Chapter 5 - Knot on Top 5 & 6 (final)
Added 2021-01-26 18:15:43 +0000 UTCDang, these pages are so much worrrrrrrk, haha. Thought I'd be able to get all 4 finished in a week, but as always, it takes way more time than I expect 0_0 I hope you've all enjoyed being a part of the process though? I redeveloped a lot of the text on these pages, after all the voting and feedback. Owen's really flexing his muscles in his role now and its super fun =D In the next two pages, the text is pretty much the same, I just need to do all the window dressing for it.
Excited to get these two into your hands! The next two to come as soon as I'm done with them!
If I have time later on today I'll knock out some of the single panels as separate images for you guys too =)
Also, I updated the first 4 pages (attached) to include Judys darker eyelids that I missed the first time around.
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LINKS
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Higher tiers are always invited to send me questions (in private or as a comment) for the in-between-chapter QnA's! But I'm always game to answer questions for any tier outside of the QnA too.
Comments
Aw heck, thank you bud!
Amadose
2021-01-26 22:20:33 +0000 UTCHe just can't help himself! That wee little thing needs a chomp =D Thanks Kad<3
Amadose
2021-01-26 22:18:50 +0000 UTCNick's reactions just totally make this sequence XD Also I like the horror-ish incoming chomp. Adds that spicy danger element!
Kadath
2021-01-26 20:58:57 +0000 UTCDo take your time. Looking at your art come to life is a treat, and I love savoring each bit. I can tell your skills in comic structure are becoming more refined with each page. Looking forward to seeing more of everyone’s favorite cuck couple.
Rickochet
2021-01-26 20:30:25 +0000 UTCYeah, the feeling I've been getting from the votes is to see Ownen be a little more headstrong and forward-leaning. These pages didn't really have much text so inserting a little more dominance into it felt easy and natural. I think Owens very much testing the waters with all of this too, and has a 'do it first, then ask for forgiveness if it doesn't workout' attitude.
Amadose
2021-01-26 20:04:52 +0000 UTCwow Owen got a lot more at ease with his dom role over the past iteration, not that I'm complaining but for a first session I thought the earlier was a bit more feeling around and learning the limits but that being said the more dom is sexy and given Owen's experience it isn't to bad and the off screen time they can do alot of feeling out before getting as far as sex
ocaron
2021-01-26 19:39:07 +0000 UTCthe the bite i i love it UGH. im about to explode already... so so good...flops and prostrates myself to your greatness.
Tigerchris
2021-01-26 18:33:57 +0000 UTCOH MY GOSH
Tigerchris
2021-01-26 18:33:05 +0000 UTCDon't get me wrong, some pages are gonna have more words than others, and sometimes that's necessary for story flow. I absolutely love this page, it sets up so so much moving forward. All of that comes across nicely!
Mikey
2021-01-26 18:31:27 +0000 UTCAw heck, thank you! Really happy your happy with it =D I was actually really worried I was jamming in TOO much into these pages too! Originally on page 5, the two panels at the bottom weren't very well connected to the previous (or next) panels. I thought I could change the flavor (Owen is now teasing her by withdrawing), and it would help tie it all together. But it also increased the wordcount a whole bunch!
Amadose
2021-01-26 18:26:47 +0000 UTCgod tier material my dude, great work! I love the coloring, background details, all of it. Not just good content, but good comic structure too. I see some folks putting way too much dialog in, instead of letting the pictures tell the story and the dialog enhance it.
Mikey
2021-01-26 18:23:09 +0000 UTC
