Chap 16 Early Pages - PG29
Added 2024-10-13 02:31:37 +0000 UTCInteresting folks indeed!
Another page tomorrow!
(Thanks so much for all the comments on the previous pages.)
Comments
Gayley? Sully, my son, you're not even trying. 😆
Emily Rochester
2024-10-20 20:22:42 +0000 UTCI keep getting whiplash from the ucla/westwood name drops 😭 I live close + used to work there and it feels so weird to read about in fiction!! imagining it in the 70s makes it more fun :^)
Pidge
2024-10-20 03:21:35 +0000 UTCI just realized if you look closely you can see Sulvain’s handwriting in the notebook 😮
Nekochan
2024-10-13 16:34:46 +0000 UTCso at least six more people to meet in this party ? (based on the shadows.. will we encounter them all ? we shall see)
Meli
2024-10-13 15:03:23 +0000 UTCOh geez yeah he's gotta be OLD. I wonder what age he died at... 😦 I wonder how much she knows too. Glad he's finally going to school though. Never too late haha
Livi
2024-10-13 14:27:06 +0000 UTCBrilliant observations!!! I would not have caught that!! 😍
Missiek43
2024-10-13 13:12:07 +0000 UTCI wonder, does Mar know that he just *looks* like he's 20 something? How old would he be now?? Over 500?!
Missiek43
2024-10-13 13:11:09 +0000 UTCI love Mar's design so much, she's so pretty!! But they're all very cute. Every page in this chapter still has me in awe seeing these characters in more modern designs. I can't wait to meet Raz, too!
Neko-san
2024-10-13 11:19:19 +0000 UTCThey’re all so pretty
thedistortedeye
2024-10-13 10:04:31 +0000 UTCWe could see a butterfly pattern on the back of their head on a previous page, but I never would've guessed that from their name ! Nice catch ✨
Meli
2024-10-13 06:48:38 +0000 UTCFreshmen 🥹🥹🥹 so cute
Livi
2024-10-13 05:19:41 +0000 UTCOff topic but the character design is *muah* exquisite. 🤌
OdacioChoco
2024-10-13 04:21:08 +0000 UTCMittrei is another butterfly name like... Sesam...maybe he is a Morgana too. I am a bit confused by the party, all these people have magical abilities or just the thematic of the party is occultism..
Iselin
2024-10-13 04:05:06 +0000 UTCI noticed it too, and the other two didn't introduced themselves, but were presented by Arrow
Iselin
2024-10-13 03:58:03 +0000 UTCi see sulvain’s notebook but i also peep at another notebook in ilise’s (or mittrei’s?) hand 🫵👀 inch resting……..
Fond Phantom
2024-10-13 03:45:26 +0000 UTCNothingggggg nothing illegal 👀
Nekochan
2024-10-13 03:05:56 +0000 UTCI always get so excited for every single page. This story and these characters are just so unique and your art has such a specific pov. Can't wait for more! 🤩
Ty Waldrop
2024-10-13 02:51:45 +0000 UTCOh they all look so cool! I can't wait to get to know them!! (Mar is such a cute nickname!) The attention to detail!! I just had to confirm and of course Gayley Court is a real place near UCLA!
Missiek43
2024-10-13 02:37:30 +0000 UTCSweet baby is socializing! Good on you, Sul! Hopefully these new folks will treat him well. <3 Still convinced Sul might run into Raz in this chapter, maybe even at this party. I miss my bois being together.
Sang Steppenwolf
2024-10-13 02:36:37 +0000 UTCOoooh right by the cemetery. What are getting up to in that part of town, Sulvain?? 😂
Em
2024-10-13 02:35:46 +0000 UTCReturn of the notebook! ✨✨✨
Nekochan
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