Chap 13 Early Pages - PG67
Added 2023-04-27 03:56:26 +0000 UTCWhat's Adeline up to?
Thanks so much for all the comments on the previous pages!πππ I'll be taking some time to get back to everyone! Thanks so much for your patience!
Comments
I can't imagine the work you put in to get the clothes just right. Drawing clothes in motion has always been one of my greatest frustrations, so bless you for these action scenes!
LostGallifreyan
2023-05-12 17:57:27 +0000 UTCElouan is exactly the right person to go after him!
Mildred
2023-05-02 10:37:30 +0000 UTCI really admire how we are shown Sulvain's new fit in like snip-its and not a full portrait. Of what IS shown, I absolutely approve of!π€€π€£ The belt usage and a figure flattering tailored appearance is so nice.π I like being able to see his frame and figure. Reminding the audience that Sulvain is no fragile man and he is quite a sight. I feel like in another universe he would make good on a track and field team. He has been doing a lot of running lately! ππ
Alma Razo
2023-04-30 12:19:51 +0000 UTCBOOKIN IT ABSOLUTELY BOOKIN IT
Lee
2023-04-28 00:07:21 +0000 UTCGood idea elouan. Someone needs to be there to hull this boy out of the hot pot he's inevitably going to. Poor vivi can't catch a break or Sulvain for that matter. Dresses make for difficult chasing ππ
Seuss
2023-04-27 12:41:03 +0000 UTCOh boy, Vivi can't catch a break... Always something (someone) to worry about! π I'm really looking forward to see more of Γlouan!!
Neko-san
2023-04-27 06:03:16 +0000 UTCAdeline answered the call but I don't think she was prepared for all that rage to come running at her like a bull elephant!!!
Missiek43
2023-04-27 04:54:17 +0000 UTCBaby boo... Aighty lol. What's worse is that the bad guy dude whatever his name is doesn't have Raziol. So this is pretty pointless. It's one of those moments when you're like, babe, dude, hun. Even if he did have your boo, let's slow down and think a moment. Don't wanna run in and get ourselves and your boo killed. Well, he'll figure it out eventually lol.
Elsi
2023-04-27 04:54:08 +0000 UTCOff they go!!!!!!!
GrantedDrop
2023-04-27 04:13:00 +0000 UTCAlso Iβm PSYCHED for some more Γlouan air time
Alys
2023-04-27 04:09:33 +0000 UTCI think itβs important to remember that despite being several hundred years old Sulvain has the ankles of someone whoβs twenty three and we should ultimately celebrate his ability to jump off roofs to cobbled streets below
Alys
2023-04-27 04:08:45 +0000 UTC
