Ties That Bind - Page 12 WIP (Pencils)
Added 2022-08-09 20:16:37 +0000 UTCFinished these pencils up on Sunday, but Monday was so dang busy at work that I didn't have time to share it with you all!
Pencils for page 12!
I've got lots of up-and-down feelings about this one so far. Lots I'd like to redraw. Like the arm in the first panel (I've redrawn it several times now and it still looks weirdsies?) Or some of the camera angles - feeling a little... flat. But I don't want to rework forever, so am just gonna move forward and see how it washes out as I ink it.
At the very least the beats for the page feel good and intense. So even if some of the anatomy isn't perfect, I think the page will land. Let me know what you think! I'm excited for this intense 'kiss' moment =D
Hoping you all have a lovely week ahead of you all =D
Text version is in the attachments.
---
Patreon sometimes shrinks images, so check the attachments for the higher-res images!
---
All The Good Stuff - Links Page
(An up-to-date index of all the chapter and Patreon page links!)
Comments
You can't throw that at me without ALSO tossing an idea or two my way =D What would you do to personalize an Owen brand a bit more fully? I'd not want to go too hard on the details; I don't think branding can be too detailed and I think it's a lot more 'blurry' than, say, a tattoo. Yeah it's been fun to see everyone enjoy the doodle!
Amadose
2022-08-11 17:10:49 +0000 UTCI love it all, but especially that under the table doodle with Judy, like others have said. That "O" brand or tattoo is a little boring, though. I'm no visual artist, and I completely understand this is a doodle and a WIP and may never be in the comic but I'd like something a little more personalized to Owen if Judy does get branded/tattooed. But then again, if that does happen it should be something that can be drawn pretty easily so a simple O might be the answer.
Retromancer
2022-08-11 01:47:53 +0000 UTC=D Thanks bud! It's been slow graft on the inks so far - but I think I've gotten a fair bit of the tough stuff out of the way =D
Amadose
2022-08-11 00:19:19 +0000 UTCOh yeah, loving the look of this one~
Pheeze
2022-08-10 22:47:13 +0000 UTC
