Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 13-16 (Inks)
Added 2021-05-17 17:37:05 +0000 UTCTwo weeks later and I'm done with these Inks!!! Woop woop!
These ones kicked my butt - there's so much in them - or maybe I'm just getting more anal about the details? Compared with the start of the chapter things have definitely become more detailed - I thinkkkkk that's a good thing?
Some faces and panels here that I'm real proud of! There's still stuff I want to edit, but I think that's how it is for every artist, right? No such thing as 100% happy, always have things to work on and improve with.
Hoping you all like 'em! let me know if I missed anything (like wedding rings or spooge).
The next step is the Flats - which may be one of my most fave stages? Could just be me but, it really feels like that splash of simple color brings the characters to life.
Not sure how long this next stage will take - I'd bet a week - buttttt I'm also booked in for the second vaccine jab this week and I hear that thing can lay you outttt. So who knows!
Sending you all my best fam! Hope your all having a good start to the week!
Links:
Finished 1-4 , 5-6 , 7-8 , 9-12
Layouts/basic script for the chapter
Higher tiers are always invited to send me questions (in private or as a comment) for the in-between-chapter QnA's! But I'm always game to answer questions for any tier outside of the QnA too.
Comments
My favorite part also =D
Amadose
2021-05-21 18:10:58 +0000 UTCI love Nick getting snuggled into the action but still using his toy
Arvetis
2021-05-19 13:57:30 +0000 UTCOh dang! Love the ideas =D
Amadose
2021-05-18 17:32:18 +0000 UTCSuper comic !!! I hope you can see Judy getting pregnant by Owen one day. And then, in the future, Mrs. Hopps might show up. She comes to help Judy during her pregnancy, and then also gets to know Owen very intensively (perhaps with corresponding consequences).
Gambit
2021-05-18 17:10:40 +0000 UTCHe's excited, and smiling! Originally I had him as pensive-excited, and I kept fiddling with it. I might change it up some more as I go I'm not sure. If I think I could pull it off, a lulled out tongue and panting face would be awesome.
Amadose
2021-05-18 05:27:24 +0000 UTCI'm still trying to read Nick's expression at the end. Is he still asleep or smiling? on the pencils he almost looked worried. But great work look forward to seeing it done.
jim
2021-05-18 02:58:53 +0000 UTCOh I’m loving this chapter so much! And oh my… just look at the size of Owen’s arm in the first page XD he’s so frigging huge! Poor Nick is so small compared to him in so many ways, Owen really is a A-Class Bull 😆
Tay
2021-05-18 01:48:21 +0000 UTCI'm such a sucker for a close up =D I just can't help myself! Thank you Rickochet! Really glad you're liking how these turned out!
Amadose
2021-05-17 22:58:57 +0000 UTCYour line work continues to be silky smooth. Even when you have things overlap. It doesn’t make it difficult to see what’s going on. That spooning and Judy’s adorable snug expression between her foxes on the first page and the gentle licks and teasing a kiss on the last page are just so on point. I appreciate the detail you put into the characters whether the characters are distant or extreme close up. Speaking of, that 3rd page dedicated to close ups is top shelf. Looks amazing. Looking forward to the flats, you always make these cutie pies pop off the page. I’m good to wait, you’ve already earned my subscription with this. Prepare for the 2nd vaccination, it can be a doozie. Stay safe, be well.
Rickochet
2021-05-17 22:55:12 +0000 UTCFinding that right balance of 'cheat', 'consent', 'kink' and 'fun' is tough! I want to find a good mix of all of it where it's feels naughty enough to be fun, but not harmfull.
Amadose
2021-05-17 19:00:24 +0000 UTCAww heck this is just soooo good! The pack snuggles are just perfect! Owen the alpha spooning them both.... the nibbles and kisses... mfff! And then, the expressions, the pose and the angles! I’d love to see a revisit of page 15 at some point, but witch Nickys muzzle right where the action is <3 Dialog wise I really like the idea of “being quiet so the Pup wakes from your orgasm”. Not really sure I’d still consider going again ‘cheaty’, at this point anyway, even if he’d be asleep… and it seems Nick agrees ;D
Fen
2021-05-17 18:51:21 +0000 UTCI see it more as a 'pack' thing in this page, rather than a 'Bi' thing. Think - three dogs laying down on a bean bag after a big walk together. It's not inherently sexual. It's intimate and family. That's how I see the light-licks and kisses on this page - instinctual grooming and affection. I'm gonna have Owen and Nick just sort of talking about unimportant stuff, as they all hunker down, and relax with one another. The Bi-stuff will crop up in the QnA and next chapter!
Amadose
2021-05-17 18:17:46 +0000 UTCMmmnf! Huff!
AngelOD
2021-05-17 18:13:04 +0000 UTCUgh, it's gotta be done, but not looking forward to it at alllll. I've been fiddling a lot with the script for that second page. Trying to find a fun way to make it not TOO cheaty and nonconsensual, but still sneaking fun. Right now its something like: ---- O-Owen!?! You - we're - you're inside me!? Again?!? Shhh quiet now. Technically, it's still our first go - I've been in you this whole time. Oh fuckkk. Up to go again? I really want to fuck you nice slow, just the two of us. Just ah. Keep quiet - I don't want to wake the pup yet. !!! Nick!? Uh-huh, still asleep. But I'm thinking, what better way to wake a cuck, than with the sounds of you. Cumming. On MY cock. Oh fucccck...
Amadose
2021-05-17 18:12:01 +0000 UTCI'm guessing the first page here is the beginning of Nick's bi curiosity to Owen lol? The look on Nick's face as Owen absentmindedly licks and nibbles him in his sleep is great haha.
Walter Denny
2021-05-17 18:10:20 +0000 UTCThanks, Daniel! Yeah, the little kiss feels super right to me - I'm not sure it's even 'sexual', I picture the moment as being intimate and 'pack' focused. Canines are so oral-focused, that of course they're would be little licks and kisses like that as they all three settles down for a cuddle. I was super nervous about drawing Owens Butt haha! So glad it looks right and feels good for you!
Amadose
2021-05-17 18:03:35 +0000 UTCGood luck with that second shot. I thought I wouldn't feel anything but man it was brutal. Nick may actually be awake, but the idea of them sneaking this when it's not even be pre-approved (which they said they were ok with-ish) is just unbelievably hot. Extremely erotic. Well done as always!
Mikey
2021-05-17 17:54:34 +0000 UTCOh these are 👌👌👌 That teasy little lick Owen gives Nick in the first panel I think is juust the right kind of subtle hint at what’s to come and I’m squirmin with anticipation. I’m also a big fan of the shots you do of Owen’s ass as he penetrates Jude. There’s something vulgar and dominating in that view oh his unapologeticly exposed anus as he’s plowing in that squatting position , idk how to describe it but as a cuck it’s intimidating. Anywho, this comic never ceases to excite me. As always, thank you for your beautiful work!! ❤️🤤❤️
Danielfox
2021-05-17 17:52:30 +0000 UTCAw, hang in there bud. We all have bad days, just gotta move through them. Right? I love the big puppy-pile page - really wish I could just be a lump in the middle of them all like that =D
Amadose
2021-05-17 17:50:56 +0000 UTC=D So glad you like it Andry! I'm really glad I reworked that final page - I think it's a whole lot of fun. Not much room for text anymore tho... but that's a problem for future-Amadose, and I don't have to worry about it yet =p
Amadose
2021-05-17 17:48:51 +0000 UTCJust what I need on a depression day. XD I really REALLY wish I was Judy...hey maybe some time Judy nick and Owen could make a sandwich...maybe Own and Buck while Nick gets a little oral. Also hugs everyone needs them.
Tigerchris
2021-05-17 17:46:25 +0000 UTCOh my goodness the expressions at the end! It made me completely like a real horny wife! Good luck with the second docis of the shot, Amadose. We'll wait for you as long as we can 🧡. By the way, first to comment jiji.
Andry SilverFang
2021-05-17 17:43:43 +0000 UTC
