Predators of Denali Page 15 Sketch
Added 2018-04-29 10:02:33 +0000 UTCI haven't forgotten! This page lets Tala and Bailey start to relax. Still working on the dialogue for this one, but I also left it blank to hopefully sell the sequence without it. I'll be working on this page later today (Sunday) perhaps on stream, and do the last request stream for the month on Monday the 30th.
I like the idea of making the most out of each panel, in terms of shots and am trying to avoid "filler" panels. I'd love for each one to be fun or sexy to look at, and sell some kind of emotional beat, especially as it heats up further over this page and the next. I hope you all will enjoy it!
Comments
I wish more artists did the dialogue last and tried even half as hard as you to sell it with only the expressions. Why i love your art so much
shadowstarthe1st
2018-04-30 04:23:19 +0000 UTCAgreed! And no, there's really not a lot of porn in my 'main story' idea. Mostly and usually optional. Focus would hopefully be on story and characters first.
FluffKevlar
2018-04-29 21:25:18 +0000 UTCWell I don't ever want it to be "just porn", I'm hoping I can make friendships believable in stuff like this; even with Massak showing up, it doesn't jump straight into sex. I hope in the end it looks to be a whole well-contained story :3
FluffKevlar
2018-04-29 21:24:30 +0000 UTCIt's happening! :D
Kaizer
2018-04-29 21:06:15 +0000 UTCWe need more Bare Bear Butt
The Friendly Deathclaw
2018-04-29 20:20:35 +0000 UTCCute~
Skeleton Man
2018-04-29 19:55:19 +0000 UTCTime to embarrass the wolf! Well... more! I'm glad you want to take your time with it. There's no rush. Just gotta let the scenes evolve organically and at a good natural pace. This is good practice for the eventual chapters of your sci-fi story that will have sex in them - write a story that happens to have sex in it, DON'T write sex scenes that happen to have story around them. Even in erotica, the story should be more than just a vehicle to transport characters' genitals to each other. (And on that topic, when you're eventually working on the sci-fi story, please don't force sex into every chapter or whatever, please. It gets *really* obvious when it's being hamfisted into the plot to try and sell it better.)
Volpethrope
2018-04-29 16:49:14 +0000 UTCI like where this is going. :3
Heresy
2018-04-29 16:38:51 +0000 UTCLesbihonest, they are going to have a major bonding experience soon. I do like the idea of the more personal sort of love story with Tala and Bailey, but I still will be heartbroken when you got to say, "well, it's porn and they just gotta freak it out." (With goat hunk) I never thought I would be sad to get porn from you.
Kenith Fox
2018-04-29 14:15:36 +0000 UTC<obligatory Jaws theme> :P
Silvador
2018-04-29 13:05:53 +0000 UTCi always enjoy a bear behind...
Michael Marcoccio
2018-04-29 11:18:16 +0000 UTCYes, there are some including lakes, streams, and other locations.
Antoine Davis
2018-04-29 10:29:01 +0000 UTCLooks pretty cool so far, i like how you added in the lakes and other locations like in Denali and Alaska. But still, can't wait to see the finished page.
Antoine Davis
2018-04-29 10:27:43 +0000 UTCAh yeah, the "hot spring scene"... a classic. There's hot springs in Alaska right? Haha-
Evangellos
2018-04-29 10:09:29 +0000 UTC
