TO Rewrite: B1 — 15. Hacker’s Introduction
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1. Rachel Park (Our Curious Lunar Hare!)
Google Document (In-line Comments) 2023-05-08 06:00:12 +0000 UTC View Post
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PokéSync: B3 — 14. Registration
Edit: I made some corrections >.> such as Alice suddenly having Eevee genetics and being able to de-evolve... Lol.
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1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: &n...
2023-05-03 06:57:05 +0000 UTC View Post
TO Rewrite: B1 — 14. The Celestial Unicorn
Author Note: Okay! Found the time to go over the edits today. I hope things are a bit tighter and clearer for those that haven't gotten to it yet.
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1. Rachel Park (Our Curious Lunar Hare!)
2023-05-01 07:06:12 +0000 UTC View PostUE Poll: Add Ending Status Sheet At End Of Vol?
So, next chapter will have the last chapter in the volume and another one post after it (on the same day) that has all of her ending stats/Feats/etc. for the book.
I feel like that's something that all RPG-style books should do but I'm generally too busy to read (if I'm reading I'm not writing), so... I turn to you guys to see if that would be good.
2023-05-01 01:14:01 +0000 UTC View PostPokéSync: B3 — 13. A Doppelganger's Support
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1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it...
2023-04-26 07:04:28 +0000 UTC View PostTO Rewrite: B1 — 13. A Turbulent Reunion
Author Note: I think all the editors have gone over it now. Less bit of emphasis on the whole Scarlet 'sister' aspect and more on Rachel gradually becoming more open to friendship, but she is using Scarlet. Tightening sentences, etc.
PoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our Curious Lunar Hare!)
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2023-04-24 05:57:36 +0000 UTC View PostPokéSync: B3 — 12. To Vermilion!
PoV:
1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it...
2023-04-19 07:22:54 +0000 UTC View PostTO Rewrite: B1 — 12. Planting Seeds
PoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our Curious Lunar Hare!)
Google Document (In-line Comments) 2023-04-17 06:43:08 +0000 UTC View Post
PokéSync: B3 — 11. Spite
PoV:
1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it...
2023-04-12 06:48:58 +0000 UTC View PostTO Rewrite: B1 — 11. System Testing
PoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our Curious Lunar Hare!)
Google Document (In-line Comments) 2023-04-10 06:28:13 +0000 UTC View Post
PokéSync: B3 — 10. Supernova
PoV:
1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)
2: Rhea's Pokemon (Should Keep Things Secret ;) hehe)
3: Rhea's Pokemon
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are...
2023-04-05 06:32:00 +0000 UTC View PostTO Rewrite: B1 — 10. The Devils Within
PoV:
1. Scarlet (Our Vespertine Reaper!)
2. Rachel Park (Our Dreaming Lunar Hare!)
PokéSync: B3 — 9. Round One
PoV:
1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)
2: Alice
3: Nova
4: Rhea
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few route...
2023-03-29 06:07:25 +0000 UTC View PostAuthor Question: Has My Pace Been Improving?
I know the biggest problem most people have with my series is the amount of detail I can put into characterization, which is a double-edged sword. I've been really trying to adapt my style a bit to push things forward more and do more 'tell' not 'show' as I usually show 'everything' in the characters' lives.
How as things been for you in the series as I've tried to adapt things? I'd just like to see what you guys think about how my balancing attempts have been coming along.<...
2023-03-29 00:01:55 +0000 UTC View PostTO Rewrite: B1 — 9. Full Confession
PoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our new Lunar Hare!)
Google Document (In-line Comments) 2023-03-27 06:39:44 +0000 UTC View Post
PokéSync: B3 — 8. To Battle Island
Edit: Made some structure corrections and fixes; thanks for the feedback. ^_^7
PoV:
1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might...
2023-03-23 06:49:06 +0000 UTC View PostPokesync Wednesday; Tuesday Mom Needs Me
My mom can’t drive and she needs me to take her to appointment throughout the evening, so I’ll need to push Pokesync to Wednesday.
2023-03-20 20:03:00 +0000 UTC View PostTO Rewrite: B1 — 8. The Reaper's Gift
PoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our new Lunar Hare!)
Google Document (In-line Comments...
2023-03-20 06:03:19 +0000 UTC View PostUE Tomorrow; Errands Today
I need to have my car licensed and registered—including oil, getting windshield wipers changed, and general maintenance—before doing a few other things to help my grandfather today, and tomorrow morning I need to take my mom to a doctor's appointment to get some lubricant put in her knees, so I'll need to push UE to tomorrow. I'll be able to write some tonight and the rest tomorrow night to finish it off.
2023-03-17 22:06:42 +0000 UTC View PostPokéSync: B3 — 7. The Tale of the Maiden’s Peak
Edit: Let me know what you think about my push of events. Should I have spent more time in this town or do you like how I did this chapter?
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1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Vi...
2023-03-15 08:06:07 +0000 UTC View PostTO Rewrite: B1 — 7. Crystal Attack
Author Note: Did a bit of cleaning up; hopefully, it reads smoother.
PoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our new Lunar Hare!)
UE Chapter; Tomorrow
I want a bit more time with this chapter because of how much it sets the tone for the series going forward; a lot needs to happen and the direction in how things will play out may surprise you guys.
2023-03-11 02:31:59 +0000 UTC View PostPokéSync: B3 — 6. The Spooky City
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1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it...
2023-03-08 07:54:31 +0000 UTC View PostTO Rewrite: B1 — 6. The Scarlet Hand
PoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our new Lunar Hare!)
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PokéSync: B3 — 5. A Brother's Concern
PoV:
1: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed, but it...
2023-03-02 06:21:50 +0000 UTC View PostPokesync; Update On Health Concerns
I'll start this off by saying I don't have your typical health problem... I just dipped into the 18s of my BMI score, which is very unhealthy. I've always had a problem putting on weight and typically don't like to... eat.
It's not like I don't enjoy food. Some of the editors will tell you the insane things I eat, and I LOVE anything with habanero in it. I just only eat once a day and have to force myself to eat more, which... doesn't feel good.
Recently, m...
2023-03-01 04:19:10 +0000 UTC View PostTO Rewrite: B1 — 5. I Might Be A Monster, But I’m Still Me
Edit: I forgot to add a section at the end regarding the weapons.
PoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our Miffed College Muscle-Loving Girl!)
TO Chapter; Need A Bit More Time; Important Chapter
I think I want a bit more time with this chapter; in writing this now, it sets the tone for Rachel and is a very important chapter for Rachel's character—the series moving forward—as she discovers herself from this transformation and I want to spend a bit more time on it. I'll release the chapter tomorrow.
2023-02-27 04:30:35 +0000 UTC View PostPokéSync: B3 — 4. An Unfamiliar Body
PoV:
1: Alice (Our Newly Evolved Lopunny!)
2: Rhea (Our Blonde Rising Aura User MC!)
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been label...
2023-02-22 07:39:26 +0000 UTC View PostTO Rewrite: B1 — 4. The Azure Moon
PoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our Miffed College Muscle-Loving Girl!)
2023-02-20 08:20:00 +0000 UTC View Post