Yeesh, been a while since we've done this huh? A good ol' fashioned Poll!
With the work on the Escalation chapter aka Ties That Bind, slowly rolling along, and a handful of conversations under my belt on the future and design of the story. I thought it would be good to take stock and see how you higher-tier bad-asses are all feeling for the future.
Something that's been floating in my head is the plan for the next several chapters.
Mild spoilers: For those of you who haven't read the Ties That bind 90% script: this chapter is an 'escalation' where we're setting things up to be more intense for the future, and opening up the playpen. It's got me thinking about is the stuff afterward.
More spoilers: Originally I had designs on the NEXT chapter being the moment when Nick is given his first chastity cage. But I'm starting to have more thoughts. I'm wondering if it's too rushed. - I know, I know, I too want to see Nick wearing a cage!
But maybe we ought to have a Judy and Nick chapter BEFORE that one - where Nick is scared of his desires, Judy gives him the go-ahead to 'stop' but they decide to steam ahead. A moment of pause and reflection and communication. She was excited to hear him ask Owen to escalate. Proud of him for being so brave and honest with his feelings. It filled her heart. She’s excited to see what Owen comes up with next. But would completely understand if it’s all too much or time to pause- he is her priority and it's only fun if he's having fun too...
For example:
Judy: What’s up?
Nick: Are we going too far? Is this… too much? Am I hurting US?
Judy: Oh honey! Come here...
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Nick: it’s all I think about, it’s all I jerk off to
Judy: … yeah me too. But is that bad?
Nick: No. Maybe. I don’t know. I love you, I know that.
Judy: and I love you. Nothing can change that. So what if we have sex a little differently. I don’t care. I love it
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Nick: After I saw you guys tie… I mean this is real, it’s getting real.
I was the only man to do that with you… till now.
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Judy: I only want to do this with you, together as a team.
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I was reminded recently that the impact of my story is in giving Nick and Judy space to be human, emotional, flawed, and in love. A real relationship. Maybe I should give it more space before we level up the kink.
Originally Id had planned on doing an emotional jealousy (maybe Poly) chapter AFTER the cage one, but maybe that's too far away.
Thoughts friends?
Separately I'm attaching up a screenshot of my document that contains all my ideas. This thing is getting WILD haha. Let me know if you want a teaser sentence or two from a 'zone'? Always game to give you guys a few teasers of what goes through my head.
Also; a reminder that you guys can always reach out and tell me you're thoughts. You guys pay the extra bucks so I want to know how you're feelin'!
Amadose
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