Went back to this
Added 2023-12-27 08:29:09 +0000 UTCCurrently, the way I read it. Sayako are so petty. I have a really high standard to make an interesting and good villain. So, I will try to be wordy a bit.
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this is why I am scratching my head. Sayako is really petty on how I read the line I made for her. That's why I feel NTR route is not really solid. I also didn't account some only play one side, XD Chapter 1, why I make most of the sex scene take from futa pov is because Sanako and Ayako finally come to term of having such body. They got a bit more confident.
Paradox V
2023-12-27 14:28:01 +0000 UTCSuffering from lack of being able to fuck women. Sayako here to fix that.. Will say the first Sayako pov scene where she formally convinces them to go along with her and want the girls too(in her room at the dukes place after Jack sleeps) is pretty out of place in the ntr route. Until then in the NTR route there is nothing much that shows any of sayako at all- then you are suddenly given the omniscient view of her trying to convince the two. But not sure how much you are going to be changing in chapter 1 for that route.
D0
2023-12-27 10:42:36 +0000 UTC
