Going Off the Rails Chapter 1 Final Version (I mean it this time!)
Added 2026-02-07 23:21:18 +0000 UTCYou all can still blame Tellemicus Sundance
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I feel that, when I first read the last draft I was convinced it was DC comics, and that they'd landed near Doomsday, after reading about bone spikes and a giant apex predator. It wasn't until they started arguing about the jungle dangers that I realized I was wrong
FormVIEnthusiast
2026-02-10 11:30:11 +0000 UTCI think I saw Blaise's gender switch midway through the HP segment... Otherwise this was very good!
David Ross
2026-02-09 18:22:43 +0000 UTCCorrected. Thanks!
vimesenthusiast
2026-02-09 16:33:57 +0000 UTCYes. Hence the buzzing.
vimesenthusiast
2026-02-09 16:26:24 +0000 UTCYou're right. Will correct.
vimesenthusiast
2026-02-09 16:25:28 +0000 UTCI thought it was Rookwood that was in the DoM, but I can't say I remember much about Doholov
incubusfox
2026-02-09 00:13:01 +0000 UTCso far, very awesome. i guess to me, from what it sounds like, the force in the past was a 2D line, stretching from dark to light, and people moved up and down the spectrum. instead, now that it's changed, an new axis has been added, it's now a 2D plane, with one axis being dark-light and who knows what the other axis is
Delphinous
2026-02-08 16:53:02 +0000 UTCI did not expect Star Wars but I’m okay with it. I really thought they were in a jungle setting in D&D
Christian E. Y.
2026-02-08 09:59:11 +0000 UTCSecond Paragraph: He'd proudly worn (not warned) the robes of a Death Eater. Fourth Paragraph: It's Knockturn Alley. Also, Steam Engines don't hoot, they typically use steam exhaust for a loud whistle and also have bells.
Aaron Orr
2026-02-08 05:49:32 +0000 UTCI love a good Harry Potter / Star wars story
ltibbs
2026-02-08 02:57:57 +0000 UTCya so i need more of this as soon as possible
Eragon Gravelyn
2026-02-08 02:55:21 +0000 UTCI'd like to point out in the second paragraph you have "warned the robes" instead "worn the robes"
TimberlineWolf
2026-02-08 01:46:52 +0000 UTCSince Harry absorbed the power of the Horcrux in this fanfic, does that mean he is stronger/has more potential than in Magic of the Force?
King_Gluttony
2026-02-07 23:53:36 +0000 UTCNice! Can't wait to read this tomorrow.
Nikola Đokić
2026-02-07 23:23:16 +0000 UTC
