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QnA Script WIP 80% done

I've been sitting on this as I tinker and change things, but I thinnnnk we're at a stage where I can show it off a bit!

Keep in mind it'll change a WHOLE lot; for example, right now it's just too much text for a short little comic. I've also not included any of the question-askers names yet =) 

But this'll give you a good idea of what I want to do in this inbetween chapter!

LMK what you think? But also - not looking for ideas to add to it.

None of it is cannon yet!

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SCRIPT DRAFT 1

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Page 1

A restless Judy is squashed between Owen and Nick in a spooning sleeping three-way.


Sitting up and scooting away, maybe with a brief look back at her boys, we see her leave the bedroom.


Page 2

A light clicks on, and we see Judy plop down onto the couch. She's wearing Owen's Tank top that's WAYYYY too big for her, maybe with a 'TAME' logo written on the front. We might get the occasional nip-flash as she gesticulates later. The tank top is covered in Owen's fur. Maybe she is scrunching on a midnight carrot, and using it for added effect.

Next to her are discarded clothes, and a used fleshlight, from the night before.

She grabs her laptop and prop's it up. Half a second later, she starts talking to it.


'Heyyyy guys.

~ Can't sleep.

So... impromtu QnA time!?

Just me today.'


A question DINGS into the screen:

[Late Night Rabbit Stream, hell yeah. Can't sleep huh? Where are we, what's with the fleshlight and get up!?]

'Oh, haha! I guess I look a little out of place huh?

Sir, I'll have you know, I'm sat at home, on my couch. Owe- I mean- Bull, is staying the night, and I'm still a little sore and vibing from last night. I run pretty hot as is, so it can take a little while for me to cool down.

And this? ah-'

Judy picking up fleshlight next to her with a =p face

'-well, Fox, wasn't allowed to... you-know, and kept himself busy with this little lady... I'm sorry, I should have cleaned up a bit-'



Page 3

Judy, pulls affectionately on her top, maybe blushing:

'As for the get-up... well, things have changed a whole lot since I last did one of these.

The tank top belongs to Bull, and I'm wearing it... because it turns me on.

Let's do some questions!'


[question about where things are going 'give us a report!' sort of question]

Judy: Sure! Let's get into it. Well, as you well know, since the last Q&A, my cuckold-of-a-husband asked Bull to step up and be more... bullish! Claim MORE, not hold back, push us... you-know, all that stuff. And, we've been busy doing just that!

It's not just having bonus sex with a hot kinky fox anymore. He's become... I don't know... demanding, threatening, aggressive... dangerous almost. But in all the best ways, while still being so caring, considerate, and intimate. Ah, ha, I struggle to describe it!?

He... pursues me, claims me, steals me away from my husband, in front of him no-less!

... and I... let him. My body wants it. 

Like a deep primal part of me that's wild and free, and yearns to be caught... and... sigh <3

It's been some scary sexy fun so far!

We're at this crazy stage now, where we've given this man, our alpha, all the keys to the barn and he can just... do as he likes, make demands on us *and our marriage*. Obviously, that's not really true at all, and WE hold all the keys, but in the game we're playing right now? My pussy is HIS plaything now. My husband his toy. 

And cripes, you guys, I friggin' love it. I've never felt so... sexy, and powerful. I am having so much fun. And hell's bells, so are my foxes.



[don't you feel guilty?]

Do I feel guilty when I tell Fox I came thinking about Bull? When I tell my husband our Alpha is coming over because I need a fuck, and that his cock isn't enough? No. Not really, not anymore. I've been learning to lean in. 

The boys encourage me, and if I'm perfectly honest I've been enjoying that... femdom-edge. It makes me feel powerful!

It's not something I ever saw myself getting into- being mean to my Fox, doesn't feel natural. He's my complicated, slick, and sly street-smart boy. You'd be lucky to meet him, he's AMAZING, and pretending he's any less than that feels strange. But, when you see what it does to him, especially when it's us three together, it's so rewarding. I feel like I see him. 

Sex between Fox and me has changed a bit, it's gotten rich, deep, and layered. 

[judy helping nick rub one out while he looks at a tablet of her fucking Owen]

I love him so much, and treating him as the-cuck-he-is brings us all so much perverse joy. I don't feel much guilt for that.



[worry/where does this go/end?]

Yeah, I have some wild fantasies about all the different directions, where we're heading, and how we might get there. And honestly when I'm not horny, some of the 'what if's can freak me out a bit. But I try to stay in the here and now. Who knows what'll happen tomorrow or next week or year! And does it really matter? Right now this chase is all the fun we can dream of, my fox is happier than he's ever been and my sex life is just incredible. And, heck you guys, that's coming from a rabbit!


[your hurting your relationship! FEAR question]

Cripes. I don't know if I should dignify you all with another response on this, but...

People always reach out to us with their own fears in mind; as I don't know myself and our relationship well enough. 'What if this destroys your marriage? What if Fox gets hurt? What if. What if. What if...' But the reality is we're talking ALL THE TIME. This... play is all done with so much consideration. You all only get snippets; the horny stuff Fox is excited to share! What you don't see are the long and frankly boring conversations. The moments we say 'no' to Bull and go watch a movie or whatever!

I've... learned not to skip on the communication. My fox and our relationship is the most important thing in my life, and if I ever felt like that bond was at risk I'd address it, and right now, you guys? It feels stronger than ever. 


[What if he orders you to stop having sex with Nick completely? Would you do it?]

Fucccck. Haha, Dang. Well... Let's assume Fox is watching this a little later, eh? Hi honey. <3

Judy runs her hand down and touches herself.

Mmmmfffh. Let's see. My pussy belongs to Bull. So... if he ever decided that he didn't want to keep sharing it. Well, I wouldn't have a choice... right?'

Eyes closed Judy.

I won't pretend I haven't thought about it 'wink'


Judy grins and hit's the keyboard.

'Recording ended!'

'Ok stream, this has been fun. Although, maybe not the cool down I'd hoped for...'

bites lip

'Quick request for you hanger ons?'


[Flip over and SHOW the mess that Bull/Owen left in you!]

[Write NO CUCKS on your Pussy!]

[ding ding ding]

'Whoa!!! ahah. You guys... Ok. Hang on.'

Judy disappears for a second

and her wet gooey mound reappears in front of the screen.

'Just for you.'

We watch as she awkwardly writes in Sharpie 'No cucks' on her mound. 

'Haha wow. That's. So dirty... ah. Amazing'

She pats her mound in a 'good girl type triple pat'

'Mmph. The boys will love it. Ok you guys, good night. And thanks as ever for all the love and support all this time <3 Means a lot.'


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I think I can probably trim a lot of the 'what if' section down, and maybe speed up the cold-open! The dream would be to cutt in about half.


Also as some news; I'm messing with making a PDF of the whole comic so far - but last time I hit export it was 600mb - so I need to find a way to reduce it down - I think Patreon has a 200mb file cap, and I want the pdf to be loadable on a phone.


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Patreon sometimes shrinks images, so check the attachments for the higher-res images!

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All The Good Stuff - Links Page

(An up-to-date index of all the chapter and Patreon page links!)

Comments

Yeah! I might do that! Or maybe I split it up into 200mb sections: But I put a pause on the process, because I really want to get the QnA pages rolling.

Amadose

What about uploading the pdf file on Dropbox or Mega and share the link?

sms

I'm thinking about doing something like that! Keeping it at pencils, or loose inks; so that it flys by more smoothly! Some of the stuff feels too important to trim out and I'm having too much fun writing it up/laying it out atm.

Amadose

Something I see from a lot of other creators doing Ask the Characters is to bring the art down to sketch level to help answer more questions in a more stress free way. That might make it feel not on the same level as the main storyline, but also, since this feels like such a huge bonus for us anyway, I really wouldn't mind seeing it as a wind-down relaxing thing for you to do instead of worry that it be at the same quality level, I hope that makes sense.

Doa

This is all really great.

Retromancer


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