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Say Hello Rough Draft Teaser

We're working on a future comic and I find it fun to post very rough drafts with others.  I'm not sure if you like it or not, but I find it interesting to see how the earliest rough draft looks when compared to the final product.  The final product of this comic has not been made yet, but it is one we've green-lit to make.  

So when the final is finally finalized, we can compare which angles we've kept and which dialogue has been saved.  Reading this, I am pretty sure much of the dialogue will change, but the premise will be the same.  It just needs cleaning up and some rough edges deburred.  Hope you all have a happy Easter!  

Thoughts and comments are always welcome (both positive and negative).

Say Hello Rough Draft Teaser

Comments

Maybe? Can't decide if that'd be good or bad.

Tradley

I'd watch a movie about plumbing sisters. Do they have plumbers cracks though?

They about to see the Ultra Plumber Sisters movie?

Tradley

VERY. Lol!

Damn that's rough

Stefan thyr woller


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