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Need advice.

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Yo, me and Shigiya were making some reviews and critiquing the content of the chapter 29 lime scene.

We analysed what we can improve in the future and how to make it more interesting.

For those who read it, do you have any advice or information to pass onto us? We can compile them and use it to improve our next scene.

Don't hesitate to give your thoughts, I will take them all seriously.

Let your imagination run free!

Comments

I don’t see any issue with Chapter 29 with the lime scene, but then again, I never really get invested in lime scenes and just focus more on the romantic parts.

Bryan Uy


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