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Chapter 4 - I'll Have a Double - Page 4

Another one bites the dust! My silly lil comic series is now 25 pages long - wild!

Maybe my fav page to work on so far? I really love how the characters look on a dark background =D


I'll, ah, add the middle panel as a stand-alone illustration for any of you who want it ;D


Why a fox?

Originally I had a bit more on this page that explained why Nick and Judy were looking for a fox specifically to be their bull (instead of going with Buck the hare) - but it got lost on the editing floor. I'll probably re-explore it a few more times though (maybe in the QnA in-between chapter I have planned?)

It's mostly to do with Nick. In my head, the cannon of the movie sort of shows Nick as an outsider - without a pack of his own and without other foxes in his life beyond his mother. He's always felt like a loner - outside the group.  Even his relationship with Fennick he seems distant. He's a guy who wears a fake confidence and jokey attitude to cover a lonely fragility.  

So I think that as his cuckold fetish started to form and metastasize (as he excitedly watched Buck with Judy) he latched onto the idea of seeing Judy with another Fox. Something more extreme, and deeper, than just watching her fuck someone of her own species. Watching her with a bigger, more endowed and aggressive fox, an alpha...  who matches himself and more. Well, I just think that would tick a lot more boxes. Really make him itch (in a good way). Really play on the whole 'I'm being replaced' facet of this control-and-jealousy-focused kink. Plus I think there's a pack mentality to consider  - these are human animals with animalistic traits, an 'alpha' has weight to it.

And, well, Judy's got a thing for it too! Fucking someone of her own species is fun. Buck especially so. But they'd only ever gotten with him for the purpose of procreating. He's not a guy looking to dominate a couple, he's not here to 'hunt' her. When 'breeding' came off the table, it's just wasn't as intense with Buck. Their relationship doesn't have to end - I picture them still foolin' around regularly. But Buck isn't a Bull, at least not the one they both want.

In my head, Judy is really into the idea of being vulnerable to another man who isn't her husband. She's realized how much it excites them both and wants more of it. She has a bit of a pred-prey kink going on and wants to feel caught and used. Knowing it'll be another fox, and that will make her hubby even wilder, just excites her more. 

I dunno. There's more they can do as a cuckolding couple if their Bull is a predator and a fox! Buck was a catalyst - he wasn't the perfect fit as a Bull. But, man, I can totally see a chapter where they bring him back at some point. Whether it's for pregnancy play or as a 4-5some, I dunno!

Finally, I also thought it would be important that the bull have his own wants and desires. Be a multi-faceted person with good reason to want to be a Bull. I didn't think that pushing Buck into that slot would be fair. They want something so specific that I think they'd have to go looking for it on sites and Apps. Adding a new bull with his own drive to 'push them' also sets us up for more!


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Comments

=D Thank you so much, Mikey! Oddly enough I've been recently worrying it doesn't have enough DRAMA. But I alsssso think it needs to level out before I try to spice it up a bit more =) So glad you've been enjoying it =D

Amadose

I absolutely love love love the direction you're taking with this. It's hitting all the right cuck buttons, and it honestly makes for a good story

Mikey

Thank you much! I'm glad everyone's been enjoying my write up. I might have to do more 'my thoughts and decision making' posts as I go!

Amadose

Loved the page, loved the explanation and thought process even more. Appreciate you sharing all the details and motivations. Really adds to it all. Always looking forward to more from you.

Jeff

? No cameos planned yet! I think If I do cameo's it'll be for some of my Patreons I think! But I do love the Gideon and Sharla ship I see so often, so who knows <3 All the planned plots and ideas I have so far are shared in the middle tier, as part of a vote each month.

Amadose

Hi there Amadose been a fan of Zootopia since you've been writing cuckold comics of this brand of yiff, I've been impressed with it all. I do ship Nick and Judy as a couple, even though techincally they can't interbreed like a normal couple, so why have they gone to this route like they have in the first 3 chapters?. Also will there be cameos from Gideon Grey and Sharla or would it just be Nick, Judy and they ones who cuckold Judy?

Jamie W

Ha, I love knowing I'm inspiring you to make your own stuff! Good luck!

Amadose

The page was hot but the thought process was hotter (understanding a kink as a writer is hot to me) it made me think and put lead in my pencil...in more ways then one.........XD...off to finish up some things.

Tigerchris

Ah, thank you so much! I had a lot of fun drawing it out!

Amadose

Loving your thought process and their motivation. ❤❤ And.. I've never wanted to be Nick more than I do when I see that middle panel. Mmnf!

AngelOD

That thought process makes sense!!

Ztpia


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