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Page 9-11 Roughs

Was really hoping to get this done, as well as a few Owen sketch studies, AND a few more pages of roughs. But my brain got cooked on these and I have to call it a night. I'm ZAPPED.

I'd loveeee to show you all what I rewrote and squeezed into this door-to-kitchen scene, and show you all the wip roughs for those pages. But it'll have to wait. I'm thinking I might post the small script change for the bull+ tiers. I've rewritten a LOT of the script throughout the past few months, but a lot of it is in flux, and I don't know if I want to commit to those changes and put them in the light just yet. But the small kitchen scene? I might just share it if I feel bold.

The reason I'm thickening out this lead-in? I wanted to give us a little more foreplay, get us back into the space, AND give me room to explore scent stuff again by slowing it down a tad. I hate to add pages, but it seemed correct to load the front a bit to give the back end more impact, rather than RUSH toward it.

Layouts for some reason reallllly get to me; I think it's being forced to pick a lane and make choices. Nothing ever feels like the 'right' choice and I get a little overly analytical.

Excited to start thickening out page 9 this week. Try to get the pencils all cleaned up and sorted.

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Comments

I know how everybody wants to gun for the finish, but boy that little extra sparkle makes the end so potent! 😵

Shalt

Aw I love that take! YES more friendship. I gotta show that off more... I just get too horny and want to do sexy chapters all the time ah.

Amadose

Yes! I adore this lead in and the personal touches given to imply that there’s actual friendship to support the kink! It makes me believe this is working and a comfy space to enjoy with loved ones! Can’t wait to see you work your magic on these sketches!

Shalt

YIPEEEE

spatterlight

awesome nice ass shot and cute teasing bunny

AL871

Thank you Glyn! I hope it doens't stall the pacing tooooo much - Iv'e a lot I want to cover when they get to the couch. But I'll see how it feels when I get there, and then start to lay it out. Maybe it'll flow!

Amadose

Yeah that shot is all I could think about =D I really wanted a 'nick in the negative space of their bodies as they ignore him'. So glad you dig it!

Amadose

I sort of picture them as nesting dolls; each fitting into each others space equally, a Owen-Nick-Judy spoon-sandwich. I also love the idea that they found themselves the biggest fox they could ;D Love me a floofed-tail =D

Amadose

I thought it was a fun way to have Owen even cuck him on the conversation/soft-reminder, by showing up and interrupting. I just can't help myself ;D And thank you! I'm clicking with the script edit a bunch.

Amadose

He'll find out shortly enough ;D THanks Silvvvver!

Amadose

AW heck thank you =D

Amadose

Mmm, the slow burn always burns the hottest for me! I love this new pacing. <3

Glyn Wolf

I looooove the foreplay I love that we get more! framing Nick between them in that last panel is such a spectacular shot, specially cause Owen is doing what I've wanted to do since I saw which outfit won for Judy XD

Diego P

Yesssss! It’s so on. Making NNN a survival run already. I love involuntary responses like Nick’s tail floofing. A sign of honesty cutting through the confidence. LOVE the size difference a lot. He can just scoop her up without a thought and she’s gone. Owen seems so imposing and intimidating in size but easily puts it to rest with his real down to earth attitude. So good.

Rickochet

Wow, looks really awesome! I think the emphasis on foreplay is a good idea. I wouldn't mind an extra page or so, foreplay is exciting! I love the detail of Nick's nervousness and Judy acknowledgement and letting him know its okay to stop it if he wants (even though they get interrupted by Owen lol)

Connor :3

Damn🤩

Lucifer Lawless

🥴 Damm this looks all realy Good, love the Fast Shift from Careing for the Cuck to adoring the Bull. You ar Doing a Great Job showing of the Dinamic between them and i cant say how mutch i love the Idea that Nick gets To Feel how Tight a Cage can be, i wonder if Nick would like to be Made fun of a tiny but tight Cage?🤔🤗 I would anyway

Silver Pet

Awesome

Prettyboi100

Awwww =D Thank you Izzy!! Even as I posted them I was feeling the desire to change them. But gotttttta call it and move forward. I'm exccccite to finally have them at Owen's and get them all playing again!

Amadose

Aw that's lovely to hear - I was feeling frustrated that they weren't... punchy enough! Means a lot that you like them!

Amadose

Thank you Jacky! D

Amadose

I am SO excited for these pages. Got me sitting here full of antici..........pation for the next page!

IzzyMuldoone

Gosh... so perfect!

Reynard

Very lovely

Jacky Blue


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