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Vote and General Litmus Test

Yeesh, been a while since we've done this huh? A good ol' fashioned Poll!

With the work on the Escalation chapter aka Ties That Bind, slowly rolling along, and a handful of conversations under my belt on the future and design of the story. I thought it would be good to take stock and see how you higher-tier bad-asses are all feeling for the future.

Something that's been floating in my head is the plan for the next several chapters.

Mild spoilers: For those of you who haven't read the Ties That bind 90% script: this chapter is an 'escalation' where we're setting things up to be more intense for the future, and opening up the playpen. It's got me thinking about is the stuff afterward.

More spoilers: Originally I had designs on the NEXT chapter being the moment when Nick is given his first chastity cage. But I'm starting to have more thoughts. I'm wondering if it's too rushed. - I know, I know, I too want to see Nick wearing a cage!

But maybe we ought to have a Judy and Nick chapter BEFORE that one - where Nick is scared of his desires, Judy gives him the go-ahead to 'stop' but they decide to steam ahead. A moment of pause and reflection and communication. She was excited to hear him ask Owen to escalate. Proud of him for being so brave and honest with his feelings. It filled her heart. She’s excited to see what Owen comes up with next. But would completely understand if it’s all too much or time to pause- he is her priority and it's only fun if he's having fun too...

For example:

Judy: What’s up?

Nick: Are we going too far? Is this… too much? Am I hurting US?

Judy: Oh honey! Come here...

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Nick: it’s all I think about, it’s all I jerk off to

Judy: … yeah me too. But is that bad?

Nick:  No. Maybe. I don’t know. I love you, I know that.

Judy:  and I love you. Nothing can change that. So what if we have sex a little differently. I don’t care. I love it

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Nick: After I saw you guys tie… I mean this is real, it’s getting real.

I was the only man to do that with you… till now.

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Judy: I only want to do this with you, together as a team.


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I was reminded recently that the impact of my story is in giving Nick and Judy space to be human, emotional, flawed, and in love. A real relationship. Maybe I should give it more space before we level up the kink.

Originally Id had planned on doing an emotional jealousy (maybe Poly) chapter AFTER the cage one, but maybe that's too far away.

Thoughts friends?

Separately I'm attaching up a screenshot of my document that contains all my ideas. This thing is getting WILD haha. Let me know if you want a teaser sentence or two from a 'zone'? Always game to give you guys a few teasers of what goes through my head.

Also; a reminder that you guys can always reach out and tell me you're thoughts. You guys pay the extra bucks so I want to know how you're feelin'!


Vote and General Litmus Test

Comments

Right? It's such a real experience - kinks; they aren't just straight lines of horny. They're filled with ups and downs.

Amadose

As someone who has healt with "drops" in the lifestyle I can see this hitting Nick hard the first time that it become "real" . Many times I have sat and over thought things. You could even combine them, have jude walk in after sending Owen off and coming in to Nick standing there looking at his cage.. or even the next day when he goes and uses the bathroom looks down and starts "freaking out"

A Mad Man with a Box

I love this a WHOLE lot - you've given me a lot to think about, thank you Jim! I imagine she feels guilt and worry at just how much she enjoyed it all. It would be really good for her to air that out at the same time as Nick. I love these too; 'Maybe Judy misses the intimacy of the tie. Or starts to worry that Nick is feeling distant. ' I'm also delighted at the bar service idea ha. Though I do like the idea that this chapter has zero-Owen in it. Really give the couple their time with no outside pressures. All just brewing in my head atm.

Amadose

I might be in the minority here but I really would like to see Judy have some reservations. So far every time we have seen any angst or hesitation it's come from Nick, with Judy quickly convincing him. Maybe Judy misses the intimacy of the tie. Or starts to worry that Nick is feeling distant. Maybe she thinks Nick is pushing too hard now, or she is getting overwhelmed. I'd love to see Nick reassuring her he still loves her, despite her "being Owen's." Letting her know he still wants this, or offering to give her a break. Maybe the chapter starts with Judy telling Nick this, and ends with Nick explaining it to Owen at a bar, and then Nick servicing Owen in the bar's bathroom since this group seems really into Nick and Owen action. Just some thoughts.

jim

As someone, who’d love to see nothing more, than that foxy locked up, denied and squirming: I like this a whole lot. Straight from escalation to chastity does feel a bit rushed. And I mean that both from an emotional way, as addressed here, but I also wouldn’t mind some more spicy stuff from this point of their cucky journey! ;D I was planning on suggesting something along these lines as a pencil only thing, but this is far better! Our lovely couple deserves some (high)quality time together! I’d love to see a line where Judy gives him the choice for a full stop. And of course, him not wanting that.... It would make everything that comes even better! He had his talk with Owen, now it’s time for his wife! And maaaybe, once the more emotional stuff is cleared, and there might be some pages left to fill, you could show the change in their sexual dynamic... You know, the two of them having some fun together, but with Judy being distinctly more dominant? Would be a nice transition to what’s to come! :D

Fen

I think a little checkin like this is a perfect idea!!!!!

Mikey

As someone, who’d love to see nothing more, than that foxy locked up, denied and squirming: I like this a whole lot. Straight from escalation to chastity does feel a bit rushed. And I mean that both from an emotional way, as addressed here, but I also wouldn’t mind some more spicy stuff from this point of their cucky journey! ;D I was planning on suggesting something along these lines as a pencil only thing, but this is far better! Our lovely couple deserves some (high)quality time together! I’d love to see a line where Judy gives him the choice for a full stop. And of course, him not wanting that... Would make everything that comes feel a lot better and less ‘forced’. He had his talk with Owen, now it’s time for his wife! And maybe, once the more emotional stuff is cleared, and there might be some pages left to fill, you could show the change in their sexual dynamic. You know, the two of them having some fun together, but with Judy being distinctly more dominant? Would be a nice transition to what’s to come! :D

Fen

Here is my thing. The last several pages, and even more then that since their Cuck was introduced have been nothing but sex. I have stopped paying attention for a good while because I know I can just wait and come back and to no surprise, they are still having sex. Nick has been thrown so far to teh wayside, he may as well not even be in teh comic anymore. This is more like 50 Shades of Judy at this point. I loved this early on when I could see Nick and Judy developing their sex life and having fun with it, even with Buck early on with the added risk. Even having more encounters where they just seem...friends with their cuck, but still showcasing that NIck and Judy are in fact a couple ( married couple? Didnt see rings). Truth be told I was about to cancel my subscription, until I saw ( despite them STILL having sex) Owen Sounded off to Nick about being worried about Judy. For the first time in like..10 pages or more it felt like there was more to this story. A Chastity Cage isn't gonna help that I feel, its just gonna be more the same we have had the last 10 or so pages

Blindriver

Like most of folks here, I agree with the idea and it makes Nicks and Judys relationship more natural and human. Jumping straight to chastity is a bit too big leap without discussion.

Jouni Mustonen

Others have already said this so well, so I don't have anything to add. I wholeheartedly support the idea of this natural progression as it's what makes your story so unique. ❤

AngelOD

I honestly would love to see Judy and Nick have this little heart to heart talk about their situation, I am sure many people within the cuckold community have had the same talk with their lovers. It brings a good sense of reality to the fantasy :)

Spooky Boogie

Personally speaking, the big hook in this series was that there was a focus on characters in equal measures to the sexually elicit stuff. I enjoy seeing the characters talk to each other and have relationships and deal with the imperfections of that. What has been laid out so far, overall, has felt like a natural progression and I like that cutting the sex scenes or the dialogue scenes hurts the story overall for me. They work so well together that they need each other to be a full experience. I don’t think having a chapter or part of one dedicated to talking about a new step in the relationship of these characters deviates from what has come before. Judy and Nick have been a team from the beginning and not talking about it does break some immersion for me. That communication and natural profession has helped elevate the story to something that it couldn’t have been without it, in my opinion. Thank you for coming to my Cucktalk.

Rickochet

Sure sure! The chatty chapters tend to fly by; with fewer genitals/full-bodies and more face-work I can sail by pretty fast.

Amadose

Oh dang, yeah I've 'imagined' a Owen on Nick senario, but its too hot and far away for me to think on for long. It's very ethereal to me atm.

Amadose

Looking forward to see where you are taking this. Maybe you can make this concept into a half chapter? Maybe 5 pages instead of the regular 10? So the wait for the much anticipated chapter with the cage doesn't take as long? Just some thoughts, keep up the good work!

DashieLashie

I love this idea, the big intimate talks are a huge element of this comic and it'd feel unnatural without this kind of struggle and hesitation, A big part of why I loved this comic so much was Owen including Nick in the aftercare, it was so important and will be in the future. I'd love to see Nick in a cage but the road there is just as exciting, I'd also love to see Owen fuck Nick, and if that ever happens I'd love to see the road there too!!

Diego P

Oooo I hadn't pulled the Bi-aspect into my considerations. I think you have some really good points/seeds of an idea. Honestly, in my head, the framework for the chapter would be Judy coming back from a tryst (or Owen leaving), and Judy gets a cold reception as she teases/starts to dish the info. When she realizes, she stops the 'play' and checks in as a wife. That's when the convo cracks open. But I'm far away form this chapter so these are just floating ideas atm.

Amadose

Awwwww - that's a beautiful visual! gonna just jot that one down 0_0

Amadose

I think this sounds good. It would be a good chance to explore, a bit deeper, the details of what they each get from this arrangement psychologically. I, personally, like the idea of them having this discussion perhaps before an arranged meet-up. Perhaps Owen is on his way over and, in anticipation of his arrival, memories of the Knotting incident has given rise to some doubts. But, perhaps, as their conversation comes to a close, Nick has talked it out a little more and come to grips with the reality, or reconciles the idea that the now somewhat bisexual nature of this relationship means that Owen is there for his pleasure also (more directly now than he was indirectly before) - and not just for Judy. He's not so much an outsider looking in, but an active participant. As a result, when Owen arrives, perhaps he's the first one to make a move to welcome him in? Just spitballing. I'm all in on that Owen/Nick action haha. I look forward to seeing where this goes :)

Xin

We suffer and wait so that Nick feels it harder later ;D Uggggh, I want to draw him wrigging in that tiny-cage super bad!

Amadose

Heck yeah. We're gonna elevate this fetish ;D

Amadose

So glad you are connecting to the idea! I feel that way super-strongly too. Having that moment, really helps the future events feel considered and decided upon. Plus it just gives us a reprieve from the KINK, which makes it land all the harder when it DOES come. <3 <3 <3

Amadose

just imagining nick being anxious then at the end him presenting his key in a ring box to judy like a proposal

ocaron

I personally love the human aspect of the relationship , its cute and sees the characters in an interesting and unique light . I would love the extra chapter , even if chastity Nick takes longer to get to <3

Radicalweegee

I do love the idea of Owen being more relationship and considerate of something a-miss. I'll jot the idea down Andry =D

Amadose

Wholesome NTR? O.o that's a new one heheh

Carson Smith

I love the idea of a clearing the air, recollection piece myself. I wanna see Nick in chastity so goddamn much, but I think they really need this. Especially after the ramp up in the relationship between Nick Judy and Owen where the relationship dynamic which was already changing has solidified sum of you know what I mean, like Owen said Judy is his woman now, Nick is the Cuckold and the self imposed rules are now enforced rules for their relationship going forward. To sum up my rambly thoughts. I love the idea even if it'll be relatively low on hornyness.

Walter Denny

Ha! So glad! NTR but all consensual and friendly and fun.

Amadose

My NTR senses are tingling ~

Carson Smith

Dear Amadose, I think for a moment and back up something I've been thinking, the one that... Your Judy and your Nick, are not the same as in the movie, I am just opining that maybe Judy must have made a mistake at some point. That Nick slowly starts to feel out of it (because we all have a limit) until he gets to a point where he doesn't want to be around when Judy is with Owen, the doe wouldn't realize it until Owen tells her! That would be Judy's mistake, to sink into lust completely and forget that it's a game, at that point, they would have their talk and besides.... A well deserved "too cuck" break and that after that break, Nick would be the one asking for the cage. Just a thought, a little insecurity and missteps, show that Owen is not just the stud who only thinks about fucking. Love: Andry Mercado

Andry SilverFang

Yeah, I might make them feel emotions that aren't happiness, from time to time, but the overall arc will be a happy one. I think there is a lot to be said for cuckold anxiety and fear of your kinks. It feels very real. Its just before we jump into the deep end that we're scared the most.

Amadose

As I said as long as everyone is happy I'm going to enjoy it...now cause of inspiration I'll go work on projects to reciprocate the enjoy I get from your work. (Cause I like the idea that I can give you at least half the enjoyment you give me) ... just realized this is a comment.

Tigerchris

That would be fun!

Amadose

I would love to see Nick get pegged

No rush on any of this too. I've been thinking we might do a few polls here and there to see how we're all vibing with the scripts and direction. And don't sweat it - people's opinions here won't steer the ship - but also, I do want to know what your all thinking - I want to make something we're all excited for - and don't want to just design this all in the dark =)

Amadose


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