Thoughts? Should I ask him to make the sword thinner and a bit less wide?
What do you think I should ask to have more touched up at this point?
It’s not done right now, just the next stage of the drafts. I told him a few things could be adjusted and made clearer, such as the sword being more rapier than broad sword, cuts in clothing, and stuff like that.
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2022-12-26 19:05:45 +0000 UTC View PostFixed Errors
AUTHOR WARNING: There are some story spoilers for UE, ATM, and TO for those that are squeamish about that but it's a sweet and 'aww' chapter. =)
PoV:
1. Rachel Park (Our TO MC On Christmas Eve!)
2022-12-25 06:45:17 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1. White (Our Closed-Hearted Kitsune!)
Google Document (In-line Comment...
2022-12-23 09:21:42 +0000 UTC View PostRevision: Lulu's personality is leaning more toward Quirky than Timid as I write her, so I changed it in chapter 45.
PoV:
1: Rhea (Our Blonde Aura Master In Training MC!)
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid:...
2022-12-21 09:44:51 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1. Rachel (Our Pissed, Week Lonely Lunar Hell Hare!)
2022-12-20 07:21:29 +0000 UTC View PostTO Today (12/18/22): Today I have to do a few things so I'll need to release TO tomorrow.
Everything Else should be fine this week, but since xmas is on Sunday next week, I'll need to release TO's chapter on Wednesday the 28th.
TO Next Week (12/28/22):
Short Fun Patron Combined Holiday Xmas Chapter 12/24/22: Premise, everyone already knows each other from the Halloween Event, so they'll be meeting up on an...
2022-12-19 00:08:31 +0000 UTC View Post1. Elinor (Our Goth Teen Girl Is Back!)
If there are any concerns, don't hesitate to message me on discord or Patreon or comment below! ^_^7 I'm far from perfect.
It's a busy part of the year, and honestly, I don't like how fast I ended up doing the 1st draft pacing as I ended up breezing past and chucking out a lot of story plots I wanted to do.
I'm going to try to just push UE Rewrite and leave the 1st Draft where it's currently at. There will be many characters from the 1st Draft you'll see as we go with a lot of interesting changes since the introduction of Butter, which changes things up.
We'll have far more kingdom-building betw...
2022-12-16 21:32:46 +0000 UTC View PostAuthor Note: I wasn't able to get ATM Rewrite done today, but my, this turned out to be such a sweet chapter.
PoV:
1. Tola (Our On Leave Blue Seat And Lovestruck Kitsune Lover!)
PoV:
1: Lori (Our Unovan Girl!)
2: Amira (Our Redhead Singer!)
3: Rhea (Our Blonde, Awkward Bombshell MC!)
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat in...
2022-12-15 05:47:45 +0000 UTC View PostThe snow made things a lot more difficult than usual today and I don't think I have the time I want to put into the chapter. I'll do what I can, which also means I may need to also push ATM Rewrite to Thursday with the ATM Chapter.
I'll see what I can do. ^_^7
2022-12-14 03:51:23 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1. Rachel (Our Pissed, Week Lonely Lunar Hell Hare!)
2022-12-12 09:26:34 +0000 UTC View PostAuthor Note: This is the last chapter in UE Draft 1
PoV:
1. Elinor Irkalla (Ereshkigal, The Sumerian Goddess Of The Dead!)
2. Valentina (Our Tigress Beastkin!)
3. Elinor
If there are any concerns, don't hesitate to message me on discord or Patreon or comment below! ^_^7 I'm far from perfect.
1. Elinor (Our Goth Teen Girl Is Back!)
If there are any concerns, don't hesitate to message me on discord or Patreon or comment below! ^_^7 I'm far from perfect.
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Elinor’s mind snapped into focus, but someth...
2022-12-11 01:31:06 +0000 UTC View PostI've been going over a few things regarding the rewrite and will likely revise Rewrite Chapter 0 to add the Crystal to it when Elinor gets to the small jungle town, having been there before The Oscillation happened.
Working out a few things with some of the proofreaders and will also likely release Rewrite Chapter 1 tomorrow, as well, with the Volume 4 Chapter.
2022-12-10 00:44:30 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1. Sora Moore (Our Recovered Null-Void MC Foxy Mom!)
2022-12-09 09:15:17 +0000 UTC View PostI want to go over this chapter a bit more tomorrow before releasing it. There are a lot of moving parts in it I want to smooth over more. A lot of cool new things, including guest appearances from Eyia and Kari.
2022-12-08 06:26:44 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1: Rhea (Our Blonde, Awkward Bombshell MC!)
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed...
2022-12-07 07:57:43 +0000 UTC View PostAuthor Note: Several detail fixes and sentence structure organizing; it should read much cleaner.
PoV:
1. Anthony (Our girl's boyfriend and the Eldritch of Dre’jna Jaenona Le’thrga!)
2. Rachel (Our Pissed, Week Lonely Lunar Hell Hare!)
1. Elinor Irkalla (Ereshkigal, The Sumerian Goddess Of The Dead!)
2. Sal (Our 15-year-old boy trying to support his girl!)
If there are any concerns, don't hesitate to message me on discord or Patreon or comment below! ^_^7 I'm far from perfect.
2022-12-03 08:03:20 +0000 UTC View PostThis is an index for all the chapters released on Patreon for your browsing ease.
Summary: As a rewrite, there will be many new and expanded things as we go.
Elinor is just a sixteen-year-old goth going through some abnormal teenage drama, who is about to be introduced to a not-so-informative System of Undeath, a mysterious golden twin, and a struggle to keep everything she loves from falling apart.
Forced onto a...
2022-12-03 01:16:18 +0000 UTC View PostAuthor Note: Added a few parts involving the Crystal. You can just Control + F to find it and go from there to see the changes after.
1. Elinor (Our Goth Teen Girl Is Back!)
If there are any concerns, don't hesitate to message me on discord or Patreon or comment below! ^_^7 I'm far from perfect.
I'm going to attempt to write the Rewrite and keep the 1st draft going, but eventually, I will need to move to the rewrite, which might not be popular. I'll explain a few things that will be changing with this rewrite:
1. Elinor's other half will be a voice in her head at the start, so you'll get a bit of Ishy's biting tongue and guidance as she holds Elinor's sensing abilities while Elinor has control over everything else.
Basically, Ishy—I'll figure out a temp name...
2022-12-03 01:09:18 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1. Sora Moore (Our Recovered Null-Void MC Foxy Mom!)
2022-12-02 08:24:47 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1: Rhea (Our Blonde, Awkward Bombshell MC!)
Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid: The distance between areas might be different, some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been labeled incorrectly, and some cities aren't listed...
2022-11-30 07:30:55 +0000 UTC View PostNote: Made several corrections in sentence structure and repetitive word diversity.
PoV:
1. Anthony (Our girl's boyfriend and the Eldritch of Dre’jna Jaenona Le’thrga)
Previous Chapter 2022-11-29 08:10:24 +0000 UTC View Post
Water damage from my toilet exploding. Had to turn off the water main and it was a mess. Need to call the insurance and get things settled. It’s all across the ceiling should have pinched a screwdriver through it to drain the water after shutting off the main line but insurance should cover it.
I can probably get TO out tomorrow which might be better for wrapping up Anthony’s pov and getting back to Rachel and the next part.
Life and its troubles.
2022-11-28 04:17:11 +0000 UTC View PostPoV:
1. Sora Moore (Our ATM Protag in this 'spooky' special!)
2022-11-27 03:15:18 +0000 UTC View PostI need to do more than I thought, getting ready to gather as a family for Thanksgiving. I probably won't be able to do ATM Rewrite today. Also, a reminder, I will be taking the rest of this week off with the exception of the next Halloween Part (maybe I'll be able to finish the event!"
Everyone will know each other at the end of this holiday event across the series, so everyone will know what's up when it happens again. Hehe. These crossovers can be pretty fun. 2022-11-24 00:03:31 +0000 UTC View Post
1: Samuel (A Shadow In The Background)
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“So, this is where Paul was last seen, Samuel… Hmm. And right before the fifth Void Year. [data lost] Humph. Is this how it happened? I found McArthur’s diary; you can drop the actâ...
2022-11-23 22:49:53 +0000 UTC View Post