Too tame I guess
Added 2024-04-30 03:04:26 +0000 UTCI am not even sure if this game NTR even tbh. But, I will definitely give the Jack pov perspective. Which is why I want to find a formula that I will like. NTR + Netori. Because that sense of mystery when the girlfriend got stolen behind the MC back is definitely the best choice imo.
But, I will try to think hard for this Paradise Island formula thing while I try more game. Because that isekai elf formula definitely interesting. But not sure if I am able to execute it well. Also, yes, I am totally focusing NTR storyline since I don't know NTS can't tolerate NTR which is my own fault.
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Well, people hated soft resets. That's why I won't bother soft resets. Because, I am avoiding the game from doing everything. I ain't going to make the game do everything and story going all over the place. I am still doing that Paradise Island to have some fun in making a Hardcore Corruption a bit. Netorare is just really restrictive tbh.
Paradox V
2024-04-30 09:55:50 +0000 UTCIn the final of Chapter 1, first Jack and then Sayako had sex with Kana. If it were theoretically possible that Sayako and Jack's cum were compatible and fusion inside of Kana, if Sayako's cum is magical it would work and the potential children would then have genes from all 3, perhaps at least one child could be born as Futa.
Sakui
2024-04-30 08:46:14 +0000 UTCStolen is relative. By the time of the fireworks at the latest, Kana agreed to have two relationships. In his inner mind, Jack knows this but consciously ignores it because he doesn't yet know that Sayako has a dick and if he does, it makes it even worse and more miserable for him. Kana won't be able to hide it forever, then it will be interesting how Jack reacts to it, does he confront the two directly or just watch curiously? and later confronts Sayako about it, since Sayako is good with words, very manipulative and knows exactly what she's doing, it's easy for her. Jack is too naive, he would be pissed off but influenceable, so Sayako can manipulate Jack to her liking. It would be funny, but I don't believe it (would also be too early and too easy) if Sayako (either Ayako or Sanako or both) comes up with the idea of inviting Jack to a drink, but it is manipulated and is actually supposed to transform Jack into a Girl, stealing Jack from Kana and eliminating Male Jack but it doesn't work due to a special magical seal that is on Jack. Just a question: Do the girls actually know about the other Gir's Party members' sexual affairs with Sayako? Would have potential for all Girl's Members if they didn't know that the other Girl's Members also had sex with Sayako. Everyone who is initially pissed off when it comes out and asks themselves why Sayako is doing all this, until the first shard at the earliest, they don't know anything about a third soul in Sayako besides Sanako and Ayako.
Sakui
2024-04-30 08:19:46 +0000 UTCHmm, I do have subscribestar tbh. Because, I really wanted to go for a fuck up fetish. Patreon ToS is so confusing and pretty much limiting. Because I kind of wanted to go for.... a pure fuckery imo. That's why I said, I prefer hardcore corruption lately. Because NTR is kind of restrictive. Due to the slow thing. Since, Sayako still have that magical cum. But it is just so weak.
Paradox V
2024-04-30 07:51:58 +0000 UTCIt's u2u but people usually jump if they want to do something against the TOS. Like the person who did headpats and handholding they went to subscribestar for incest. You could just keep the patreon then open a fanbox if you don't plan on other stuff. Like the guy who made the SAONTR kept the patreon
BananaJezus
2024-04-30 07:45:09 +0000 UTCAlso, I am thinking to jump to other platform one of these days tbh. I am looking at ci-en and pixiv fanbox and stuff in the meanwhile. While, I am working on that Paradise Island in the meanwhile. Sure it is just a japanese platform but... it seems really chill imo.
Paradox V
2024-04-30 07:19:21 +0000 UTCI think I can do that but... I am trying to find something original. Because for chapter 2, I really wanted to focus on Jack. But seeing how this series goes. It is a pure failure imo. It keeps getting bad as well. Since, I want to avoid the game story from going all over the place. I'm in a pure burnout as well imo Since, I really really wanted to focus on Jack backstory and stuff for chapter 2. I had to do the Paradise Island atm though. Find a formula. Since I really wanted to stick with OG game. The original concept of it.
Paradox V
2024-04-30 07:10:44 +0000 UTCYup, because my original vision of the game. It is NTR. But, like you said, too many people tried to change NTR to what it is not. Well, mostly because don't have a really talented gift in writing making the game a depress simulator imo. Since, my writing is pretty tame. This game have a poor execution as well. Since, I really tried to do it like Soraue but... Yeah, I am not even sure if it will work or not tbh. This is what I am trying to find what I like and found out. 1. I am pure nukige kind of guy tbh. Like NPRI. Ain't much into writing a lot or too wordy. Last time I do NTRman formula, people hate quite a lot. I mean, A LOT 2. I am really Netori guy. I like shadow play, but it is just feels so miserable playing as the cuck. Which, I am not sure if isekai elf recipe will work or not. 3. Why I shut down discord? Because it became a poison to me. That most ended up spread a lot of rumors that I don't have a vision and it getting much more worse. I really wanted that chapter 2 to be pure Jack pov so it will be the real NTR. But, I am not sure what NTR fans want and it confused the heck out of me. Some said, I have a huge problem and never satisfied. I am just a perfectionist. But, this current game. It is pure failure and I have to get a side job and pretty much busy lately, even do some research and play some h game as well. This are the only time that I am pretty much free. But, imo, this game? It is just pure failure. I don't have any special card aside the Sayako who can do a lot of stuff. Which again, I am trying to get there asap. Which cause me in a huge burnout now. This is why I am thinking to do a time skip. But, I am kind of regretted to even try to share this game online and with the ideas and try to make a story. I managed to piss quite a lot of people at the same time. Which, I tried my best to keep both side happy and it kind of... burning me out. Did I listen to people too much? For example, I want Joanna back? Nope, more like I did planned to bring her back long time ago. More to I am focusing on the main 4 like Sam suggest. Build up more story on them. This is why I am thinking to find a platform that is... less vocal. The reason I try to talk at f95zone, because I am really excited. People wanted futa on male? Sure I can do it. But it will be there for the fetish but I am not into it tbh. Male on futa also I don't 100% mind doing it tbh. Again, for the fetish. I can fuck story imo. But, it won't make sense in that department on why Sayako even hostile against Jack in the first place. Pixiv fanbox kind of a good place to start tbh. I even tried to update my subscribestar when I can. This is why I want to find a specific platform and be really active there. Patreon..... Not the place tbh.
Paradox V
2024-04-30 06:29:48 +0000 UTCThis could be something Jack sees in a dream as sort if a nightmare set up.by Sayako and we keep the mystery as he has no idea whose banging them and since he's tied up he can't see or stop it
BananaJezus
2024-04-30 05:34:59 +0000 UTCYeah. It was my own fault. Clicked wrong. Ill just say the more platforms the better as long as you can maintain them without going insane(as youll need to update them together).. And I often wonder how far along and how different the game would be if you weren't trying to appease the loudest voices.. And whose to say the loudest voices make up the most support?... Its precisely why people keep listening to the loudest voices that are often a small group of haters who wouldnt support the product monetarily anyway-... That so many industries are failing.. If you created what you wanted in the beginning(which seemed like a great direction imo)... I think you would still have a lot of support. Playing in the middle only makes both sides negative.. But I think even if you shut out all the voices from here on and did what you wanted-.. You would probably still be changing things from original vision from subconscious pressure. You have the bias now of wanting to make the wrong people content at the expense of those silently supporting you. Or so it seems. Its hard to do your own thing when you constantly wonder if this scene will bother them or not. You keep cutting corners more and more due to that reason. Little things here and there. Then when looking at it all as a whole its a lot different than it would have been from all the tiny changes. And even further is that youre conscious of patreon being against certain content even if their entire rules are purposely built to be grey so they can enforce them for any arbitrary thing on a whim. Fanbox is probably best but its got such a small english base.
D0
2024-04-30 05:13:18 +0000 UTCI never deleted anyone comments btw. Never even once, XD. Even there is a lot of negativity, I didn't even delete.
Paradox V
2024-04-30 04:54:33 +0000 UTCWrote a long message here and it got deleted. Sigh.
D0
2024-04-30 04:50:01 +0000 UTCYeah, this is why I said. I know how NTS would go and did post that NTS will end up as NTR tbh. I don't mind working on it. Talk no jutsu won't work for Sayako. This is why I said, to be pure NTS without NTR happens, Sayako needs to be deleted. Which, in this case, I prefer getting her tbh. But, I did think of finding a platform that allows me to disable comments. Like fujino did tbh. Cause I really wanted to go dark and hardcore for this one. So, there won't be some idiots causing a noise like insulting a dev or kink shaming each other. Cause that's the huge negativity happened in my page. Which platform do you think is suitable tbh? I already set up subscribestar and pixiv fanbox.
Paradox V
2024-04-30 04:16:05 +0000 UTCI want to blame someone other than Jack for all this. Which is why I rather it be more NTR than NTRS. If it was NTRS but sayako is manipulating events behind Jacks back still to gain more than trust.. Turning girls against him etc.. Might be better. But don't know a scenario for that. NTRS but with an actual villain that has malicious intent or wants to destroy Jacks happiness from the beginning.
D0
2024-04-30 03:57:16 +0000 UTCYup, but I will continue chapter 2 back when I have released my pent up frustration for a while in Paradise Island. Because I still want to stick with pure NTR like soraue did. Which is, it is pure Jack POV. Not sure if it's even famous tbh. Because that mystery part is the best imo. You will never know when the girl got stolen. I am still thinking a proper execution atm. Because the game is in pure mess imo. Especially NTR part. But, I am not sure if people even like if I merge NTRS tbh. Because that was my OG game concept was. Jack is just a butt of a joke and got so absorbed in NTR fetish that the girls literally got stolen from him.
Paradox V
2024-04-30 03:41:44 +0000 UTCAh so it was... I haven't seen her with hair down- but now I do notice the little bit of pink on sides.. definitely just looks grey though. The dick behind the ass would still be good to add before the animation. the impending insertion build up as Sayako says a few words before she puts it in- and it's good to build up and see the size in comparison. You know what I mean. Teasing is fun. In a game with lots of villains(though this doesn't have those..) it's nice to see variety in shapes and sizes too. Even in a scene which is just a gang of people using a girl- the last one being the biggest to show that it's meaningful enough and points of no-return. Most koikatu just have the exact same sizes so taking turns is less relevant. Sayako should be able to grow and change and fit the role like that.
D0
2024-04-30 03:32:36 +0000 UTCYeah, because I am trying to fix some clipping and try to prepare some... animations as well since I want to keep the quality of the game tbh. This is why I am having a headache. Because it is part of psychology as well, because playing in MMO, playing as a male character just feels miserable tbh. Because playing as a female character just feels good. I don't mind doing futa on male or male on futa. But, the story would go all over the place. Because, in the first place, Sayako are really hostile against Jack. Which, she wouldn't want getting fucked by Jack imo. I mean, it is interesting thought. That's why I am going to do Paradise Island for a moment. That will be fulfill every fetish kind of thing. Like some game did become, because I don't mind turning this game into fulfill every fetish though. But, jesus, I hate the thought of the game become... in a huge pause because I am busy finding a formula. Since, I prefer a lot of sex scenes and less dialogue tbh. I am more to nukige. But yeah, that is Kana. The lighting went all over the place since I want to find a perfect lightings. Yup, it is animated, the feet have a clipping which I will try to fix it later as well, XD
Paradox V
2024-04-30 03:26:57 +0000 UTCNTR + Netori... I can't think of too many games that do that.. Usually it's NTR with optional heroine perspective.. To be both NTR and Netori is like clashing the appeal of 2 extreme genres.. It's like playing against yourself.. Being the protagonist and the antagonist.. And I don't even know who that is!... It's not Kana... and their hair looks grey. So maybe it's tame enough. >.>/... Kana could still be safe.. I'm sure other people know I just haven't played recent versions- hoping for a full chapter. Think in a scene like this- it'd be better for the dick to be behind the characters ass- a be a bit more threatening. Afterall if this is in motion then it's clipping badly- but it would work as a CG if it was behind her.
D0
2024-04-30 03:19:26 +0000 UTC
