Predators of Denali - Page 28 HD
Added 2019-03-15 13:41:18 +0000 UTCPage 28! Massak really trying to stop Tala from immediately freaking out, and apparently bad jokes seem to work a bit on her. Maybe it's from the minor trauma that funny stuff seems that much funnier, but maybe he really does have a way to help! We'll see what he does up here next.
Firstly, sorry this has been so incredibly late and slow. Fighting insomnia coupled with the tremendous amount of rework, dialogue balance and just sheer stress, this page should've been done weeks ago. I'm liking it much more than it was the first time around, so I'm glad I spent the time on it, but this whole Tala-Massak meet has been alarmingly challenging for me to write and plan. Hopefully it isn't too awful, busy, cheesy etc. I'm always willing to fix or adjust stuff before it's done.
Hope you all are enjoying the comic thus far regardless-- I do plan on doing 29 this month too, so that I'm not falling too behind. I think my next comic I'm gonna skip inking. Guh.
Link to the comic so far:
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/wl8ichc7dqkru7c/AABebK22YENdXaEr3cVYc1asa?dl=0
Comments
Okay, Tala has to be the cutest freaking thing I have ever seen! n_n
Ahawk95
2019-04-10 14:22:07 +0000 UTCSilly Tala, in furry world, anything can be cute!
Conduitry
2019-03-16 00:55:52 +0000 UTCSpeaking as someone who had zero plans of ever shipping Tala with anyone... I'm starting to ship it -_-
Diamondstorm
2019-03-15 22:25:48 +0000 UTCIt was worth the wait. I adore Massak. Having spent some time around Denali myself this one is special to me. Love Massak's explanation of the Aurora Borealis.
Apostrophe(')
2019-03-15 21:41:55 +0000 UTCI love the tooth-sparkle Massak has X3... **PERFECTLY CLEAN**
Scappo
2019-03-15 21:36:52 +0000 UTCThis is good dialogue, I like how this is going
Erin
2019-03-15 20:03:37 +0000 UTCTheir interaction gives me fucking L I F E
Anonymous Trashbag
2019-03-15 19:45:29 +0000 UTCDaw~
Zhet
2019-03-15 13:56:16 +0000 UTCAww poor Tala really needs a hug in that 4th panel. You're really doing a good job making me feel for her Fluff, I just want her to be happy and loved.
ExtremistLine
2019-03-15 13:50:09 +0000 UTCWell, the bad jokes seem to work on me too, yep. But anyways, this page looks beautiful, i also like the bits of info that are given about Kiuguya spirts, hopefully there's more info about these spirts. Also i do wonder how he can help her, maybe they talk for a bit to help her relax and that about their lives and families. Also it's alright, i understand that you're going through a lot. Also no its not awful, busy, cheesy or anything. Also yes I'm enjoying the comic so far, also can't wait till page 29. Also oh, i wonder what the next comic will be. Also, will there be more info about Kiuguya?
Antoine Davis
2019-03-15 13:49:41 +0000 UTC
