Update and Poll - Beta Read
Added 2026-02-24 19:12:38 +0000 UTCComments
Thank you for the review! I’ll put it up at some point.
Lost Rain
2026-02-25 04:24:04 +0000 UTCDefinitely interested in Beta for feedback purposes. For reference, here's my GR review of the first book. https://www.goodreads.com/review/show/8354860055
Melissa Proffitt
2026-02-25 04:06:46 +0000 UTCI'm always up for beta reading.
matt
2026-02-25 00:56:02 +0000 UTCHopefully those bones are stronger now. I’ve got, like, five more chapters to do and then I’ll put it up here probably.
Lost Rain
2026-02-25 00:53:04 +0000 UTCI like the school arc, but honestly that might be more because I see it as the beginning of Mother and that elevates it in my eyes. I enjoyed all the characters but yeah it did feel kind of stitched together at times... it has good bones though!
LNatsu
2026-02-24 23:33:43 +0000 UTCI also mostly liked it but I thought it kinda dragged, and the tone was all over the place
Momongama
2026-02-24 21:26:27 +0000 UTC"Do you want to read more of the awesome story I'm writing?" ... well, duh. :P I quite liked the original school arc, except it was over quickly and she never used the relationships she made there again. Or her noble identity. A bit of wasted potential, but then again Shiro is terminally busy all the time.
Daemion
2026-02-24 19:45:41 +0000 UTC
