Chapter 6 - Ties That Bind (Script 90% - SPOILERS)

Fiddled with the story some more, and feel like it's gotten to a good place. 

Things I'd still like to do to it:
- Find more 'Nick Voice' for the middle section.
- try to trim and slim as I go.
- Need to do a typo/punctuation pass.

However - I'm now at a good point where I think I can start laying out the first parts of it! Woop! Since we're spending so much time at Owen's I've gone ahead and built him a Sketchup apartment too 0_0. I'll attach some screen grabs of it after the script for you all to check out. 

As for feedback this time around; pull your punches! There's only room for subtle and small changes as I start to close it out. But if you have good Nick-line-tweaks/suggestions throw'em'at'me ;D

AND as a final caveat - a reminder that the script here does tend to change as I work!

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STORY

We see an open door and a dark room. This is Owen's apartment (jointly shared with another who isn't here this night)

We hear sex noises coming from the open door, as we see a tops-no-bottoms Nick sporting a hard-on (or an untouched semi?), opening the fridge. Maybe we're just seeing his lower half-lit in the dark. In the background:

J - Oh fuck oh fuck. It's so much... it's - I don't think I can take any more.

O - Mmmfph. Just breathe let it set in. That's it. Good girl-

J- Oh fuck oh fuck oh ---!

O - MMpph! 

Judy starts to cum, and maybe so does Owen. Maybe with a howl or a squeak?

We're still with Nick in the kitchen, as he retrieves two beers. Maybe we see him crack a grin as they crescendo. But it's quickly followed by a moment of silence from the bedroom, and Nick perks his ears up in curiosity at the silence.

From the room; 

O desperately - ...Ah?

... NICK!? Help!

We see a panicky N spring toward the door, bottle caps flitting in the air behind him with a 'Fwip!'

Nick enters the room and so does the camera. We now get to see the full picture. Judy is atop of Owen, twitching and trembling, maybe her leg is doing that rabbit-thumping action. Owen's knot is deep in her, he's got a 'what's happening' face of surprise.

O frantically - Nick! I just... we did it, the get-hard-in-her-slow-tie... and-and she's gone all...

If we have space: we show Nicks expression go from sweaty '!!!!' to 'relaxxxed'

Nick leans in looking at the tie, maybe his hand goes down to pull her cheek up. He's not frantic anymore, instead, he's a bit sly looking, Judy's all quivering and out of it.

N-  Oh no. This is Bad.

O - !!! Wha-Really?!?! 

Nick shrugging or maybe looking at Owen with concern, beers still in hand. 

N - Yup. You've broken her. She's broken.

O - ?!? Nick - What- I didn’t mean to!? It's our first- and-

Owen looks up to see Nick looking down at Owen with a big ol teasing grin. Maybe tongue cheekily sticking out.

Owen catches on. His face sobers up a bit. Or Judy moans/purrs in happiness and it breaks the moment.

O - Right. Yep. You're pulling my leg. -Of course.-

N breaks out in a grin and passes Owen his beer. Owens got :/ face.

N - Haha. I'm sorry! I couldn't help it! Watching YOU wriggle for a change; priceless!

O comedically - Asshole. So, she's all right?

N - Oh yeah. Don't sweat it. It's something that happens sometimes when she cums -super-duper-hard-. Doesn't happen so much anymore, but freaked me the-fuck-out my first time too. Till she woke up and wanted to do it again. And again. And again. You know.

A close-up of the tie. Or Owen patting the bed:

N - That tie of yours must be something else. 

O - Grunt - Yeah, no kidding - reeeeeal tight in here. <3 ... Come join us?

Nick happily flops down next to the pair, on the bed (***laying next to them or sitting on edge of the bed: I'm not sure!). 

O with a grin:

O - It's been a while right? Since you're last tie?

N with a sheepish grin - ah, yeah - it's something we save for special occasions. 

O - Sure. Sure. Nothing more -intimate- than being tied to the one you love -

We have a pause, maybe the camera rests on Owen's balls and we see them moving/ tightening and flexing. Or we see them both have a 'swig' moment before Owen cracks open;

O - You a happy cuck, Nick? This still doing it for you? 

N sits up(?), hand behind neck as he looks to the side-

N - ... Yeah. Yeah, it is.... But-

N looks at his hard (untouched?) cock, if we see Owen he's a bit concerned/supprised at that 'but'

N - Honestly?-

N looks up just a smidgen or to the side (not making eye contact) (***or he gets up and sits down in the chair opposing) - I have been thinking about... asking you to step things up a bit.

O looking pleased as punch - Oh! Nick! Haha; you had me worried for a sec... Step things up, huh? You spoken with the little lady about this?

N nervously - Yeah, at length. She... she wants to go harder too and has been bugging me to talk to you about it for a while. I'm not sure why I've felt so gun-shy about it.

O - It's a big deal, I get it. Glad you spoke up. All this-

Owen fingers a motion to symbolize all three of them

-only works as long as we're talking. So...

O - Tell me.-

N - ...?

O - Tell me, how bad you want me to fuck you up, Nick.

N - urp!!

Nick shrinks and fidgets with a nervous 'moment', for a second. 

Looking away, and in a soft voice Nick starts

N - haha well... you've mentioned before, about... humiliation stuff, denial, chastity. And I know we've touched on them, but, I think I'm ready to go further.

I know I shouldn't want that. It's wild and scary and-

You could be... meaner... to me, I mean. More entitled. I see it in you when we play - you're pulling your punches and... I don't want you to have to do that. You're our Alpha. I can take it. I want it and I want- strike that- Judy and I, want all of you.

N- These past months. We've all gotten close. And... you're wonderful. We want all of you, your kind heart, and... your darker side too. 

N a little louder and emboldened -

Being on the receiving end of that side of you. It.. it scares me. I know the things you want. They're... wrong and dark and... fuck, it terrifies me but excites the shit out of me too.

N- I'll speak up. I'll trust you if you trust -me- to say stop when I need to. But I want us three to go there. And, and...

N with a small embarrassed grin, maybe finally making eye contact with camera/Owen - I DO -really- want you to fuck me up, Owen.

There's a pause. Owen is both shocked and beaming. He's genuinely taken aback.

N speaks up to break the silence - But, I mean we don't need to change anything major or-

O - You're not allowed to tie with your wife -ever again-.

N - Urp!!!

O - Jude and I'll up some other stuff too - don't you worry. But, for now; ties; they ain't for you. And hell, that little self-imposed 'condom' rule you had? Let's make that permanent too.

N - Ah- j-just like that?!?!

O - -Just like that.- The last time you two tied is now the -last time- you two tied. An Alpha shouldn't have to share those parts of -his girl- and it's time you caught on. 

N poofing a bit with excited/scared energy.

O - How's that? We closer?

N - haha ha I- I...

N - ...yes?! 

O - Good. Cause I'm not done -cuck.-

N shrinking a bit, he's a bit off balance and ill-prepared for this, but Owen continues. With a low growl. We see Owen spreading Judy's cheeks as he talks. Or tenderly rubbing the small of her back as she pur's. 

O - Want me to turn up the heat? More than happy. But, I expect you to meet me halfway; from now on, this cunt? Belongs to me - it has now, for a while and it's time you got that in your head.

Car in the headlights Nick over the course of a few frames getting more and more frazzled (in a good way), like an egg on a frying pan too long.

O - I love you bud, but you're right; I've gone easy on you. Letting you have free reign. Letting you go back to 'normal' in-between our 'play'. But now? There's no more room for that shit. You'll know your place in this pack, for good. From now on you only get what I give. 

You're a supporting act. A footnote in this story. There to watch and be cucked. 

I'll be meaner, I'll be entitled; You'll never tie again. You'll wear a condom every time. You'll watch me give her what a cuck-like-you-can't. And then, I expect you to fucking thank me for it. Understand?

The room is still and quiet. 

O - Understand?

N - I- I- Yes.

O - Good!

Good boy! Proud of you pup. I hope that helps with your-

Owen points at Nicks leaking twitching cock 

O- little problem.

N- !!!

Owen takes a swig of his beer, while Nick sits in shock, his cock dripping.

After his swig;

O - I'm thinking I'm due some thanks. For oh-so kindly giving you what you asked for. Don't you?

N looks shrunken but still hard - I'm sorry... I mean. T-thank yo-

O - No. No. We both know you can do better. 

O spreads his legs wide - 

I bet, if I ordered a pathetic cuck like yourself to eat my ass and lick my cock, you'd do it, wouldn't you? Judy's implied you might like it as much as me.

But. I don't wanna order you; I want you between my legs on you're own volition, because you know it's where you belong. Tell me I'm wrong. Safe-word out of it - I won't judge.

Some panic creeps into Nick, he wasn't expecting THIS.

O - I love you bud, I'll never cut you out - but- this'll be the closest you get to tie'ing from now on. And sure as hell the closest you'll get to a pussy tonight - not after you so kindly asked me to deprive you.

But I'm not all cruel - I'll sweeten the pot; I'll let you jerk off while you do it 

The camera sit's on Nicks's face, a complex of emotions. Maybe the camera keeps closing in over the course of a few panels, as time progresses in silence. Owen breaks it with:

Come on. Let's seal this deal; crawl on over and pay me some lip service while I mate your wife. 

The composure in Nick breaks and he puts his beer down. 

With a gulp he gets onto his knees and starts crawling forward, sweating.

O - ...

We see Nick's snoot get closer. We hear his heartbeat

O - ...

The heartbeat is louder, as we see Nick's tongue tentatively reach out and touch balls.

O - Atta boy.

The camera pans out as we see a whimper come from Nick, while his tail wags or twitches.

O - No rush now, take your time pup. 

Mmmh!

Nice and easy. Worship that cock.

Time passes? Or not? I'm not sure yet, maybe we fade out and in again.

Judy stirring awake, atop of Owen

J - Mmmph, ohhh-heck, I must have blipped out for a sec.

O - Chuckle. Just for a few minutes. How you feeling small thing?

J - Full. Fuck. -So full-, and -gods that feels good. What is-

Nick!?!?

We see his tongue on her ass/seam between Owen and Judy's messy mating licking with RELISH. His maw's all wet and sticky

O - Haw! Don't mind him. He's been busy cleaning up a few of our leaks.

J looking back at him in a flush.

J - Oh, -wow.-

She reaches back and runs a hand down through his ear/hair, maybe eliciting a happy whimper from Nick?

J - You look really good down there honey.

She turns around back to Owen and gives him a peck/rests her head on his chest in contentment.

J - I guess I missed out on something big, huh?

O - Don't worry, I'll fill you in.

J - Mmmm <3

The final page, just titled Aftercare!

We see all three nude, sitting at the kitchen bar, eating ice cream, looking disheveled. It's a silent love-filled page.

Maybe we see Owen with a big shit-eating grin, telling Judy about what was discussed. Nick is excitedly blushing. She's amazed and impressed with a 'really!!' face. 

Owen squeezes them into a big three-person hug. 

Owens Appartment:

More info on Owen's apartment:

- He shares it with a smaller flatmate (who isn't home for this chapter) and BF (who helped him become financially well off after persuading him to buy bat-coin early).

- Placed on the green-rocky-outskirts of the Savanah District

- Gets a lot of sun - so the building has 'sails' placed in front of it to reduce the sunlight.