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SkyHorn Adventures - I need your body!

Added 2020-10-11 20:18:55 +0000 UTC

Here are a few lines of dialogue I had to cut away because they didn't fit the page.

Evo: "Hey Odam, are you sure that you're not cold?"
Odam: "I'm fine, why you ask?"
Evo: "I mean, you haven't fur on you body."
Odam: "But you gave me a cape and a pair of boots, gloves and chaps. I'm almost sweating!"
Evo: "But a lot of skin is still uncovered."
Odam: "Listen, don't you think that if humans needed fur to stay warm in snowy climates, the Gods would have given it to them?"
Evo: "Right, nevermind."

Hopefully, the VN will give me the option to write down all these dialogues, since I won't have to compromise with page composition for that.
Another detail that may be hard to notice, given how much I (and we) want to keep the focus on the muscle boys in fancy colors, is that Evo has a bunch of personal outposts scattered all around the islands. Now they're removing the facade of rubbles from the entrance to his mountain cave.
Because Evo just noticed that have been 40 pages of an erotic comic without a sex scene and wants to remedy the situation.
An arrogant lion and a angsty wolf are going to have angry sex. It reminds me of something but I can't quite put the finger on it. Uhm.

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