

Love you all. <3

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 96: Struggle and Madison [First Draft]

 "No, don't buy it yet. System, please show me the skill first," Daz replied to the system's confirmation window. The system complied and displayed the skill to Daz.


Death Energy Solidification [A-Rank (Higher Tier)]

Description

A rare skill unique to Reapers which allows them to mould their own Death Energy into a physical substance. It was created by the famous Reaper and Necromancer, Abos Maloy, in an effort to create cl...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 42: Exaggerations and Flames [First Draft]

 

"I see...so you will be taking both of them?" Lossa said to Al'ka and the Elven woman who were both sat across from her.

Al'ka nodded his head. "That's right, Clan Elder. Naturally, we won't treat Miss Rachel any worse than we plan to treat Lone. And we would like to restate that it is our absolute honour to welcome an esteemed eight-tailed Crimson Foxkin to our ranks as World Tree Keepers."

"That certainly is a relief. And this will establish an alliance between our two fac...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 95: Tears and Hope [First Draft]

 

Daz slowly opened his eyes. 'Where am I?'

He looked around in a bit of a daze. 'This is my room...I...I'm not dead? How?'

Daz tried to shift his body up to get a better look at his surroundings, but he found it to be exceedingly difficult to move. 'What the...?' It was then that he saw his left arm and leg, well, more accurately, he couldn't see them at all.

"Ha...ha...ha...How am I alive? Wouldn't it have been better if I...

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Announcement.

I have edited the goals to be more realistic since I struggle to write more than my usual 6 chapters per week (3 per fic). 

To summarise the changes, my end goal for the $10 tier is now 12 early chapters, not 17, and the $1,000 goal reward of a new tier being added has been lowered from 30 early chapters to 20 early chapters, however, the planned price for this fourth tier has also been lowered from $20 to $15. 

Sorry about this. This simply makes it far more doable for me. Not...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 41: Strings and Rachel [First Draft]

 

Lone was stunned after having heard what weapon Swind wanted to train in. His chosen weapon was strings. How was Lone supposed to teach him anything related to fighting with strings? Lone had a very basic understanding of sword fighting and spear fighting while Eolande was well versed in illusion magic and Breena had a rudimentary understanding of daggers. However, not even any of Lone's books mentioned how to fight with something as unorthodox as strings.

Lone had asked Swin...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 94: Defeat and Slice [First Draft]

 

The two gargantuan Automatons immediately began charging their lasers. Daz wasted no time and got Rimmy to throw him even though the lasers took roughly thirty seconds to charge up.

"SHOVEL SMASH!" The blood-red Hamson crashed into the thick and impenetrable metal arm, moving it slightly away from its original position. However, Daz wasn't done yet. 

Daz used his high Agility to twist his body mid-air and he threw Hamson with as much strength as he could straight i...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 40: History and Scarf [First Draft]

A/N: Decided to name the pagoda where Tiera and Trella's parents were the Pagoda of Passing. This is also a bit of an expo heavy chapter, but we're done with all the talking and what not for now....I think?


 

Lossa spent the next two hours explaining everything to Lone. Whenever he had a question, she would have an answer. It was a very boring scene for Sophie, so she obviously decided to do the most logical thing. She went to sleep using Lone's tails as her duvet and his...

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SIS Book 1 Chapter 93: Plan and Deadlift [First Draft]

Daz saw that the Tank class Automaton was ignoring him and readjusted its arm before it began charging it's laser once more. "Crusher!" he yelled.

"What?!" she screamed back. Just like Daz, she was anxious and felt like the destruction of Fort Skip was imminent.

"Whatever you do, don't kill the last normal Robot! It might turn into a second one of these fuckers!" Daz roared. He was struggling to think up a solution to dealing with one Tank class Automaton, the last thing he felt lik...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 39: Binding and Acceptance [First Draft]

 

"You can't seriously be expecting me to eat my own footwear, could you?" For once in his life, Brahman Elksworth, a worldwide famous soul oracle, was nervous.

"Lone-ro, please show some respect for Lord Elksworth. He is still a very important person, after all," Lossa requested.

Lone wobbled up to his feet while Sophie supported him and he waved his hand. "No matter. I was unjustified in my provocations earlier as well. I can see that he's an arrogant old man who's seen...

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