Update: SR Artwork
Added 2022-12-26 19:05:45 +0000 UTCThoughts? Should I ask him to make the sword thinner and a bit less wide?
What do you think I should ask to have more touched up at this point?
It’s not done right now, just the next stage of the drafts. I told him a few things could be adjusted and made clearer, such as the sword being more rapier than broad sword, cuts in clothing, and stuff like that.
Comments
In the concept art B it looks like a serrated sword, which can be quite cool.
Opala
2022-12-27 11:21:35 +0000 UTCYeah, I asked him to trim it down xD haha it's massive
SME
2022-12-27 10:09:46 +0000 UTCPersonally, the most offensive thing about the art is the size of the teeth on the sword(assuming it's supposed to be a sword and not a flat, spiky mace). An aggressive flamberge with pointy swells could look similar and much more functional.
Opala
2022-12-26 21:10:10 +0000 UTC
