Mack Zack

A Gasfelt Bond (Commission - Chapter 2)

Patty had matched with a handsome Portuguese man named Alberto from Tinder. They had gone back and forth a bit picking out a good place to eat. She liked how he was brimming with ideas and didn’t seem like the type to sit back and let her do all the thinking. On days when work tired her out, she needed someone to take the initiative.

            Alberto had recommended a Mexican restaurant called Papi’s, which was all the rage i...

A Gasfelt Bond (Commission - Chapter 1)

Patty looked around as she stepped on the porch of the quaint old store that was squeezed between an art gallery and a candle store. Hopetown was popular for its downtown full of interesting and…eclectic shops. They had fortune tellers, creeper galleries, old bookshops, and even porn shops out in the open. But the one interesting shop that often went unnoticed was “Masha’s Magick.” Usually, one was more aware of it if you had a friend who mentioned it. Otherwise, you would walk right ...

What do you think of the pacing in my writing?

I'm curious and wanted to throw this question out there. Overall, do you feel like things could get to the point faster with the burps and farts and other fetish scenes? Just the right pace? Or have my stories been too much of a slow burn for you? While this poll is asking about my writing overall, feel free to leave comments about any critiques of specific stories that stick out in your mind about the pacing.

Gamer Girl Gas - Chapter 3 (Commission)

The tournament ended with Joe beating Jacob. Overall, their growing rivalry was more or less equal at that point. Joe blushed when Amanda was the loudest person in the room rooting for him. She took notice that few people matched her energy so she toned it down and laughed awkwardly, resorting to clapping.

The Gaming Club dismissed for the week. The excitement wore down in Joe as he wound up his controller. Amanda said, “Aw, so we over already?”

“We only have the space until...

Gamer Girl Gas (Commission - Chapter 2 - FOR REAL THIS TIME)

Joe made sure to go to bed before Luke came back from the party. He knew he was being a coward but he wanted to avoid any uncomfortable conversations with him about Amanda. Then again, Luke could have been too drunk to remember. That would have been the perfect outcome to all of this.

            When Joe did wake up, he found the dorm room empty. He waited a few seconds to make sure he wasn’t dreaming. He rubbed his eyes and...

Gamer Girl Gas (Commission - Chapter 2)

Joe made sure to go to bed before Luke came back from the party. He knew he was being a coward but he wanted to avoid any uncomfortable conversations with him about Amanda. Then again, Luke could have been too drunk to remember. That would have been the perfect outcome to all of this.

            When Joe did wake up, he found the dorm room empty. He waited a few seconds to make sure he wasn’t dreaming. He rubbed his eyes and...

Gamer Girl Gas (Commission - Chapter 1)

Hey everyone! I know I'm late with stuff. Ever since I got sick back in February I lost the rhythm, but trust me when I say I'm working on stuff. There's a lot on my backlog and since this is the last year of my patreon I figured I'll just mark the titles with "commission". Month doesn't really matter anymore. Anyway. This one will be a slow burn of a story. I'll also be juggling stories. The detective one from earlier still has one more chapter to go!

Parties always made Joe...

back to work

Quick update. I was sick for a while there but I've fully recovered now. Expect more posts this week!

A Study in Gas - Ch. 4 (Jan 2025)

It took almost a month, but Margo was 90% sure she had caught the attention of the “mad gasser”. Margo at first was not prepared for the amount of direct messages with other men who flocked to her. Like most things, the fart fetish community was a male-dominated field. She got a lot of soulless “heys” and “hellos” from men wanting to jerk off a quick one talking to a woman who was into farting.

            But she k...

A Study in Gas - Ch. 3 (Jan 2025)

Margo had been to only two libraries before realizing this was getting tedious and probably not going to work. People often thought finding someone in security camera footage was an easy thing. It wasn’t. If you don’t have a specific date to go off of, you had to sit there and stare at the screen for hours. Generative AI was still in its infancy trying to match faces. Maybe the FBI had better models, maybe if the perp was serious enough to be on the Most Wanted list, but not your run-of-t...

A Study in Gas - Ch. 2 (January 2025)

Tisha Reems took about a week to fully recover from her bloated state. Despite this, she clearly suffered from random explosive bouts of flatulence – far louder than normal. This proved to be quite awkward during the interview.

            Margo interviewed her with Harry at her house. They figured talking to her in a safe, comforting place would be better than the station. Like most victims, Tisha was low-income. She lived i...

A Study in Gas - Ch. 1 (January 2025)

Never in her twenty years working on the force did Detective Margo Layne see something this weird. It was not grotesque, it was not bloody, it was not even murder. Just plain fucking weird.

            The victim, thirty-two-year-old Tisha Reems, laid sprawled on the hotel bed with her ankles and wrists tied to the bedposts. She was alive, but in a lot of pain moaning and groaning from a grossly distended belly that had broken ...

February 2025 Story Submissions

I will be starting January commissions this week. If I liked your comment that means I'm doing it. If you posted multiple ideas, I will be messaging you about which one. I'm doing a couple private commissions too.

Comment below what you want to see for February 2025!

edit to tiers

Hey all,

Quick notice. I edited the tiers. Since everyone will be able to submit writing requests each month for 2025, Discord access has been bumped to exclusively the $3 and $5 tiers. This will NOT AFFECT anyone who joined already in the old tier system. I will not kick anyone out who had already joined before. But from here on out, only $3 and $5 tiers get you in the Discord server.

Thanks,
-Mack

Office Christmas Party - Ch. 4 (Final) (Dec. 2024)

(Like the last original story, I consider this a demo run. I have in mind a set of stories taking place in the same workplace over the course of several years following different characters coming and going until the place shuts down. So I know a lot of this feels rushed. Anyway, I hope you enjoyed it, and as a forewarning this chapter has lots of sex in it.)

The party had taken such a wild course of events. Zach was really glad that Mitch had been true about this. He nearly fo...

Office Christmas Party - Ch. 3 (Dec. 2024)

The community fridge upstairs was so stuffed with food that Zach almost wasn’t able to fit the three 2L bottles of Coke he bought. It wasn’t until he angled a vegetable tray sideways that he was able to finally fit everything.

            He sighed as he walked towards his cubicle within the maze. The party wasn’t going to start until 5PM but people clearly didn’t have work on their minds as they were chatting over each...

Office Christmas Party - Ch. 2 (Dec. 2024)

With three days to go until the party, Zach made sure he looked and felt good about himself. He upped his time at the gym and cut back on sugars (they tended to swell up his face). He was on the lookout during lunchtime for Jeanine again. He typically read during eating, whether it be manga or sci-fi/fantasy.

            His heart pounded when Jeanine walked by to get something from the vending machine. She was surprised to see...

Office Christmas Party - Ch. 1 (Dec. 2024)

(Unimaginative title, I know. Whatever. Works for now. Read on.)

Office Christmas parties could either be the bane of one’s existence or a completely wild and fun time. Zach Harbor had only experienced the former. At his old job, a private chemistry lab, the annual Christmas party consisted of some 20 people in their 60’s gathering at the common area and eating chips and cheap delivery pizza. He couldn’t relate to anyone at that job, especially with his boss chatting awa...

everyone gets a say for the final months of this patreon! (january 2025 requests)

All right folks...

So I decided that I will be ending this patreon by the end of June 2025.

For these final months, I will be allowing everyone to be able to submit requests regardless of their tiers.

BUT ALSO - I will be choosing MULTIPLE stories per month.

You read that right.

That will give you more chances to be chosen.

Stories will be chosen from all tiers, but ideas submitted in the upper tiers will be given priority ...

Pig Mom - Ch. 3 (Final) (November 2024)

I started to think I overstayed my welcome. Chris was not happy at all. We hung out in the basement for the rest of that hour. With the editing done and the video ready for our presentation, there wasn’t anything to do except hang out. Chris though returned to his computer to log onto play Counter Strike and ignored me.

 My hormones raged though, pushing me to do anything to be around Janet. I mean, getting to have dinner with her? Something HAD to have happened. Even a little de...

Pig Mom - Ch. 2 (November 2024)

We filmed our skit in one go. Chris ordered pizza for us for dinner, and I had hoped we would eat with Janet as a family but apparently, she and her husband had already eaten dinner earlier, which struck me as odd. More on that later. I was too distracted with my first meeting with her to read into their family dynamics.

Later that week, I returned to Chris’s house to oversee the editing of our video and the finished product. I took the helm as director and a very particular vision in...

Pig Mom - Ch. 1 (November 2024)

            I don’t know if you’ve ever seen the movie The Matrix Reloaded but there’s this one scene where Neo is fighting the Merovingian’s henchmen in a fancy mansion. It’s all white with tile flooring and there are two large staircases leading to the second floor. Everything is ornate and there are a bunch of statues and weapons on the walls. Well, my classmate Chris Harrison lived in a place like t...

Escape Room Rumble - Ch. 5 (Final) (October 2024)

The final room began with darkness…much like the first. Yor wondered what could possibly be waiting for them this time, and she gripped Loid’s arm wondering if something would scare her.

Slowly, the lights lit up the room, though not brilliantly. The lighting was kept at a warm dim, enough to see the walls and a glass case in the center. The appearance of the room was like that of a museum. Within the glass case wasn’t a fancy necklace or an ancient artifact – but an elaborate b...

Escape Room Rumble - Ch. 4 (October 2024)

Loid checked his watch. “25 minutes left to beat the record. Think we can do it?”

            Yor honestly wanted to pass out in shame. She was so deep in thoughts of failure that she hadn’t been paying attention to what kind of room they were in.

            I’m such an idiot. I looked ridiculous back there! I wonder what Loid must really be thinking...