Beta read by n1ch, Shigiya, Solitary heart and 8kagi
Super small chapter, sorry about that, though next one will be longer.
Edit 1: Beta read and added a few more hundred words.
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I was back.
In the small room in the dark, two chairs in the middle where a familiar-looking person was waiting for me with a sketchpad in hand. The table in the middle h...
Beta read by Darklord331 and DOOMRAIDER.
Next update is Snafu, tomorrow.
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-Train stop-
As we reached our final destination, the train's rail wheel screeched itself to a slow halt. It was dark outside already, the journey didn't last as long as I expected.
People pushed their way toward the door and out onto a tiny, dark platform like a pack of sheep. I decided to wait a bit and not get accidentally s...
Yo,
Welp, here's the full sketch I got from the artist, final version should be done before the 10th or on the 10th.
So more or less a week.
If the results turns out to be better than the first art, I'll commission my future works with him again.
By the way, for some of y'all l curious of this scene, it's from chapter 11 when Hikigaya went to the back of the school to have lunch alone but got caught by Akeno anyways.
Beta read by Shigiya and DOOMRAIDER.
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Beta read by Shigiya and DOOMRAIDER.
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-Hogwarts Express-
One thing I learned about Hermione was that the girl talked fast. She also spoke quite eloquently for a child her age, each word coming out of her mouth being related to coursebooks, spells and charms like a non-stop machine gun. The entire time I just smiled and nodded my head, pretending to have unders...
Beta read by Shigiya and DOOMRAIDER.
More will be added later on, I feel like this chapter was a bit too short
Edit 1: More content added.
Edit 2: Beta read and added a few detail
Edit 3: Reworked
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-Malfoy Manor-
-Lucius PoV-
He ...
Beta read by n1ch, Shigiya, Solitary heart and 8kagi
As promised, here's the chapter. A bit shorter than usual but next one will be longer.
Edit 1: Beta read
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-Ken-
Archer did many things he wasn't exactly proud of in his life.
Killing an entire city to eliminate a handful of terrorists. Condemning the innocent to an early death from a reality they couldn't control. Doing the same to another city in moder...
Beta read by Shigiya and DOOMRAIDER.
New chapter got done sooner than I expected.
An archer's promise Chapter 13 will be posted today's as well.
Edit 1: Beta read
Edit 1: Rewritten and corrected.
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Whoever said that the afterlife is a peaceful haven, filled with everything we could ever desire was a bloody liar.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAARRRGHHH!!!!"
The pain filled scree...
Beta read by n1ch, Shigiya, Solitary heart and 8kagi
It's a loooooong chapter.
More edits will be added later on.
Edit 1: more than +200 different edits changes done by Shigiya, so round of applause for him, he worked hard for this one.
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-Kuoh-
After I had temporarily paralyzed Kiba, I brought him with me t...
Finally, it's here!
I got the final version not even five minutes ago and I must say... It's beautiful.
This does gives me more ideas for future reference drawing I will comission.
Now that An archer's promise art is done, it's time to focus on my Snafu X DxD one.
Forgot to add, this is all done with your support, and I would like to thank y'all once again!
Beta read by Shigiya and DOOMRAIDER.
Hey y'all, I was scrolling though my old files in Google docs and stumbled on this story I made about 2 years ago.
I decided to post it after retouching most of it with my current writing level and voila.
Honestly, don't know why I'm posting it.
If ya like it, maybe I'll continue writing without changing my schedule for my other stories.
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Beta read by n1ch, Shigiya, Solitary heart and 8kagi
Edit 1: Forgot to send the file to beta reader so it couldn't get beta read; sorry! Anyways, it's done and I remembered to send this chapter and the next one to my beat readers.
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-Kakeri Village-
(Midnight)
In the dead of night, the mayor and the house servants had gone ...
Hey, y'all!
Got an update of the art. The final version should be done this month.
Hope ya like it, cause there is a lot more to come in the future.
Beta read by n1ch, Shigiya, Solitary heart and 8kagi
Aight, chapter came earlier than I thought, but couldn't stop writing and then realised, "Hey, I just wrote an entire chapter without knowing it."
Yeah I was very bored today.
Anyways, yes Hicks is an existing character of Kuroinu. Even added that mf face up there, even if I didn't want to. He's the one who went after Alicia.
Edit 1: Beta...
beta read by n1ch, Shigiya, Solitary heart and 8kagi
More edits and content will be added soon.
Edit 1: Beta read and added 200 more words.
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(Flashback)
"Aaaaaaaahhh!"
I was running for my life in a dark and hellish-looking dimension while being chased by a psychotic Irish woman; who was also laughing at my screams of terror.
That would be an apt description of the few days I spent in Scàth...
Yo, how are y'all doing?
So, I've been writing the soon to come snafu chapter and thought of something that needed your opinion.
If Kiba wasn't blinded with rage and kept a calm mind, who he have been able to defeat Xenovia when they first met? Or defeat Irina if he battled her instead?
2022-05-19 18:49:17 +0000 UTC View PostBeta read by n1ch, Shigiya, Solitary heart and 8kagi
Alright, next update will be Snafu with all of its changes added to tomorrow.
If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to talk to me on discord.
Edit 1: Beta read
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-Unknown area-
His head hurt like hell.
That's what Freed was feeling the moment he regained ...
Beta read by n1ch, Shigiya, Solitary heart and 8kagi
More contents will be added later on. Like a lot more, maybe 500+ words.
And boy it's been awhile, nearly a month.
Hopefully, next chapter doesn't take a month.
Edit 1: Added more words and beta read.
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-Train-
Tap, tap, tap, tap, tap, tap.
2022-05-16 00:33:27 +0000 UTC
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Beta read by n1ch, Shigiya, Solitary heart and 8kagi
Aight next chapter is here.
Gonna edit and add more parts to it after.
Edit 1: Added more and corrected a few mistakes. 4.4k words.
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-Grünes Bergdorf--
Archer arrived early at the outer gates of the village. The sun hadn't even come up yet and the sky was still dark. It had just been a f...
Hi y'all!
I've been seeing many mistakes in my past snafu chapters and lack of details in certain parts as well.
So just like I've don't before, I'll be dedicating this week to rework some old chapters again and improve the general story. The plot so far won't change, but the chapters will be easier to read.
1st mistake I've noticed is [Maledbolg Vritra Promotion] is a variant name Saji got with the devil pieces, so it doesn't make sense for Hachiman to have the same ...
Beta read by n1ch, Shigiya, Solitary heart and 8kagi
Again, short chapter, sorry y'all.
I'll try to add more it honestly couldn't write the next part without it becoming too long and thus becoming two chapters in one. And I felt the ending of this one was good enough.
Edit 1: Beta read and added a few more lines.
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-(Flashback)-
"Hurgh… where… where am I?"
Yo,
If you haven't noticed, I've opened a discord for all of us to have fun and talk about...stuff.
Makes it easier to talk to y'all and it's just something I had plan for awhile.
Don't know how this works but all pledges should immediately get an invite or something.
See y'all there!
Beta read by n1ch, Shigiya, Solitary heart and 8kagi
Hey guys, I have some interesting news that I'll be announcing soon, it's something I was thinking about doing for awhile. You'll know soon enough.
And about the art commissions, I'm still contacting artists and searching for other people so yeah... It gonna take some time.
Edit 1: Beta read and added 300 words
Edit 2: Corrected more errors and g...
Hey y'all!
I've been thinking lately to take the next step in my fanfic writer's journey, and that is to own an original cover art for my story.
I plan to first try it with the fate one and then the snafu followed by Broly.
But the problem is that I don't know know who to contact first. I'll be browsing fiverr for anyone who catches my interest, but if y'all know one or are one of these artists then do contact me.
The picture I posted above is the concept I'm goin...
I've getting lots of replies and reviews a about changing Prana to mana. Apparently this term is only used in fan fics rather than the original fate series.
So, y'all for I change the name to mana or keep it as is? I'll go through the previous chapters to change them if y'all vote for yes.
2022-05-04 12:43:56 +0000 UTC View PostBeta read by n1ch, Shigiya, Solitary heart and 8kagi
Next chapter is coming up this week.
More dialogue will be added cause I feel like somethings missing here. Like A LOT more dialogue. Imma sleep on this and plan for more tomorrow.
Edit 1: Beta read and added a lot more dialogue.
Edit, 2: Added a small part at the end.
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-Grünes Bergdorf-
Today was his last day in the village.
No matter how Arch...
Beta read by n1ch, Shigiya, Solitary heart and 8kagi
I had to write this in a SINGLE day. Safe to say it isn't that long but good enough.
More edits will be added later on.
Edit 1: Beta read and added more than 300 words!
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-Hachiman POV-
"That was quite bold of you, Hikigaya-san." I glanced to my side and saw Ruval talking to me, not looking the slightest bit offended or angry. Both he and his father were compl...
Aight, I'm back.
The journey was super tiring, imagine driving for 2 days in rugged terrain with no built roads aside the rocky terrains of the mountains. Couples with the fact that the one driving me to my destination was hitting the pedal full force and nearly breaking my head from hitting the car ceiling.
Yeah, it was not fun. When I finally got to my new place, my hair was super oily, my skin felt sticky and I smelled horrible.
Got a shower and lost consciousness the ...
Yo, how is everyone doing?
Quick update, I'm in the middle of moving so haven't had the time to write today, I'll reach my destination either tomorrow or after tomorrow.
Sorry for the late updates, put can't really write while on the road.
I'll be sure to at least upload the next fate chapter and Snafu chapter this week. Broly will be either on Monday. Anyways, I'm tired, need some rest.
Good night y'all!
Beta read by n1ch, Shigiya, Solitary heart and 8kagi
Wow, finally we reached this part of the story!
The freaking rating game is here!
Also, this chapter is a long one, 7k words. Hope y'all enjoy it! Imma take a rest.
Edit 1: Made a lot of edits with corrections. Added +100 words with more dialogue.
"Edit 2: Removed "last" from "last bishop " as Ravel was still ...
