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Lost Rain
Lost Rain

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Woah, that was quick. Thank you for the feedback! I was a bit worried about that spot. I also really want to get back around to that part. It had some good bones, but I was thinking about giving it a bit of the same treatment to make the cult feel more culty. I think that’ll wind up in book 3, though.

Lost Rain

I read it and feel the rewrite works well. It was basically the same high points, but it read really smooth. I liked the POV change for Sean. Now I want to reread the arc where Hope and the MC go underground.

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