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C!!9 pages 61-72

edit: Because the previous post is not loading for some (because buggy?) I included the last batch of pages in here as well (and deleted the previous one, exactly when it just started working again X'D). Sorry for any confusion this caused! Shouldn't happen again!

Reuben is just scribbling, like when you have nothing to do while telephoning.

Here's a zoom in on the doodles:

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Comments

I saw via email that you asked (in a now deleted comment? At least it does not show to me in this post) if your comment was annoying. I guess, because I answered to most of the other comments, and not to yours. But this was just a matter of timing, as yours was the last/latest one, and because it was also so long, I did not get to it anymore in the same run like the others. But I wanted to later. I’m trying to use my days a bit more productive, so I am trying to do social media or chats during my dog walks, during calm path were I don’t need to concentrate on the traffic. The above one was not really a comment but a technical issue so I put a small note to that as well. So I’m sorry if this gave the impression of purposely ignoring only YOUR comment.

Yaa

No I did not touch that at all. I will look into it

Yaa

yaa!!! it won’t let me open the google drive of the comics anymore, did you delete it???

Cathi Moench

I love how they became friends so quickly. At the beginning I thought that they would hate each other for months before warming up, bc I thought back then that you may charactize Reuben differently, but his personality is that he is just autistic and blunt and its easy to get along with such ppl especially since Carter is very empathetic. So it just seems like it was iffy first impresion more than actual dislike. And really love how his character developed in these chapters, you did an excellent job with him. It was soo nice to see them have fun. And then the gf shows up x) I am predicting that eventually she will notice that Reuben has feelings for Crush and dump him bc of that, well thats how it usually tends to go. She is v cute, but I liked the long hair on her, felt like it fit her fiesty personality better than that bob lol Carter and her are quite similair, even tho you said Reuben doesn't have a type I am curious about what will you do after that bathroom scene with Scott, thats always hanging over my head whenever I'm reading these pages and previous ones. I am excited to see his potentially more positive development after everything, and maybe to learn his life goals and passions,his hobies or things that he might excel at or how he develops as a goalie, it would be interesting to see him more developed outside of being a pervert or a creep, and to humanize him more maybe? I have no idea whether any of this will happen, but I'm delusional. We will see, but am interested to see that part of story eventually, I didn't forget it. Sorry for this longass comment

Kingie


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