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Now That We've Had Some Time....

to think... What did ya'll think about the last chapter of Bench Warmer?


Best Bits? Bits that need work? General ideas? Whatcha got?


I must know!

Comments

Thankee. It's harder than it looks! A lot harder...*halp*. Also, thank you again!

Blackmarch

I'm enjoying the little layers of intrigue you put in to the 'real' ninja perspectives, like Kakashi not being sure what Inoichi's real end goal for the convo was; it's well done imo

Patrick J

I mean, if no one thinks there is a reason to add more?

Blackmarch

Oh is it not getting more edits? Guess I'll go read it

Pred Head


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