Page 9-11 Roughs
Added 2024-11-11 05:40:12 +0000 UTCWas really hoping to get this done, as well as a few Owen sketch studies, AND a few more pages of roughs. But my brain got cooked on these and I have to call it a night. I'm ZAPPED.
I'd loveeee to show you all what I rewrote and squeezed into this door-to-kitchen scene, and show you all the wip roughs for those pages. But it'll have to wait. I'm thinking I might post the small script change for the bull+ tiers. I've rewritten a LOT of the script throughout the past few months, but a lot of it is in flux, and I don't know if I want to commit to those changes and put them in the light just yet. But the small kitchen scene? I might just share it if I feel bold.
The reason I'm thickening out this lead-in? I wanted to give us a little more foreplay, get us back into the space, AND give me room to explore scent stuff again by slowing it down a tad. I hate to add pages, but it seemed correct to load the front a bit to give the back end more impact, rather than RUSH toward it.
Layouts for some reason reallllly get to me; I think it's being forced to pick a lane and make choices. Nothing ever feels like the 'right' choice and I get a little overly analytical.
Excited to start thickening out page 9 this week. Try to get the pencils all cleaned up and sorted.
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I know how everybody wants to gun for the finish, but boy that little extra sparkle makes the end so potent! 😵
Shalt
2024-11-15 21:06:13 +0000 UTCAw I love that take! YES more friendship. I gotta show that off more... I just get too horny and want to do sexy chapters all the time ah.
Amadose
2024-11-14 18:44:58 +0000 UTCYes! I adore this lead in and the personal touches given to imply that there’s actual friendship to support the kink! It makes me believe this is working and a comfy space to enjoy with loved ones! Can’t wait to see you work your magic on these sketches!
Shalt
2024-11-14 04:42:33 +0000 UTCYIPEEEE
spatterlight
2024-11-12 17:25:55 +0000 UTCawesome nice ass shot and cute teasing bunny
AL871
2024-11-11 21:32:52 +0000 UTCThank you Glyn! I hope it doens't stall the pacing tooooo much - Iv'e a lot I want to cover when they get to the couch. But I'll see how it feels when I get there, and then start to lay it out. Maybe it'll flow!
Amadose
2024-11-11 19:39:43 +0000 UTCYeah that shot is all I could think about =D I really wanted a 'nick in the negative space of their bodies as they ignore him'. So glad you dig it!
Amadose
2024-11-11 19:39:00 +0000 UTCI sort of picture them as nesting dolls; each fitting into each others space equally, a Owen-Nick-Judy spoon-sandwich. I also love the idea that they found themselves the biggest fox they could ;D Love me a floofed-tail =D
Amadose
2024-11-11 19:37:37 +0000 UTCI thought it was a fun way to have Owen even cuck him on the conversation/soft-reminder, by showing up and interrupting. I just can't help myself ;D And thank you! I'm clicking with the script edit a bunch.
Amadose
2024-11-11 19:35:40 +0000 UTCHe'll find out shortly enough ;D THanks Silvvvver!
Amadose
2024-11-11 19:34:18 +0000 UTCAW heck thank you =D
Amadose
2024-11-11 19:33:42 +0000 UTCMmm, the slow burn always burns the hottest for me! I love this new pacing. <3
Glyn Wolf
2024-11-11 16:31:11 +0000 UTCI looooove the foreplay I love that we get more! framing Nick between them in that last panel is such a spectacular shot, specially cause Owen is doing what I've wanted to do since I saw which outfit won for Judy XD
Diego P
2024-11-11 14:22:09 +0000 UTCYesssss! It’s so on. Making NNN a survival run already. I love involuntary responses like Nick’s tail floofing. A sign of honesty cutting through the confidence. LOVE the size difference a lot. He can just scoop her up without a thought and she’s gone. Owen seems so imposing and intimidating in size but easily puts it to rest with his real down to earth attitude. So good.
Rickochet
2024-11-11 12:10:45 +0000 UTCWow, looks really awesome! I think the emphasis on foreplay is a good idea. I wouldn't mind an extra page or so, foreplay is exciting! I love the detail of Nick's nervousness and Judy acknowledgement and letting him know its okay to stop it if he wants (even though they get interrupted by Owen lol)
Connor :3
2024-11-11 09:11:24 +0000 UTCDamn🤩
Lucifer Lawless
2024-11-11 08:36:49 +0000 UTC🥴 Damm this looks all realy Good, love the Fast Shift from Careing for the Cuck to adoring the Bull. You ar Doing a Great Job showing of the Dinamic between them and i cant say how mutch i love the Idea that Nick gets To Feel how Tight a Cage can be, i wonder if Nick would like to be Made fun of a tiny but tight Cage?🤔🤗 I would anyway
Silver Pet
2024-11-11 06:51:44 +0000 UTCAwesome
Prettyboi100
2024-11-11 06:11:37 +0000 UTCAwwww =D Thank you Izzy!! Even as I posted them I was feeling the desire to change them. But gotttttta call it and move forward. I'm exccccite to finally have them at Owen's and get them all playing again!
Amadose
2024-11-11 06:08:30 +0000 UTCAw that's lovely to hear - I was feeling frustrated that they weren't... punchy enough! Means a lot that you like them!
Amadose
2024-11-11 06:07:38 +0000 UTCThank you Jacky! D
Amadose
2024-11-11 06:07:03 +0000 UTCI am SO excited for these pages. Got me sitting here full of antici..........pation for the next page!
IzzyMuldoone
2024-11-11 05:51:36 +0000 UTCGosh... so perfect!
Reynard
2024-11-11 05:45:40 +0000 UTCVery lovely
Jacky Blue
2024-11-11 05:42:04 +0000 UTC
