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Predators of Denali - Page 58 [sketch]
Added 2021-07-16 06:48:13 +0000 UTCPage 58!
This took a lot longer than I expected. On one hand, I didn't want to start repeating myself in panel/shot/expressions, and the emphasis here is on how different Bailey is/feels than Tala. Not better/worse, just different, and the dialogue should reflect it further.
Panel layout and sequence is -really- hard for me, like dialogue. Sometimes harder than the art itself. Choosing what goes where, in what order, leave room for word bubbles, what's important to show/isn't.. it makes a reall indecisive artist like me even moreso.
The general idea here is Bailey going to town; she's fired up, Massak is still ready, but never expected the soft warm pillow-y-ness of bear..Tala's having fun watching from a different POV, and gets to admire these two now from afar.
Comments
thank you!
FluffKevlar
2021-07-20 00:04:34 +0000 UTCReally good emotion work
Fluffer
2021-07-18 20:24:08 +0000 UTCI object with the fact that Nytro exists
Fluffer
2021-07-17 06:22:58 +0000 UTChaha, thank you! i did like how that came out
FluffKevlar
2021-07-17 05:22:27 +0000 UTC<3 _ <3
WanderingPariah
2021-07-16 18:40:48 +0000 UTCPanel 2 is so fucking good - Bailey's easily your hottest character
Q
2021-07-16 17:13:48 +0000 UTCThe goat fetch soap?
Sakura Wulf
2021-07-16 16:43:18 +0000 UTCHope so tbh
Jeebüüs
2021-07-16 14:42:25 +0000 UTCI dont hope that this is massaks final round! He got the soup so get him at least 2 rounds :D
FurryFan
2021-07-16 09:24:13 +0000 UTCLOVE that second panel. And Tala looks so excited! Wonder what about. :3 As for the flow of the comic, and such, you've done a wonderful job. So, don't stress too much about the indecisiveness thing. I'd rather wait a month for one new page of awesome, than get 4 pages of rushed and less than awesome. Take your time and do what you feel you need to do. :D
Silvador
2021-07-16 07:33:30 +0000 UTCLooks awesome so far, also yeah i do see how that can be difficult to do. Also that's true to, and i can see this happening. But yeah, this page looks great so far, can't wait!
Antoine Davis
2021-07-16 07:28:31 +0000 UTCIs that a possible Tala sticker coming soon?
TirustheVyrus
2021-07-16 06:54:10 +0000 UTCThat internal view insertion angle <3
ScowlingMask
2021-07-16 06:52:22 +0000 UTCoh my lordy!! Tala is way too adorable there!!! gosh I adore her to bits!
The Friendly Deathclaw
2021-07-16 06:51:26 +0000 UTC
