Spider Diagram of Ideas
Added 2021-02-22 23:58:58 +0000 UTCI'm still knee-deep in inking at the moment, so figured I'd find something else to share with you this week, and thought some of you might be keen to see how I write or come up with ideas?
Randomly throughout the day (but mostly at night) a silly scenario, interaction or line of dialogue will pop into my head. I'll then send it to myself through telegram or discord. Or write it down on a notepad. Sometimes they're long little scripts, other times tiny little lines of text. Chock-full of typos and inconsistencies, and sometimes wildly out-of-character.
When I find a spare moment I toss it all into a big spider-diagram of madness...

I use a program called Scrapple, and slump things into zones or areas.
Right now I've got these as zones:
- Judy, Owen, Nick
- Current Chapter
- Escalation Chat Chapter
- Chasity Chapter
- After Chastity
- Scent Play/Ovulation/Heat
- Showing/growing Concern
- Ideas
- Visual Ideas
- George
- Piercing/Brand idea
- Owens other piece on the side idea
- Owen moves in next door idea
- QnA
- A Bunny Burrow Visit Idea
- Pregnancy Idea
I find that my head starts to coalesce around specific ideas over the course of a month. So I tend to pull them out of my bread 'idea' zone and put them out into their own zones. None of it is set in stone. It's all just a place for me to dump content.
Later down the road, I get to sit in all of this and turn it out into a script.
Here's an example of something I wrote a few nights ago that I really dug (but again isn't canon or anything yet). It's in the 'George' section, an idea that my head goes to when I think about extending the cast.
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Owen's BFF and apartment mate, who talked him into Batcoin (which then did amazingly well, insert Elon Tusk joke, and is why Owen is well-off), is a Salamander or Gekko of some kind.
Judy who's staying over for the night, and wanders about while Owen is busy or asleep, gets talked into fooling around with him (or maybe order to by Owen?). Because of the size difference (George is much smaller than Judy), he insists on anal which she tepid agrees to (her first real butt experience).
Halfway thru, she starts to get a heady buzz going 'I... I gotta lie down, I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy...'
'oh yeah! that'll be the toxins. Feels good right?'
'Toxins?!?!'
'...oh fuck, did I forget to go over it? I'm poisonous. I'm sorry I should have told you. You'll be fine, but like... you'll probably get a little... high.'
'oh gawd this is wild... you feel amazing... I've never been high before.'
Finish with a sleepy Owen getting up, making coffee, and knocking on Georges door with a 'Hey, did you see Judy leave this mor- Jesus George'. He sees a very happy Judy atop of Georges's small bed, she's giving him a slow sleepy bj, gooey ass in the air. George cheekily grins at Owen
A smirking Owen picks her up and finger wags to his pal 'BAD GEORGE. MY HOTWIFE, not YOURS! Yeesh... let's get you cleaned up cutie.'
Judy drunkidly waves good bye to George.
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Again NOT canon (except the batcoin thing: that's totally part of my head canon for Owen). Whether I'll do anything with it I'm not sure. It'll sit in the document and maybe one day I'll do something with it.
Here's another random conversation, that I'm not sure I'll ever use, but gives you an idea of what I'm jotting down late at night!
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N- Hey hon, I thought we'd watch a movie tonight, maybe order in?
J- oh. I.. I can't tonight. Raincheck?
N- What's up?
J (grabbing a salad from the fridge) - It's just. Owen had a rough day today. Asked me to come over.
N- what, like, right now? What did he say?
J - yeah, now. He's had a smoke, and wants me to ride him.
She pauses looks at him.
J - ... You're a bit jealous. I can tell. Is it Good jealousy? Or Bad.
Nick looks down, blushes.
J - Mmm. Your Alpha making demands of your wife, or course it's good jealousy. You know, you could put your paw down, tell me to stay here. With you.
N - ...
J - Say the word and I'll ride you, and not him.
N - ...
J - Yeah. That's right. Your such a good boy...
J - Fuck you get me wet. I love how dirty you are, my little pup-cuck. I'll tell Owen you said hi. -she flicks the tip of his tenting pants- Enjoy the jerk off!
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I dunno. I hope you enjoy seeing some of my this? I would love to share more, but I'd be afraid you'd all take it as serious-canon or proof of my madness ;D
Comments
I do love that
Bugredblue
2021-03-05 18:02:26 +0000 UTCYes! Kinda. Sorta. I'm trying to keep things human and real. I want there to be a slide into a relationship where Owen is the primary/sole sexual partner, while Nick is just chastity. Not really 'slave' but lots of power play.
Amadose
2021-03-05 18:01:52 +0000 UTCI really love the idea of nick losing his place and fully becoming a cuck slave to owen anything on the map akin to that
Bugredblue
2021-03-05 09:21:23 +0000 UTCha, I make nooooo promises, but I love hearing everyone's ideas. I know a lot of the beats I want to hit with the story, but not so much on the middle ground - it's lovely to hear people's ideas and steer the ship into a fun direction. Or let me know when something's not quiiiite right. Everyoens input really helps in keeping me fresh and interested =D
Amadose
2021-03-01 21:27:09 +0000 UTCNo Problem! I'm so lucky to have discovered your patreon. Now I can be part of the journey every step of the way. Unlike most furry comic artists, you actually encourage and use our ideas towards your comic. And that's so empowering for us readers! XD
2021-03-01 21:18:20 +0000 UTCAw heck, these are a delight. I love the 3rd one a whole lot - it's just the right mix of mean and fun. Thanks for signing on and sending some support my way!
Amadose
2021-03-01 17:40:48 +0000 UTCThis is the hottest furry cucking comic I've ever come across! Enjoyed everything so far! I've got a few ideas for the Chastity Chapter that people might enjoy. Scenario 1: Judy becomes more comfortable being meaner to Nick while he's in chastity (ex. making him pleasure her while he is locked or giving him small penis humiliation) Scenario 2: Nick experiences a mind break from weeks of not having an orgasm and begs Judy to let him cum (But instead she gives an evil smile and gives him a blowjob without unlocking his cage but before Nick can cum, Owen calls Judy on the phone for another session and she leaves immediately leaving Nick unsatisfied) Scenario 3: While Nick is watching Owen and Judy having a "session", Owen asks Judy if she wants Nick to be unlocked from chastity and while locking eyes with Nick she says no (combined with some degrading or humiliating comment directed towards Nick) Thanks for reading my suggestions! I love how we are all brainstorming new ideas together! =D
2021-03-01 07:35:27 +0000 UTC=D Really glad you liked it! I had a whole lot of fun thinking about it! I just love the idea of there being animal-trait-interactions and scenarios. Clean-up is 100% gonna happen at some point. I think it's such a fun power play and action. Really intense for everyone involved.
Amadose
2021-02-27 19:38:40 +0000 UTCYeah, it's not the best thought-out idea! Just an example of one of those things you think up in bed =) I had fun with it. I think if I were to clean it up, I'd add in a whole lot more check-ins and caveats. Anyway, its all moot unless they show us some lizards in the Zootopia series coming up!
Amadose
2021-02-27 19:36:49 +0000 UTCI really love reading your ideas! Canon or not, give us as many as you like. I also really enjoyed the ideas you shared. I understand the problems some have with the being drugged part but I found it really hot. Perhaps it could be established as releasing her cravings more than her being unconscious or something. I really like how it makes her explore her slutty side more. I'm personally really into cleanup stuff, I don't know if that's something you might explore too :) Anyway, thanks for your work, it is amazing!
2021-02-27 15:56:15 +0000 UTCSo just to chip in, but the George stuff I don't like for all the reasons given above, by people who said it better than I could have. ALL of the Judy/Nick interactions, where Judy is deliberately teasing/lovingly degrading Nick (which I have been voting for MONTHS, now people) is so great. I love it
Retromancer
2021-02-27 07:18:59 +0000 UTCAgreeeed. It's something I'm working on for the end of the whole series really. Much further down the line!
Amadose
2021-02-25 19:09:08 +0000 UTCJudy getting pregnant would be really hot
Hatter
2021-02-25 19:04:55 +0000 UTCRight? I figure Owen's into them =D
Amadose
2021-02-24 06:52:37 +0000 UTC=D So glad! I thought it was fun too.
Amadose
2021-02-24 06:52:18 +0000 UTCPiercing/Brand idea sounds interesting
rasswar
2021-02-24 06:29:32 +0000 UTCLove love love that last little exchange between Judy & Nick! It's just :chefs kiss:
aegeon3001
2021-02-24 01:40:55 +0000 UTCYeah go for it!
Beep boop
2021-02-23 18:40:50 +0000 UTCI like that a whole lot! I don't think I have anything that's uniquely JUST a Judy decision like that. Feels really empowering and strong. Mind if I add your idea to my chart? I'd had a piercing/brand idea or two, but it was always in the context of Judy doing it FOR Owen or Nick.
Amadose
2021-02-23 18:08:17 +0000 UTCCan't tell if it's on the spider chart, but something I'd like to see is Judy doing something that isn't explicitly sexual for Owen so that Nick can't even object. Like Judy just shows up one day with a nipple pierced and nick doesn't like it because it's perminant, but Judy downplays him by saying it has nothing to do with Owen, but that he had mentioned it, and loved it when he saw it. Nick was the last to know.
Beep boop
2021-02-23 18:03:24 +0000 UTCNotes taken! I hadn't looked into it, but I remembered there being all kinds of 'zones' in the zootopia map, so thought I could get away with a lizard. Hmmm, I bet I could find a poisonous mammal or two. I thinkkkk Shrews are supposed to be poisonous? But also - I don't want her to get BIT. I was thinking more fun and cute accident. Anyways, I hear the consent issue - this probably isn't something I'll pursue. Just examples of how I brainstorm and write ideas =)
Amadose
2021-02-23 06:09:49 +0000 UTCI don't wanna be that guy, but since you usually wanna keep things strictly within the Zootopia universe: There are no sapient non-mammals. (Also not the biggest fan of "accidental" drugging) Like the other strip a lot tho <3 Would be even better for me if she'd send him pics but forbade him the jerk off... slowly pushing him towards chastity... mmmfff Cant wait for more direct denial play :D
Fen
2021-02-23 05:56:41 +0000 UTCAh, I saw it as an accident. I totally hear you. I'd want the consent to be nice and clear too. Again, these notes aren't canon or anything, just ideas that float to me. I just wanted to play with the idea of different species having different attributes, and thought Judy getting an accidential buzz off a Gekko would be fun =) Sorry to worry you!
Amadose
2021-02-23 02:42:06 +0000 UTCSo, I'll just be that guy who's allergic to fun. The bit with George is well, a little triggering. Consent is a big thing with me, and nonconsensually exposing a person to things such as drugs, alcohol, unprotected sex, whatever, is real real bad. I generally like your stuff, but that's going a bit too far for my taste.
Justin Case
2021-02-23 02:31:07 +0000 UTCGreat minds think alike Kad =D
Amadose
2021-02-23 00:31:10 +0000 UTCGod damn I love these ideas. So hot and mischievous! Your thought process for this stuff is pretty similar to mine, where I'll think up scenarios and pairings, and then I'm like 'what if I added a wrinkle to this?' (usually that 'wrinkle' is another character jumping into things) XD
Kadath
2021-02-23 00:23:36 +0000 UTC=D I'll grab you another one randomly from the same vein.... Here you go! ---- N wriggling, standing atop of him is Judy. A couple of drips drop from her onto him N - But..but I want to reclaim you. J looks him in the eyes - I know. But I... I don't want you to. -drip-splat- ...not this time at least.
Amadose
2021-02-23 00:16:59 +0000 UTCHa, here you go. A one-liner from the Chastity idea zone: J- hon, Owen gets whatever he wants. And right now, he doesn’t want you getting that- She points to his caged-up cock with a slightly mean smile.
Amadose
2021-02-23 00:12:43 +0000 UTCYeah, I don't see many others sharing how they write or come up with ideas? It's like, I don't JUST sit down to write a script. It's usually the accumulation of a thousand tiny ideas I've had over months. And even then it changes and grows as I work on it. It's one of the reasons my scripts change so much, even during the art stage. Figured some of you might enjoy seeing some of this!
Amadose
2021-02-23 00:09:45 +0000 UTCChasity chapter next
2021-02-23 00:08:33 +0000 UTCThis is super cool, I love seeing people's workflow! Stuff like this is super helpful in any kind of story telling, and downright necessary I'd say
Mikey
2021-02-23 00:07:42 +0000 UTCJust a filler name for a roommate! George or James.
Amadose
2021-02-23 00:07:38 +0000 UTCOooh. An interesting look inside the mind of my favourite cuck artist. Both nice scenarios, though the latter resonated with me more for, umm.. Reasons.. >.>
AngelOD
2021-02-23 00:07:15 +0000 UTCDo to bring at work i can't read everything to find the answer. So I'll just ask. George?
Tigerchris
2021-02-23 00:04:26 +0000 UTCYooooo! It’s cool to see the background stuff and your creative process. Some pretty interesting ideas there with George and the little exchange between Nick and Judy is MM. Canon or knot, hearing little ideas and scenarios like that are lovely for the imagination~
Rickochet
2021-02-23 00:04:19 +0000 UTC