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QnA #2 - Script and Roughs

Took a little bit longer than I expected on these! Finding all the ref I wanted to look at while I start pencils takes TIME. I try to fill my document up with lots of little poses and bodies, from other artists, manga's, photos, and stills from the film. Anything to help me with my weakest artistic skill; anatomy and pose.  It's all a starting place; I make sure to build on that stuff and generate something new and different.

Maybe now that the pandemic is easing up I might sign up at a live drawing class or something, and build up some personal anatomy, and pose confidence. But for the moment, reference, reference, reference - it's the life for me. And that shit takes time 0_o

Bellow are the 'roughs'; blocked out art to communicate the visual ideas. I'll be cracking into Pencils next! I hope your like where it's going? Jamming all of thisinto 4 pages has been tough - I'm being pretty ambitious with this one =D

I'll copy n pasta the script below too. As always it's highly subject to change! But do let me know what you think!

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Script! 


Cold Open:

Judy is in Nick's lap as he helps brush out her undercoat.


A hand closes to the camera

Click!

N: -and we're ON. QnA número dos. Ready fluff?

J: Excited!


Question:

User: Alessa 

Bun, give us an update, how many times have you fucked Bull now?


J: Gosh, it's been, something like, 6 months now? And ... I've lost count? 

Ow- ah- Bull's been... insatiable. 

N: "Bull's" been insatiable, huh?


Pout face Jude

J: Pppft. OK, sass-fox, WE'VE been insatiable. I just, the whole situation has us all 'switched on', it still feels fresh and exciting. It's like, being in a constant-honeymoon period.


N: Funny - I remember getting a lot more pussy on our honeymoon.


Judy whaps him on the leg or arm.

J: Oh please, you still get plenty - of leftovers.


N wagging tail: mmm. <3

J: You guys can do the math, we see each other every few days I think? 

N: When she's not too sore from his cock she's ON his cock.


J: So sue me; you married a -rabbit- and he's a very sexy fox.



Username : pacydrm_toy123

Question: Me and mine have been exploring cuckolding recently. Things have been going great but now I'm struggling with jealousy. Is that something you deal with? 


Judy kisses Nicks cheek

N- Now, this one hits hard.

J- Yeah! This is all you slick~


N shifting a bit uncomfortably, or looks away as he answers: 

Do I get jealous? Yeah, sure I do. But, it's not a BAD thing.

Somewhere, a while ago, it became hot for me to feel jealousy. That line between feeling sick and feeling turned on, became all blurry. When I her with him, it's not 'Boo-hoo Woe-is-me, she's with another man' it's 'She's with another man, fuck, my cocks so hard!'


Close up of Nick nervously playing with his wedding ring?

N- N- I think - that bad stuff comes with feeling insecure in your relationship, and I don't feel that way about US. Sure we play on the knifes edge, but it's done with care. Even when I'm getting cucked, I feel in control and loved.

J - You are. So much.


A frame of Nick watching, pained (he's just come) as they rut?

N- A free tip. That jealousy can be the toughest right after I’ve blown a load. So play for time.

Ride it out 24 hours before you let it get to you. By then you’ll be back in the mood.


J reaches down and squeezes his cock- So the secret is to just keep you horny huh. 

N- !!!

NEXT QUESTION-


Andry asks:

Question: Rabbit, would you ever be interested in Fox cuckolding YOU?


J - Haha! Oh wow, that could be fun!


Nick shadowed by a whole lot of bunnies?

N - I mean, I've fucked others in front of you before carrots-

J- Pppf, Bunny piles in the 'burrow don't count. THAT's... community bonding - Cuckolding is... something ELSE. 


Judy winking?

J - I think you'd make for a really great alpha-predator-bull... if we didn't already have one.

N: Dang -gut punch!

J: You love it.

J: -I wouldn't MIND, you know. If you ever wanted to fuck a gal -or boy-. You've got permission. I think it could be hot.


N: Ha, I - thank you, yes-please -threesomes- and -bunny-piles-. But... I'm not sure my head's in the right place to be the 'alpha bull' right now? The pack we've built. Our hierarchy. My position is... Bull would be... -he gets...-


Judy grinning ?

J: Of course he does~

You silly wonderful Canidae and you're packs dynamics.


J: But. You know. There IS somebody you could fool around with that wouldn't break the 'rules'.

N: ???


Keyboard click

Question:

Name Random Bill

Curious, Fox have you and Bull ever messed around? Maybe as a result of an order or two?


J whispering into Nick's ear:

N: *----!!!


N's hair is all floofed up and he's blushing.


Judy whispering in blushing 0_0 Nicks ear

J: No pressure. I know you have mixed feelings about that sorta stuff. 


Judy's hands working his crotch

J: I’ve seen the way you look at him. The cuckold porn you watch. Servicing the bull... 


J: I'm just saying, I wouldn't mind that, one. Single. Bit.


she pulls out his hard cock.


J: -how about we turn this thing off and-

Click!

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Comments

Yeah - I'd prefer to focus on the positives - they're all in it to win it =)

Amadose

Look's good. I love the idea that Nick is still getting some leftovers. The idea that the cuck goes without any intimacy always bothers me. Even if he is pussy free there has to be something if they are really a couple. Once the relationship devolves into basically friends because all the intimacy between the hot wife and cuck is gone it always loses something for me.

jim

Right? I want her to get more and more comfortable at being MEAN to him, and pushing that angle. But it's all in the name of fun, and absolutely something they both want to explore. Getting that across is key to making it feel natural, real, and fun. Really glad you're liking it Mikey! It was fun to write (despite being tough).

Amadose

I love the jealousy question, and the honest answer about it. Alessa's is fabulous too ;) But yes these are great questions and I love how they portray the lifestyle and kink. Judy's absolute love for Nick still shining through is really heartwarming and still reminds you that regardless of what happens, this is still play.

Mikey

Right? I get to do lots of fun silly things like flash backs. But mostly I just like that it adds a level of interaction between Judy and Nick (and you guys) in a way that the story chapters might not allow. Really glad you're liking it! Scarrrred to live draw - but it really is something I need to add to the schedule if I want to improve =)

Amadose

Ha! Fingers crossed I can make 'em land =D

Amadose

Thank you, June! I love love love the whole 'chef's kiss' when I see it portrayed. Excited to draw it. Also not sure if I've mentioned before - but your icon is so lovely and chill =D

Amadose

Love these little Q&amp;As. Gets to demystify the cuck stuff and talk about it in a way the story pacing would allow, Nick and Judy get to loosen up and expand their characters, you get to experiment with ideas or situations before they go into the comic. Top notch all around. Stay safe, stay well, and good luck with the anatomy class when the time comes. From experience, It definitely helps boost confidence.

Rickochet

You just created like a dozen new telegram stickers with those faces XD

Kadath

nice way too come home from over time. but im too damn hot and tired to read, but knowing these are waiting for me after nap are refreshing.

Tigerchris

This is just *chef's kiss* Can't wait to see more!

June Opossum

Ah, heck that's lovely to hear. I had so much I WANTED to do, and had to leave a while lot behind on the editing floor. Plus I had to adding in personality and back-n-forth between the two -which took up space - So I was worried the overall effect/messages would be watered down.

Amadose

I like the script, it's really well written out; the thoughts flow pretty well, and feel natural. It really does smooth out some of the potential landmines around the line of "fun happy cuck" vs. "exploited cuck" Especially around page 2

Justin Case

Haha, yeah you won out you lucky devil you ;D

Amadose

OMG OMG ITS ME ITS ME!! I can't wait to see the pencils for this part!!! AAAA

Andry SilverFang


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