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A Sudden SW/HP Concept!

Blame Tellemicus Sundance for this.  He

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Bt

I resubbed for this

David C.

I think the start was fantastic. I don't know if you need to change anything. The only thing is that I would mention is that some of them would have brooms to scout. Angelina, the twins, Roger, and tonks I think all played quidditch might be Fanon for tonks though Also im not too sure spell knowledge is going to be an issue because everyone has their trunks with their textbooks in them even the people who died so they probably have set of textbooks for every year and tonks is a 7th year. So they at least have those

Eric

I like the idea a lot! A few points first, then suggestions. POINTS: If the arrival caused a big splash as you said, tore apart the veil, and changed the very nature of the Force to be more chaotic, that would probably release and empower Abeloth. I can’t remember if they brought her up in the Clone Wars show or other recent media, but she is one of the Ones who embody the different aspects of the Force. The Son = Bogan (the Dark Side), The Daughter = Ashla (the Light Side), The Father = Bendu (balance in the Force). Abeloth is the embodiment of Chaos and is normally kept imprisoned by the others, but breaks free whenever there is a major shift in the Force. 2 e iii) You mentioned that Fred. George would not get along with most of the Jedi Order, which is fair, but I could see them really hitting it off with Master Yoda, and Qui-Gon Jinn to a lesser extent if he is still alive. 2 e viii) Daphne is blonde because someone was able to pull a picture of two background actresses in slytherin uniforms out of the movie, who were tentatively identified as Daphne Greengrass and Tracy Davis. One was blonde and the other brunette. The blonde is generally considered to be Daphne. This is mostly fanon. 3 a) The war would probably still happen, maybe not in the same form, and probably not with Sidious leading it, but many of the dominoes have already been set up. Maybe the Clone Wars can be avoided simply by not enlisting the clones, but much of the Outer Rim would still want to secede after decades or centuries of being exploited by the Core Worlds. Without Sith leadership, however, I could see them breaking into several smaller states to solve some of the logistics problems the original Confederacy faced. The confederacy was originally separated into three main areas, the galactic north, east, and south. Each of these could form their own independent but allied nation instead of a single bloc. 3 c) Plagueis was the head of the Intergalactic Banking Clan, so he is actually well-positioned to lead the Confederacy, even if it is as a puppet master rather than the public face. And yeah, I could totally see him mastering new spells/force powers at a phenomenal rate. One of the few things we know about him in all timelines is that he vastly outclassed Sidious in terms of power and skill, thus why Sidious had to kill him in his sleep. 3 d) That could be very interesting, especially when you consider that Plagueis is kind of Anakin’s father. 3 e) I have suggestions on the business side of things, but I’ll cover those in the suggestions below. 3 f) Naboo may have an elective monarchy, but they do seem to elect only members of certain royal families, such as the Naberrie or Palpatine. I think Daphne would have to be adopted by a royal house or at least earn herself Nabooan citizenship first. 5) Huh. I was kind of hoping for Harry/Ahsoka if they are going to have similar ages. SUGGESTIONS: 1) Other planets that could work: A) Dathomir - just skip straight to introducing the kids to the witches of Dathomir. Not all of them are evil, only the Nightsisters, it’s a jungle world, it has rancors, and also the Kwa/Kwi. B) Ossus - Not a jungle world, but it is a semi-radioactive wasteland populated by nomadic bands of survivors and monsters. It also has the Grand Jedi Library, which would allow the kids to learn about the galaxy. Seven Jedi were sent out at the beginning of the war to secure the library. They all died but here the kids could save them. And Ossus has a rare variety of kyber crystals that can serve as natural foci for the Force/Magic. 2) Have the kids scavenge the train for anything useful. This would include textbooks or even personal spell books with advanced spells not on the curriculum. They could also find various samples of plants and animals used for potions or other things. The Kaminoans are not the only cloners in the galaxy. If the kids visit the planets of Khomm, Lur, Ithor, Columus, or Arkania; they could be able to clone various species they could sell or use as materials. Heck, they could plan to eventually buy a planet and terraform it. They may even be able to do something like injecting phoenix DNA from Harry’s broken wand into Hedwig. The Lurrans are probably the safest option, but the Arkanians might be the most interesting to write. Fred and George in particular could become master potioneers and alchemists. 3) Personally, I prefer the idea of sending them at the beginning of year 2, and maybe instead of seeing him with Hagrid, McNair sees him with the Weasleys when Arthur and Lucius brawl. That way, you can include not only Luna but also Ginny, who can later be a lightsaber master and expert fighter pilot. And please include Rolf Scamander so that he can be their resident magi zoologist, not only for cloned creatures but also the force-sensitive species of the galaxy.

Beleriond

Eh... Daphne is kind of possible, but... I went into this thinking it would be her OR Angelina, and since Angelina isn't used as often, I went with her. Daphne I could see being really attracted to Harry, but their lives just going in very different ways. ALso. Yes. Seriously, folks. Find a way to clone me. Please?

vimesenthusiast

This looks like a fantastic setup. I'd love to see Harry/Padme/Daphne and possibly Angelina, but Daphne would be my option 1 then add either of the other 2. Otherwise, the whole outline looks fantastic, and not having the HP verse version of Jar Jar is still awesome. Darn now I'll be looking forward too much to reading more of this. But first! We need to get you through a bunch of the other stories lol.

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