Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 13-14 (Finished)
Added 2021-06-26 20:23:03 +0000 UTCAnd kaboom! Pages 13 and 14 DONEZO's (unless I/we find errors or small edits when we start on the next and FINAL two pages). Really wanted to make sure you guys had these two pages before the end of the month (so that those of you who arn't renewing at the end of the month have something!) ; gonna try and get the next two done before then, but it'll be tight!
I flip-flopped a lot on the darkness of the 'nighttime' treatment (thank you for everyone's help on that btw!). But in the end leaned into a bit lighter than what might be a 'real' night, as it came off differently on each of my screens and tablet. On one of them it appeared so dark that it wasn't fun to look at. So going with a lighter option ensures that it's nice and visible on all screens. Hopefully, it still gets the night-setting across! Might still be one of those things I fiddle with 0_o
LINKS
Finished 1-4 , 5-6 , 7-8 , 9-12
Layouts/basic script for the chapter
Higher tiers are always invited to send me questions (in private or as a comment) for the in-between-chapter QnA's! But I'm always game to answer questions for any tier outside of the QnA too.
Comments
Thanks, Daniel! Working on the next pages Dialogue is proving WAY harder 0_o I keep flipping between wanting to do too much and too little. I'm not sure how ambitions Owen aught to be at this stage either =D Really glad the 'look' worked for you!\
Amadose
2021-06-28 19:34:08 +0000 UTCThe dialogue is peeerrrfect. I really love the convo with Nick and Owen. I freakin love the night look. Adds to the sneaky vibes. Crazy hot as always
Danielfox
2021-06-27 21:08:09 +0000 UTCThank you Fen! Really glad you liked that page. Still one of my absolute fav pages I've ever made =D And yeah, finding the right balance for the night-look took WORK. Still not sure if I'm completely happy with it, but at some point you gotta move on =)
Amadose
2021-06-27 18:19:09 +0000 UTCPractice makes perfect ;D
Amadose
2021-06-27 18:17:41 +0000 UTCAw heck, thank you, Mikey! So glad you like it =D
Amadose
2021-06-27 18:17:25 +0000 UTCAww yea! Looks so good, really like the lighting! Better have it a bit brighter than not being able to appreciate the goodness! To finally see that awesome cuddling scene in all it's glory makes me all warm and fuzzy! Amazing job! <3
Fen
2021-06-27 12:13:15 +0000 UTCI vote that they try the knot again while he's still asleep :3
Kyden
2021-06-27 10:07:12 +0000 UTCdude like no brown nose, this is god tier cuckold content. great work and I appreciate your hard work so much!
Mikey
2021-06-27 06:05:56 +0000 UTCThat delights me to know =D So glad you like it!
Amadose
2021-06-26 23:14:38 +0000 UTCThat really captures the thrill of sneaky middle-of-the-night sexy shenanigans next to someone still asleep :>
Pheeze
2021-06-26 22:12:06 +0000 UTCThat's fair. Any darker and the image just becomes muddied and hard to see things. Might just be at the limit of what I can do =) Hadn't thought about a sunset. Although the light I have in the scene I figured was just a hallway light or something in the room that has illumination.
Amadose
2021-06-26 21:52:18 +0000 UTCTo tell the truth, personally, I am not convinced by the first page at night, I feel that it looks more lacking in color than being at night, but! If God Beloved likes it, then it's fine with me! On the penultimate page, you'll play with the sunset then? UwU my expectations are very high!
Andry SilverFang
2021-06-26 21:42:38 +0000 UTCHigh five!
Amadose
2021-06-26 21:32:49 +0000 UTCRight? I WOULD usually do something like that, but I think it all sort of spells itself out. And if you are disorientated a bit as a reader - it only adds to the feeling Judy might be experiencing. Glad it panned out!
Amadose
2021-06-26 21:32:43 +0000 UTCThanks so much! I love it all too =D
Amadose
2021-06-26 21:31:24 +0000 UTCVery good!!!
Gambit
2021-06-26 21:18:00 +0000 UTC*chefs kiss* Looking rock solid. Usually artists will add a little box with the time, or just say βlater that nightβ but I think the lighting you went with says enough about whatβs happening, and with Nick clearly stated to be asleep, I think youβre golden on that. I appreciate the visual storytelling. π
Rickochet
2021-06-26 21:11:01 +0000 UTCI love how naughty they're being. So sneaky! The switch in atmosphere is great, and Judy's faces are so cute XD
Kadath
2021-06-26 21:10:44 +0000 UTCHaha you can't escape it.
Amadose
2021-06-26 21:00:05 +0000 UTCAND there i thought i was going to work on something else...nope I'm back right too cucking/Cheating kind of thing XD
Tigerchris
2021-06-26 20:55:08 +0000 UTCAw thanks, Justin, I appreciate that - lots of folks support for different reasons =) ! I hopppppe I can get the next 2 'in' in time too. Might be faster now that I've settled on the 'nighttime' look? I'm not sure. It always takes longer than I expect.
Amadose
2021-06-26 20:32:54 +0000 UTCVery considerate of you to get it in for those not renewing. (I personally will be maintaining my subscription) I appreciate the consideration with which you treat your patrons.
Justin Case
2021-06-26 20:30:42 +0000 UTC(γ€ββΏβ)γ€
Amadose
2021-06-26 20:29:24 +0000 UTCHuff! So hot. Truly relationship goals. β€
AngelOD
2021-06-26 20:26:30 +0000 UTC
