To Love a Sword Chapter 28: Round 2
Added 2024-09-22 00:35:21 +0000 UTCFully beta read by Paragon of Awesomeness, Shig
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Yeah, the relationship between our nurse and epicenter of all chaos is the most balanced of all the non-family interactions. So far anyway. Not saying this relationship progressed that much further than others but it is more balanced and deeper than most. If Shirou (I'm just gonna start calling him that here instead of Emiya) stayed in Gudako form any longer a few of the girls probably started wondering if they were Emiya-sexual.
SsanghwaSilver
2024-11-04 15:36:10 +0000 UTCI like the romantic progression you’ve been making with the characters especially momo and mikado
GameCrusher55
2024-09-25 20:47:08 +0000 UTCI love the relationship between Mikado and Emiya. It is different than his other relationships, where he often feels forced into a 'parent' role, like having to constantly remind Lala to be careful with her experiments, his dynamic with Mikado feels more natural and balanced
D D
2024-09-24 14:17:15 +0000 UTCI rather Archer reflects it or grabs Issei and uses him as a meat shield turning instead.
paladar blade
2024-09-22 05:53:19 +0000 UTCMy reasons are simple, subvert expectations, and make it so Emiya IS NOT the butt of the joke for once. Alteration, Archer becomes the ugly woman (he altered what was changing him), and traumatizes everyone SO HARD that they scramble to change him back Immediately. The next scene is Azazel getting his butt handed to him by everyone for making them see that (I've always felt he gets let off too easy when pulling these stunts) *Archer leaves the room with a trollish smirk*.
Joshua Leahy
2024-09-22 05:50:33 +0000 UTCLet's be real here Azazel will never be an ugly woman, I think their angel blood actually won't allow it. Also that could be the moral of story assuming Azazel doesn't try flirting with the female version of Archer in front of her.
paladar blade
2024-09-22 05:18:45 +0000 UTCCounter Idea, you could have the device malfunction "Warning, too much Husbando energy, error! error!" (Archer being a magical construct factors into this). It backfires, turning Azazel into a VERY ugly woman, flabbergasted, he doesn't notice the killing intent Rias is directing towards him. You know, because someone is messing with HER MAN (Rias becoming yandere levels of protective towards Emiya is always a treat). 'Archer addresses the audience' "Moral of the story? Just because someone becomes a woman, DOESN'T automatically mean they're going to be an ATTRACTIVE one". He says calmly ( and mostly fed up) as Azazel is taking an Extinguishing Star(Ria's signature move, further into the Novels) to the face.
Joshua Leahy
2024-09-22 04:11:50 +0000 UTCAh el buen emiya, no sé si es el más suertudo o el más piña. Agradezco otro fenomenal capítulo, y espero con ansias el próximo. Saludos desde Perú
Luis Enrique Salazar Carrasco
2024-09-22 04:10:17 +0000 UTCWhat have I done...#sorrynotsorry.
paladar blade
2024-09-22 02:04:17 +0000 UTCHarem protagonist EX is strong as always for ma boi Emiya
Cygfried
2024-09-22 02:03:51 +0000 UTCYou're giving me many ideas.
NimtheWriter
2024-09-22 01:26:43 +0000 UTCWhere did the hood come from!? Anyways thanks for the ch. Also, as I read the bonus part, I couldn't help but remember that in DXD after meeting Azazel he made a device that turned Kiba into a female several times to mess with Issei...just thought I would mention it is all.
paladar blade
2024-09-22 01:20:04 +0000 UTC
