Comic Debut: Mommy Parts
Added 2021-10-18 07:07:38 +0000 UTCI think the story and characters for this comic have had the most revisions compared to any other work to date. Here you can find the first chapter.
I'm happy with how the premise is established and I'm very excited to take these characters on their respective journeys.
Now, I'm off to sleep and plot the next leg of work for the month.
-B
Comments
Thank you! By the way, just to mention that I left the mustache on the MC towards the end of the chapter as a light homage to the story Alana. I’ll repost the link, for anyone’s curiosity.
Bal tha mele
2021-10-18 23:08:30 +0000 UTCinteresting premise, looking forward to seeing how okasaan developes
V
2021-10-18 19:58:23 +0000 UTCI despise sans serif, but I thank you for the feedback!
Bal tha mele
2021-10-18 14:11:42 +0000 UTCjust opening it now. I suggest using a Sans serif style font in the future. its a lot easier to read then the stuff you're using that doesnt work great in big bunches in the word bubbles
Poggie
2021-10-18 12:52:20 +0000 UTC
