School Beta Read
Added 2026-02-25 19:05:18 +0000 UTCComments
Woah, that was quick. Thank you for the feedback! I was a bit worried about that spot. I also really want to get back around to that part. It had some good bones, but I was thinking about giving it a bit of the same treatment to make the cult feel more culty. I think that’ll wind up in book 3, though.
Lost Rain
2026-02-26 05:59:43 +0000 UTCI read it and feel the rewrite works well. It was basically the same high points, but it read really smooth. I liked the POV change for Sean. Now I want to reread the arc where Hope and the MC go underground.
HikinBear
2026-02-26 05:57:00 +0000 UTC
