Phantom Star: Chapter 1
Added 2024-08-25 17:00:44 +0000 UTC
Welcome to Phantom Star! The first chapter of my new original series. I know everyone has questions about what is going on with GitC and how my upload schedule is going to be, and I understand that. So I wanted to try and answer some questions first.
Phantom Star is going to be uploaded onto Patreon, pretty much as fast as I get the chapters edited. Up until about Chapter 20, which is where I had the beta for it completed. Then it'll probably take over the every 4 days upload schedule.
GitC, PTV, or any other work, is going to be side projects. That means we'll still get updates. Maybe once every couple weeks or so? It's really going to be a transitional period for me, and I'm sort of testing and seeing what happens here. There will be a GitC update some time this week, to coincide with the release of PS on Royal Road, and SB. As I want to let everyone know that I'm writing it. (And I still love GitC, even if I'm a little burned out, I'll have to sit down sometime soon and try to write another chapter and see how it feels. It's been about long enough.)
I'm very excited and hope Phantom Star becomes something everyone really enjoys!
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Phantom Star Summary: Katherine has grown up again, in the far and distant future, on a space station, where her family scraps broken down spaceships for a living. But as exciting as living in space is for a former modern girl, there is something that calls her in the deep black. Her eyes lock onto the glimmering stars and she knows she wants to see them all. So she'll need to grow up, and build her future with her own hands.
Thankfully technology sings to her, guiding her in repair and construction so she'll build helpers, build a ship, and build a future among the rough and tumble frontier stars.
Reincarnation, Space Opera, Mechanic MC.
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Kurtz StarSector
Kenish Duchy
System 100212-B
Scrap processing station UNK-L
Watching star ships fly past the massive port windows was something that I once could only dream of, but now it was a daily occurrence.
“That’s a Zimmer Halogen. See the large bulb around the engine room in the back? That means it’s the B variant because it has the expanded engine room.” I chattered away as my Mother did her best to hum along at my words to show she was listening even if her interest in ships was nonexistent.
It seemed weird to me, that so many people living on a space station above a dump planet would basically just treat it as a diversion and nothing else.
“Oh look! That’s Dad!” I called out pointing and Mom looked up, her blue eyes shining as she smiled, her lips covered in purple lipstick, a weird fashion quirk in my eyes, stretched brightly. The tug shuttle went out and pushed the ship into the dock.
That ship was an older freighter, and it was beaten to hell. The Zimmer had towed it here. A pretty common occurrence. It was easy Cred. Haul some old scrap ship into a dump yard and we’d pay, and then scrap the thing for whatever we could get.
Because that’s what my family did. We scrapped spaceships.
A great great great uncle had once done some amazing things for the Lord of the Duchy and had been rewarded with the right to set up a scrap yard.
It had been running for over two hundred years now, and it had kept my entire extended family in enough Creds that we had become middle class.
Something not easy to do when the population of any star sector was in the trillions at least and most places were nearly feudal in how they treated people.
Of course I was even more different than most. I had been reborn in the far and distant future, memories of a past life with a blue open sky had haunted me from the moment I had become aware I was alive.
Earth was so distant from here, you couldn’t even see the light of the Sun.
I couldn’t even tell what the year was. Too much weird stuff had happened. Dark Ages. Calendar resets fighting other calendar resets. And after time people, at least my schooling programs, just didn’t really know.
“Hmm. Will the ship scrap well?” Mom asked, and I nodded, trailing a hand through my blonde hair, my eyes searching the floating scrap heap. It would scrap very well. Everyone would be happy. I could feel my hands pressing against each other, a nervous habit I had picked up.
I wanted to be out there too. Space was… Amazing. Special.
I had no regrets that I hadn’t set foot on a planet in this life. I had the soul of a spacer through and through.
I refocused on Dad’s tugship. The old freighter was pushed into the grapple arms of the station. Where it would be scanned, and scrappers would go through it. Some would be my cousins, but most were off station workers. Scrapping was good enough money for normal people, and despite the whole working in space, it was actually pretty safe compared to a lot of in ground jobs.
You never had to worry about the planet having a super hurricane, or a Mega Earthquake leveling continents in space. Not all terraforming was made equal after all.
And safety measures were very solid. Great Uncle Kyle was the current manager of the station and since so many family members worked here everything was reviewed constantly.
Of course that was for normal stuff. As Dad was pushing the freighter I felt it first. A rising of the hair on the back of my neck that had me jerk to my feet. Mom stopped and looked away from the Tab she was playing with as suddenly it sparked, and she nearly dropped it as she looked up.
Space, dark and shining with stars was suddenly cut through as a kaleidoscope of energy burst forth.
A Warp exit.
The feeling of static in space, a rioting flash as unreality touched reality, and suddenly empty space was filled with thousands of tons of ship!
No. It was more than that. That was a battleship!
I gasped. The clean lines of a military vessel were very different from the almost bulbous form of most civilian vessels. It was a shock to see. Especially since it was way way too close! Well within the safety distance of our station!
The lights inside shifted red, and the forcefields activated at full power. I could even see the light shimmer in space as our station's Shield Emitters activated trying to protect us against an attack.
Just like many of the people on the station that had been looking out the windows. I started suiting up.
Normally the heavy jumpsuit was only half on, the arms tied around my waist to keep me cooler, and to feel lighter, but I untied it in a rush and threw my arms inside. The suit was sealed up and I grabbed my gloves from my waist and threw my hands into them.
The seals instantly locked into place around my wrist and once everything was in place, the force field activated.
I could jump into space without any fear as I stood right now. But I turned to Mom, who was unlike most of the staff wearing a more trendy fashionable outfit.
“Come on!” Mom called as she grabbed me and started rushing me away.
Even if I wanted to keep looking because honestly if that ship was hostile getting into an eva suit, or into an armored room wasn’t going to help. But I did look and relax as Dad was already redocking with the station. Safe.
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“Dad!” I called out as I charged and jumped into his arms. He spun me around a bit which was doubly fun because gravity was low in the hallway section so we lifted off the air and spun around before landing gently.
“Hey! There’s my Star Burst.”
“You’re okay?” I asked in turn, looking him over. His own suit was well worn, but clean, and he looked fine, even if his forcefield was down.
“Ah you saw that huh?” He asked, smiling and patted my head. “Bit closer than I’d ever like to be to a Battleship. Anyway, the ship that dropped off the freighter was the pirate responsible for attacking it. Turns out it wasn’t the first time they pulled this stunt. Considering everything. We get to scrap the freighter as the owners are gone, and we don’t have to pay the pirate so it’s a good day.”
I sighed in relief. That was good news. Nobility could have called us pirates as well and taken over the station, or just took the freighter entirely, or made us pay them for the mistake.
“Dear.” Dad called out as Mom pulled him into a hug and kiss. “Good news. I’ve been given scrap rights for the freighter. Gonna be busy for a few cycles, but-”
“That’s amazing!” Mom called out happily, and I smiled along with her for different reasons.
The fact was, Mom was… Well a credit digger I guess would be the right term? She loved my father of course. Truly. Yet she hadn’t married him for love, but to get herself out of poverty. It did lead to some awkward times when Mom thought Dad should push for more credits or work when it wasn’t culturally right.
Weird how despite having memories of a past life, I was more a child of the station than Mom who had been born in this time.
Dad wasn't in the direct family of Uncle Kyle. So he and I would never own the station, or really make more than enough to live comfortably.
I was fine with that. I had my own desires, and it had nothing to do with staying on a scrap station my whole life, but Mom had… Ambitions.
But sometimes it meant when Dad had to work more Mom took it as a positive.
“That’s awesome Dad! Can I see the engine room before you scrap it?” I asked, smiling already knowing the answer.
“Not until you finish your Scrapper Exam.” He answered instantly. My fascination with ships was well known to every member of the station and nearly every traveler that stopped for a refill or anything else.
I sighed and nodded.
“Hey StarBurst, why don’t you head to the hab okay?” Dad asked, and I wrinkled my nose as I instantly knew what I was being shooed away from.
“Gross! I’m running away! Just let me get my Tab!” I demanded giving both of my parents the stink eye as I knew they were about to have sex.
I headed into my room, which wasn’t very large. Most rooms were just a sleeping bed, which was actually an emergency pod as well. If you were sleeping and the station decompressed it would close down and keep you alive hopefully long enough for someone to save you.
Hopefully.
I grabbed my bag full of parts and my Tab, which was just a future tablet, and headed out once more giving my parents a disgusted look as I moved past them. The two were already close together and kissing, and like usual my face made Dad laugh as I left.
As soon as I was outside, my face smoothed out. It honestly didn’t bother me that much, but it made my Dad laugh so it was one of our little jokes.
I hurried down the dimly lit residential hall. The lighter gravity in the hallways meant I was practically bouncing as I made it to the elevator and slipped in. My feet touched the flooring solidly once I was inside the elevator the Gravity Panels set to a more normal Gravity. I hit the Hab button.
I started digging through my bag. This was my work bag, tools and parts for my projects cluttered the inside.
I had long ago realized that any hope of getting off station was going to take me actively making it happen.
Well, it wasn’t that I hated the station. I loved the rickety old place. It was just that I was in the future! People could explore the stars! I wanted to see it! Like Anakin Skywalker, I wanted to see them all!
The elevator opened into the Hab floor and I walked out into the noise of people.
Here at the top of the station was a massive park.
The glass dome above was currently displaying an active slightly purplish sunny sky.
For some reason everyone liked purple skies in this sector. Something, something the sector capital had purple skies. It was weird.
It was also crowded, not just the families of the scrappers, but any travelers needing a pit stop for repairs or food, or fuel could all use the Hab floor.
Mostly it became a trading space. There were shops all around the center park, most of them my cousins, of some sort as they sold food, or parts, or anything they thought they could bring to the table.
I hurried past it all into the weird, notgrass that coated the floor of the park and around the really scratchy annoying bushes that lined the area then across the entire hab. There was an old… Well I called it a tree, but it really wasn’t. It wasn’t wood, but actually a growing stone that looked sort of like a gnarled old tree without leaves.
It was some sort of Lithicmorph. A stone that grew, found on some planet in the sector. We brought up rocks from the moon for it from time to time, but otherwise it just grew quietly.
I climbed up it with familiar steps and then used it to jump onto the roofing above the shops. There was a nice quiet niche that none of the travelers could get to, where I could be left alone…
“Hey Marie.” I called out grumpily, some of my cousins were already up here. Slacking off.
“Oh little Kathy!”
“‘M not little.” I grumbled, I really wasn’t, but I still got stuck with the nickname. I decided to ignore the older teenagers. I was here to get some work done, and they wouldn’t stop me. I flopped in an empty section and pulled open my bag.
Time to finish some more work on my project.
From within the bag I dug around for the scattered parts, grabbing half a dozen bits and bobs, and started working. The outer casing was an old nav beacon that had been thrown out, that I had snatched up. Inside, already installed, was a gravity panel that I had fixed up and adjusted properly.
That was all mostly done, but I was struggling now with the limbs. Making a hover drone was not easy. Especially without a lot of manufacturing supplies. I had to dig through the trash and wait for something to sing to me, that it wanted to be something else.
I blinked and shook off the thought. It was sort of like that though. I had been reborn with… Something extra.
It always made me wonder if I was actually me, or just some weird faux memory of some nanomachines, or something else entirely. Either way it pushed me to build things, and made me capable of wondrous feats.
Or it would. Once a few of these drones were done and I had some hands that could properly lift things around.
“Playing with junk again?” I looked up at Marshall and glared, carefully I put the drone casing back into the bag and covered it up so he couldn’t swipe it. As always Marshall with his stupid short blonde hair done up in slick backed spikes which was the nova way for boys to look in the far future was glaring at me.
“It’s only junk until I fix it.” I said, despite knowing he would not let it go.
“A Nav beacon? C’mon what’s the use of that? It’s trash!”
“It’s just the casing. I’m making it something else.” I grumbled, but Marshall sighed.
He was one of my oldest, teenage cousins. I was lucky he wasn’t of the main line though because he was a bossy little shit. He was nice sometimes unless you went against what he said then he’d turn nasty. The worst part was he had an ego, and a desire to be treated like a king.
He had already gotten annoyed at me tinkering and told me to stop before. He viewed it as a waste of time.
As if he had any right to make me stop, but I knew that this could go bad.
“Kat. You need to stop playing around! You should be studying for your scrapper exam! You’ll be useless if you can’t finish that. Not playing with garbage! We-”
“Marshall.” A voice called out and everyone went quiet.
It was Carter. He was three years younger than Marshall, and one year older than me, at fifteen but everyone listened to him. He was Great Uncle Kyle's Direct child.
The Heir to the station eventually.
“C’mon Carter, I’m just trying to get Kat to focus up!”
“That’s up to her folks, Marshall. Leave her alone already. Remember how she fixed that light in Marie’s room?”
“Yep, it works great now!” Marie called out, throwing me a wink.
“She’s got some skill with it, and whether she passes or not is her problem not yours.”
“Fine.” Marshall grumbled and walked away without looking and I relaxed. I looked up and Carter just looked away from me, to continue talking with his friends a bit further down.
I pulled out my drone and got back to work.
It needed… Tools, and strength enough to adjust heavy objects that I couldn’t move. I couldn’t exactly make a ship with just the arm strength of a fourteen year old.
I continued tinkering and slowly it came together. A Tab to act as both vocal, and visual equipment, as well as a good basis for accessing comm channels. Only one arm so far. Eventually it would have two. It was a cute little clamper, I had ‘acquired’ from some scrap.
Right now it didn’t have any legs, just the one arm. But eventually it would have four legs. Making it a sort of crab shape.
Programming a pseudo AI had taken me literally years. A pet project I’d been working on since I first realized I’d need to pull a Tony Stark if I ever wanted to get off this station. Luckily once you formed an AI kernel, you could have as many as you wanted by just making a new copy of the kernel.
Although this would be the first time I’d given my little nascent AI an actual body. Finally bringing her out of the digital space she had lived and learned in so far.
I nodded as I tested the limb and it seemed to work.
“Let’s see how you like that.” I muttered and pressed a button then turned a knob hidden in a control panel letting the drone boot up.
Slowly a light flickered on the Tab in the front, it flickered and a cute little pair of digital eyes and a mouth formed on the screen.
The eyes blinked as they seemed to look around, although that was actually a loading sequence, and then it’s mouth shifted. Jumping up and down like an Audio meter, but in the shape of a cute little face.
If you were going to make an AI, always make it cute.
“Ah! It’s Katherine! Hi Katherine!” It squirmed, in my grip as it called out to me.
“Hi Crabbit.” I whispered back smiling as the bright childish voice came from the drone. “I finished one of your limbs, can you run through the tests for me?”
“Ah! New equipment found! Searching! Yes! Running tests.” And the little gripper limb with plenty of little attachments shifted around opening, closing, and pushing out the diagnostic tools, before closing them back up going through everything.
“Huh. What’s that Kat?” Marie asked suddenly, hunkering down beside me.
“She’s Crabbit.” I told her with a smile. The name was meaningless, but I had of course had a few hundred sketches on my Tab about what the drone would look like when she was complete, and the fact I kept coming to a similar design was surely a sign of Carcinisation. They kept coming out crab shaped, because that’s what I needed.
And the rest of the name was because there were two long sensor arrays coming off the top of their head… Well they looked like rabbit ears.
Hence Crabbit.
“She’s my helper drone.” I told Marie with a big smile I couldn’t contain, because she was active!
“Wow, you made your own little toy Drone? That’s so cute!”
“It’s not a toy.” I grumbled, but I couldn’t help but start smiling as I lifted her up. “The Crabbit is everything I need to repair and build any project I could need! It has an integrated Gravity Panel which means as long as it’s working in tandem with a few others it can even lift battleship armor plates!”
“Wow.” Marie said, poking at her purple lipstick for a moment before giggling and just reaching out and poking my nose. “You’re so cute little Kathy.”
“I’m not little! I’m bigger than you!” I grumbled and sat up taller so I loomed over the older girl. My messy blonde hair made my shadow big enough to hide her in, that’s how good I was at looming!
I was actually tall for my age thanks to the biomods that ran through my family, sometimes they still popped up randomly.
I was already twice the size of any other girl my age on the station. I definitely had some soldier nanomachines active, as I was hungrier than normal, and I had more muscle than a fourteen year old girl should have.
It left me looking bullish, I was kinda ugly if I admitted it to myself. A bit too broad, a bit too tall, a bit too wide.
But everyone called me little because of one stupid incident when I was a kid!
“But you’re the only one that could slip in-”
“I don’t want to hear it!” I said over her voice, glaring and she laughed in delight. I had slipped into a hidden compartment in a freighter we were scrapping once when I was little, and ended up refusing to leave. I was so small no one else could get me out until my demands were met.
Also I had found one of the ships smuggling compartments while in there, so I hadn’t been punished too badly for wasting everyone's time.
I nodded as I looked over the Crabbit. Its self-test completed, but I could just… It was a feeling. Machines sang to me, and at the same time they wanted to be built. I could think about anything mechanical and my brain simply looked at everything around me, and started telling me what I would need to fix it.
Well… It was more complicated than just that. I still had to do some studying, and learning actual mechanics helped, but I could look at a broken ship and she’d tell me what was wrong with her.
I could look at a broken light, and know that the wire was shorting out because of improper installation.
It was nice. Listening to the melody of technology around me, but it did make me a bit weird compared to my peers. I was a bit awkward, honestly. ‘Modern’ space slang was weird, and I barely used it, and most of the time I’d only pick up on the new slang when it stopped being cool, or when it was used against me that I had to ask what I was being called.
I shook that off, it wasn’t important. I sat back down as Marie laughed at me.
Since Crabbit was not entirely complete, but at least functional. She was now passing all of the tests she was running through, and more importantly, I could hear the singing of well working mechanisms. I knew she was finally done.
Her tests she was going through all passed and more importantly, I could hear the singing of well working mechanisms. I knew she was finally done.
I stood up, time to visit my favorite place on the Station.
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Crabbit floated after me as I ran into the Scrap Shop. Her gravity panel was working perfectly; letting her float around as she wanted!
“Aunt Sheila!” I called out and got a response deep within. I waited patiently bouncing up and down a bit in excitement, which to my delight my Crabbit copied floating up and down slowly as she grew more comfortable.
Finally Aunt Sheila came out of the back, wearing the same type of jumpsuit as me, as she ambled through her entire storage room of junk.
“Alright Kat, what are you looking for this time-What?” She said as Crabbit floated over, her electronic eyes looking over Aunt Sheila. She wasn’t actually my aunt, but a distant cousin, but all of us were related anyways. “What is that?”
“Crabbit! My repair drone! I told you I was close!”
“Well I’ll be damned.” She muttered looking just as interested in Crabbit as she was in her.
“Hello hello! Crabbit here!” My drone greeted chipperly. “Lots of parts! Repair time?” She asked and I snickered.
“Alright. Alright.” Sheila called looking at me with a smile. “You win. What do you need?”
“So much!” I called out. “I need enough parts to finish her, and to make a few more Crabbits. So pleeeeease!”
“Ugh kid you know how expensive those tiny drives are.” She argued and I nodded which is why I pointed at Crabbit.
“Exactly! Think about how many of them are in the Scrap Field! My Crabbit has Type 4 sensors! They can sweep and find more!”
“When the blackhole, did you find a Type 4 Sensor? I know I didn’t give you one! So you better not have scavenged one!” She suddenly barked, reaching out and grabbing me by the front of my tanktop.
“I took a level three, and kludged it with a dermal sensor.” I answered back and I could see as her jaw dropped open a bit as she processed it.
“That’s not a Type 4!” She yelled after a moment.
“It doesn’t have the range of a Type 4, but with a bit of programming Crabbit can process the data of both and make a pseudo Type 4! It works!” I called out, doubly pleased because that sensor had been really tough to figure out. I had spent a long time just listening to the song of the machines telling me what to do.
I had learned so much from doing it once, I probably could make a fully functional Type 4 with just a Type 3 and some scrap from other lesser sensors. But that would mean taking apart the kludged prototype one already installed, and I just wanted it to be done!
“Prove it.” She demanded, and I did just that. Aunt Sheila waved me on, and it didn’t take long for Crabbit to find some Iris drives hiding in her scrap. Then my little Crabbit didn’t just find the ones she expected, but found an extra one!
“That brat! I told him to go through all of these!” Aunt Sheila cursed as she took apart the old comm unit and found an Iris Drive that hadn’t been removed. The glowing cube was pulled free with a few deft movements, and Aunt Sheila looked over the power source with a careful eye before nodding satisfied, and sticking it into her pocket.
I was bouncing but kept myself from calling out a long “Seeee!” And instead just stayed silent. Trying to get a favor from someone in a bad mood because they just discovered their son was slacking wasn’t a good time.
Especially since Aunt Sheila was great and I already knew if I just waited, I’d get what I wanted. She was the one to give me the original tiny Iris Drive for the Crabbit after all.
“Alright. Alright. Stop bouncing around, you're making me think the grav panels are wonky.” She demanded shoving a glove clad finger into my chest a little less gently than she normally would have. “You can have this Drive. And we can talk about what you need to make another of those drones… A drone that can hunt down Iris Drives in scrap is useful, so… If you can get permission. I’ll bring you along.”
“YES!” I shouted this was it! The final step I needed to go beyond just playing with whatever scrap we kept on the station.
A chance to go to the Scrap Field. To the real treasure trove!
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“Aaand lets’ see if that works.” I proclaimed. Sitting around the kitchen table. Dinner was done, and Dad and Mom were both resting in the living room space, watching some Comm Drama. Nothing that interested me.
No, I had started building. With my first Crabbit functional, work on the second had been easy. A Level 4 scanner made scrap hunting easy.
I was still waiting for Aunt Sheila to convince Dad to let me go out into the scrap field with her.
So for now I was still stuck working with station trash. Luckily, I knew the exact process to make a Crabbit, having done one already.
The new Crabbits exterior was different though, made out of a vacuum unit I had found instead of a nav beacon. It made the Crabbit I just finished putting together more saucer shaped than my first one..
I finished installing the interior hardware on the chassis, and the next important part. I had been planning on using this second grabber arm for my first Crabbit, but this way they’d both have an arm, and that was more useful than a more put together single Crabbit. Especially since I now had two gravity manipulating drones… Well I would once I started this one up.
This is the most difficult part of the whole process.
The fact was, I wasn’t exactly working with the best hardware, which meant the Crabbits were running off cleaning drones, and the like. It didn’t exactly make them smart, and I needed them to be smart.
So I had taken an idea. Both Crabbits were running off hardware that was below what they each needed to operate optimally, but… What if they shared their hardware?
The Crabbits each were formed from the same AI Kernal, but what if I did even more. Synchronization.
The idea was really simple. The Crabbits would share their memories letting them learn faster than a lone AI could, and on top of that, they could share hardware, since the AI on each Drone wouldn’t override each other. They would be used to sharing digital space, and so could share their own selves with each other.
One Crabbit, many bodies. So if a Crabbit was doing a complex task, it could request hardware power from another and in essence, become smarter to handle the task better.
That was the idea, and just like I had relied on the song that helped guide me as I built things, I had followed the songs guidance as I aimed to complete this upgrade as well.
I just needed to turn her on. If it worked… If it worked, the Crabbits would be so much more useful to me as I aimed for my real goal.
Without hesitating any more, I reached into the frame and started her up, and settled her on the table.
The other Crabbit was hovering over my shoulder, her one grabber clinging onto my tanktop as she sort of huddled close. Something she had started to do in order to stay with me as I moved around.
I thought it was cute.
And then…
The Crabbit turned on. Her little face activated, and I couldn’t help but feel nervous. My hands wringing together as I stared at the small drone that suddenly settled and then hovered up off the table.
“Hello, hello! Katherine! Katherine! Hello!”
“You can just call me Kat, Crabbit.”
“Kat! Kat! Kat!” It cheered as it floated around my head and I relaxed. She was working.
“Can you test your hardware share for me?” I asked, and both Crabbits stilled and I waited. There was no way for me to check on the test, it was purely in the digital space between the two AI.
Then finally they both blinked in sequence.
“Synchronization complete!”
“Yeah! Complete!” The new Crabbit called out and I relaxed as they were both… Okay. They were okay.
Another project down. Now I needed more.
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“I don’t like this.”
“Ed. She’s fourteen, and I’ll be with her.” Aunt Sheila argued. I was ready. I already got permission although it took me scoring incredibly well on my Scrapper Pre-test, the results being above the standard.
I didn’t say anything to Dad about whether I should go, I was already suited up in an armored jumpsuit, with a space helmet, and a mobility pack.
I actually had some time out in space already, I lived on a station, but going into the scrap fields was another issue entirely.
“I know… Just, watch her Sheila please. She’ll be on her best behavior.” Dad said, sending me a look that I nodded up and down at, because otherwise I would get an ass whooping.
“She’ll be fine. The girl is a tech savant. She’s born for this.” Then Sheila pushed me a bit towards the docking port. “C’mon now Kat. It’s time to go Edward.” She said pointedly at Dad.
“Sheila.” Dad responded, both adults saying their farewells as I entered the shuttle I waved at Dad before turning around and settling into the co-pilot seat.
“Alright Kat. You know this isn’t the time to mess around. You do as I say.”
“When you say it and how. I won’t play around Aunt Sheila.”
“Good.” Then she turned to the controls and after a moment flipped a switch and the entire shuttle popped off from the station and started moving. Aunt Sheila wasn’t even driving, just letting the auto pilot make the transfer from the station towards the scrap field.
It was a pretty awe inspiring sight for my Earth memories.
Imagine a small moon, then around it what looks like clouds, until you get closer and you realize all the silver clouds were thousands of ships. Most of them were pretty small, old shuttles, and jump ships for one or two people, plenty of old freighters and the like were here as well.
We were scrappers after all, but not everything that was handed to us was garbage. Quite a few ships were still capable just needing a refit or repairs.
That’s where the Scrap Field came in. We went through the ships and took out anything of value we wanted, and then pushed the ships into place. Tied them together, and left them to sit. Of course it was also a good place to store extra salvage that we found. Some of the old freighters were used to store spare parts so the Station didn’t end up filled with junk.
There was another reason we didn’t crash them into the moon, or launch the junk ships into the sun.
War was a real thing, and sometimes the Duchy needed ship hulls regardless of quality, to quickly put together more ships. Taking a freighter and refitting the engine and adding weapons was an effective method of adding a new patrol boat to a defense screen.
And so we saved everything. Just letting them all float quietly above the small moon until it was needed.
Well it wasn’t actually a moon exactly. A small Planetoid. Like Pluto back in Sol. Just a random space rock that UNK-L floated around.
And this was the first time I was going to be allowed to go with!
You’d be amazed at how many of the ships hadn’t been completely searched through before storing. There were times where the station would end up with dozens of new ships to scrap at the same time, and we simply didn’t have the manpower to handle them all. So they were stripped of the most important bits and pushed out to scrap through later.
That’s what Aunt Sheila did. She went out, usually by herself, and searched through the old derelicts for things we missed.
And now thanks to the Crabbit, and their sensors, I was allowed to come too!
I was staring enraptured as we flew under a large cargo freighter, the block shaped ship was all brute force and even floating quietly spoke of how it was made to force its way through whatever astral phenomenon there might be to get to its destination.
There weren’t many ‘pretty’ ships in our field. We were out in the middle of nowhere after all. But that didn’t mean a few old pleasure craft weren't scattered here and there. The smooth curves of those ships were beautiful and caught the eye against all the brutal, or bulbous modification jobs of most of the ships.
“Alright kid.” Aunt Sheila said as she slowed. “Let’s get those scanners going. I want to make a haul today.”
I nodded and turned to my Crabbit. “Go ahead and begin scanning. Work together.” I told them and both of them bobbed from my shoulders where they were grabbing onto my space Jumpsuit.
They started looking all around, and I pulled out my Tab to get a look at their returns.
“Looks like that one has at least six Iris Drives.” I mentioned with a bit of fiddling my finger was in the right direction. An old Ecal Freighter from the looks of it. Tough as shit, and usually the sort of ship a family might take care of for centuries just keeping the maintenance going and the freighter moving.
But this one had taken a nasty looking attack, a chunk of its side was just gone.
“Got it. Let’s go take a look.”
I grinned feeling the excitement, exploring ships was the best part of being a space brat, but exploring an old Space Hulk? That was something even more exciting! Loot! Salvage! Treasure!
I giggled as we pulled up to the airlock and locked in, even though the ship wasn’t pressurized our airlock would depressurize us so we could get in.
“Alright. Double check!” She ordered and I did, checking my helmet and getting green on my seals, and my oxygen supply.
Radio check.
Loud and clear. I confirmed and we moved, walking out to the back of the ship, we stepped into the airlock and it sucked the air out, storing it for later before the door to the ship opened and I got my first look inside.
Old and broken down. I could see tire tracks on the floors where the station could have pushed salvage sleds out of the ship once they loaded them up.
Alright follow me. Aunt Sheila said as she took a step and transitioned to a sort of floating motion as the gravity panels inside the ship were obviously offline. I moved to follow before grinning.
Give me something to step on. I told my Crabbit, with a grin, and suddenly instead of floating in zero G, my feet touched the floor and I felt like I was in normal gravity.
Smirking as I walked after my Aunt until I was beside her as she adjusted herself to grab a door further in and open it, she looked at me, and then looked back at the door controls before jerking back to me.
What? I told you they have integrated gravity panels… Want one? I offered and I could make out her visibly sighing before her radio activated.
Yes… Brat.
Comments
Woo love it from chapter 1! Ugh I wish I could write like you! I know it's like something learned over time but I feel like you have an innate talent at drawing people in.
Wargen
2024-11-01 09:15:32 +0000 UTCOkay, I put off reading this long enough, as I love bingeing your stuff. I'm so happy with this first chapter. 😁😁😁🤩🥳
Robert
2024-10-22 05:02:56 +0000 UTCJust don’t forget to answer “yes” when they ask if they have a soul. Don’t let them pull a Geth.
Shadeymankey
2024-09-03 19:44:10 +0000 UTCthanks! this is really good!
deus vault
2024-08-30 18:17:01 +0000 UTCI love this, instantly hooked
Kristoffer
2024-08-29 17:06:59 +0000 UTCCool! Hooked :)
Adam Davies
2024-08-28 11:34:07 +0000 UTC"Since Crabbit was not entirely complete, but at least functional. She was now passing all of the tests she was running through, and more importantly, I could hear the singing of well working mechanisms. I knew she was finally done. Her tests she was going through all passed and more importantly, I could hear the singing of well working mechanisms. I knew she was finally done." Needs to be fixed.
Mistress Araenidae
2024-08-26 20:56:11 +0000 UTCNice start. I see much potentil. I love the idea of building you're own starship.
morganmoll
2024-08-26 16:10:28 +0000 UTCThis story has a lot of potential. I love science fiction and I like a ghost in the city. This story just by this alone. If your player cards right this story could become Amazon publishing Worthy or get a audible audiobook version as follow. Keep up the good work and me your luck and your skill takes you to the next level.
lizard King
2024-08-26 16:02:33 +0000 UTCOoooh me likey 😃. I can't wait for more, I love stories with tinkering
Martin Banks
2024-08-26 13:47:40 +0000 UTCYeah, I'm going to be releasing it on SB and RR pretty soon, trying to get the edits going and get the cover and stuff ready.
Seras
2024-08-26 13:34:30 +0000 UTCLove it! Here's some parts that bugged me. Hope it helps! "Mom looked up, her blue eyes shining as she smiled, her lips covered in purple lipstick, a weird fashion quirk in my eyes, stretched brightly" - This part reads kinda awkwardly. A lot of asides in the commas nested together. Might want to make the part about the lipstick a new sentence to break up the thoughts. "But I turned to Mom, who was unlike most of the staff wearing a more trendy fashionable outfit." - This part needs commas separatkng the "most of the staff" aside from the rest of the sentence. "I climbed it up with familiar steps" - should be "climbed up it" (unless this is a colloquialism I'm missing) "As always Marshall with his stupid short blonde hair done up in slick backed spikes which was the nova way for boys to look in the far future was glaring at me." - This should really be two sentences since they're two unrelated thoughts. "As always Marshal was glaring at me. His stupid short blonde hair done up in slick backed spikes which was the nova way for boys to look in the far future." Or something like this. Reads more clearly to me.
BananaBobert
2024-08-26 13:16:45 +0000 UTCI love the name Katherine. I am liking the story. It got me hooked on chapter 1. I want to read more. Thank you.
Stefan Landshut
2024-08-26 11:03:22 +0000 UTCSmall disappointment at slow down of other stories, Great joy at new one ,your writing is so engaging and fun . thank you for sharing your stories with me
John Reyna
2024-08-26 05:54:50 +0000 UTCIs this still going to be kept updated in spacebattles?Just got too used to reading this with Vicky and the Tachikoma that it's now a bit weird reading this with different names.
Greki K
2024-08-26 04:30:38 +0000 UTCSure, but it'll give me more to read if I wait till all 20 chaps are in 😆
Fortunis
2024-08-26 02:18:34 +0000 UTCI agree, Im delaying my burnout by rereading GITC, though Ill admit I was really getting into Devouring
StressedTech
2024-08-26 01:07:19 +0000 UTCIf you haven't read Seras's snippet thread over on Spacebattles, where the beta-test of the story happened, I don't want to spoil you too much... but let's just say I wouldn't bet against you.
Just A Dude
2024-08-26 00:37:48 +0000 UTCThere are actually a few new scenes in this chapter and some tweaks, like the Tachikomas being changed to something less copyrighted. I think it'll be worth reading along to see the alterations.
Just A Dude
2024-08-26 00:35:42 +0000 UTCYeah I know. Typing out Klein was faster.
MrDenim
2024-08-25 22:45:50 +0000 UTCHis name is ballsdeep69, not Klein.
Tim
2024-08-25 22:34:01 +0000 UTC2 new stories In such a short time, you spoil us.
Scarletmenace
2024-08-25 22:19:15 +0000 UTCAlright! Now that this is going through the wringer, how about some voices? Young Katherine: Whoever did Carmen Cortez in Spy Kids. Adult Katherine: Ashley Johnson. Marshall: Whoever voiced Klein in Sword Art Online: Abridged. Carter: Younger Robert Pattison. Marie: The VA for Amy Rose from Sonic Prime. Kat's Dad: Liam O'Brien. Kat's Mom: Ashley Eckstein. Aunt Sheila: Whoever the VA was for the boss lady in the tutorial mission for Starfield.
MrDenim
2024-08-25 21:48:56 +0000 UTCThis story seems right up my alley! Thank you for the chapter and I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes!
BlueJayCash
2024-08-25 21:33:21 +0000 UTCStares in Brandon Sanderson.
matt
2024-08-25 21:21:33 +0000 UTCI was a bit sad about GitC, however I also really love this! Thanks for the chapter!
Tan
2024-08-25 21:07:19 +0000 UTCA Seras MC that isn't a literal munchkin when the story starts and is physically taller than her peers? What is this blasphemy? Jk, I am loving this story so far. I always love seeing these kind of stories. Keep it up!
Suika Nine
2024-08-25 21:00:56 +0000 UTCHmm, I think my only complaint (and this is minor) is I'd like to see PtV at a more natural stopping point before updates there slow down. Finishing the tournament or something so it feels like we resolved most of the current plotline first. Otherwise, I liked Phantom Star on SpaceBattles and have no issues with you trying out more original story content. Not that you need my approval, I just mean to say I'm quite enthusiastic to see where you're going! But I'd like to see Pokemon Vicky get past the tournament first, personally.
nugitoBambino
2024-08-25 20:33:20 +0000 UTCFantastic so far. Has a lot of promise. Lots of room for world building and expansion. Good MC, pseudo technomancy powers are interesting. The regression back into a feudal society even in future space also leaves a lot of room for interesting plot developments. Going to miss more regular GitC and PTV posts but this should fill the void quite nicely.
DurzoMandragoran
2024-08-25 20:21:30 +0000 UTCOh god another delight! Quite an I interesting story base, also already betting that little tyrant of a teen is going to cause trouble later. Thank you for such an enjoyable read seras.
Straven
2024-08-25 19:38:46 +0000 UTCMC being non-Vicky is veird... xD
Lishmael
2024-08-25 19:37:30 +0000 UTCVery fair, we can't all be Ravensdagger (who scares us all with their output)
M0och
2024-08-25 19:17:52 +0000 UTCWell better to have some original stories in the grill that way, you can bring out different ideas to a new universe, and to make Patreon not be pissy over fanfics. 😀
Duke of Coffee
2024-08-25 18:38:24 +0000 UTCThis definitely feels meatier than the version in the snippet thread. I think taking more time to describe what's up with the Crabbits (adorable name, by the way), instead of relying on everyone knowing what a Tachikoma is, really makes it feel more solid. Either that or I'm completely forgetting sections of the original version.
Just A Dude
2024-08-25 18:29:35 +0000 UTCSpeaking as someone who read the original 20 chapters, it's fantastic to see this here and being reworked. (Means I get more content) 😆 🤣. I'll wait till it hits chapter 20 again and then binge it.
Fortunis
2024-08-25 18:20:52 +0000 UTCSide-side project. I'll work on it when I can or feel the mood and it'll update whenever I can. I already have waaay too many projects to handle another one.
Seras
2024-08-25 18:15:38 +0000 UTCWhat’s the plan with Devouring the Neverglades?
Ambrose
2024-08-25 18:12:20 +0000 UTCMulti-pass?
MikeL
2024-08-25 18:09:08 +0000 UTCThank you!
Seras
2024-08-25 18:08:29 +0000 UTCHaul some old scrap ship into a dump yard and we’d spay Is that supposed to be pay and not spay? “I don’t want to hear it! I said over her voice, Missing a " after the it! I nodded as I looked over the Crabbit. It’s self-test completed, Its not It's in this case. It was a pretty awe inspiring sight for my earth memories. Shouldn't the earth here a capital E? Thanks for the great chapter! I like the revisions, figured any potential small mistakes should be pointed out here before it goes up on Royal Road and SB. Can't wait for the next chapter!
greatGUARDIAN100
2024-08-25 18:06:26 +0000 UTCAh always knew this day would come. Happy for you but this story is not for me. I read it originally in the snippets thread and had to back out after 5~ or so chapters cause it just didn't appeal. Unfortunately ill probably have to bail out and unsub cause i was primarily here for PTV with a side of GITC keeping me going between the PTV chapters. Sad to hear the burnout has continued but if this is the future of primary releases i won't be here for it. All the best for you though Seras and i hope it takes off!
Icemoo
2024-08-25 17:58:50 +0000 UTCNo one can beat Ravensdagger. XD No I won't go that crazy. I wouldn't have even started more stories if not for my GitC burnout.
Seras
2024-08-25 17:54:19 +0000 UTCNice to see this continuing. I’ve already read the first 20. But I will check out the polished version too. Going through Motoko withdrawal is hard. Stopping at 4-5 titles, not trying to beat Ravensdagger?
MikeL
2024-08-25 17:50:31 +0000 UTCI have yet to read one of your stories without loving it. It’s been great fun following Phantom on SB — you actually got me reading other authors’ fiction on the site as well, since I’ve spent so much time in your snippet thread this year. That said, Kat will always be a Vicky to me. Best of luck on the upcoming RR release and hopeful push to publish!
Caerold
2024-08-25 17:48:21 +0000 UTCWoo! Looking forward to re-reading this :D
Cristi Palincas
2024-08-25 17:40:46 +0000 UTCLoved this and glad to see it edited. I kinda hoped we would get through the Conference before PTV got slowed down.
Rake1810
2024-08-25 17:39:01 +0000 UTCThe pace for PTV will still be about the same as it has been. Sorry to say it's just not really a main update story for me.
Seras
2024-08-25 17:33:40 +0000 UTCA rose or Tachikoma by any other name is still an absurdly adorable murder drone. I will choose Death by adorable Roomba 10/10 times.
Israel Perez-Rolo
2024-08-25 17:32:25 +0000 UTCI enjoy every iteration of Vicky, and this outlaw star style spin is quickly becoming a fave
thomas j walters
2024-08-25 17:29:58 +0000 UTCNICE. After reading a bit of it here and there in the snippets, I was looking forward to this getting the polish pass. Take your time. I understand burnout is a pain, but I would rather you take a breach from a story like GitC than be forced to abandon it. Thanks for the chapter in advance.
Israel Perez-Rolo
2024-08-25 17:29:14 +0000 UTCI second that, it's mostly why I'm here and I'm sad to see it being put behind other projects once again. I need me some Vicky crack pokémon battle energy
Thomas dupre
2024-08-25 17:29:07 +0000 UTCYeah, but I'm adding a bunch of new scenes to the chapters as I go too, so they aren't just the same. Not all of them will be vastly different, but there will still be changes to each one. It's a lot of work, let me tell you.
Seras
2024-08-25 17:22:58 +0000 UTCSuper green!
Meteroson
2024-08-25 17:21:56 +0000 UTCIts nice to see the rewrite, even if I will be sad there won't be any new chapters for a little bit
Wesley Miller
2024-08-25 17:21:08 +0000 UTCThat's kinda my hope! I do understand though. I'm going to try and keep GitC and PTV updating, but I'm just burned out on GitC and I needed a break, and this fell into my lap, and it's honestly really exciting to write. And I'm just super excited to see where it goes. If you want to 'read ahead' so to speak, there is a beta version on Spacebattles up to chapter 20. But I'm doing pretty edits to change a bunch of things from that version to this one. Mostly adding new scenes or clearing up some early installment weirdness.
Seras
2024-08-25 17:18:16 +0000 UTCPlease don't but PTV back on the back burner. It's the best.
Jason Markus
2024-08-25 17:17:26 +0000 UTCGotta check this out, hope it's good, because I exclusively subscribed for gitc and a bit of ptv, let's see if this can compete
OmegaNano
2024-08-25 17:15:22 +0000 UTCYeah i figured it wasnt your real name, just at most based on it maybe, since Vicky's an SI
dicloniuslord
2024-08-25 17:14:02 +0000 UTCMC not named Vicky. ERROR. DOES NOT COMPUTE.
Heraclitus
2024-08-25 17:13:48 +0000 UTCGreen green, we're all green here!
Vara
2024-08-25 17:12:02 +0000 UTCNot my real name, and not a copyright issue. I wanted to change the name to sort of differentiate this from just my fanfiction I guess? I wanted to try and create some distance from just another one of my SI stories I guess. (Even though that's exactly what it is when it comes down to it.) I just felt like since it was something new, I should treat it a bit differently. The only change that was because of copyright is the Tachikoma/Crabbit alteration.
Seras
2024-08-25 17:12:00 +0000 UTCIT'S UP! YAY! I've been having an absolute blast reading it, so seeing it get Official Status is amazing news. Looking forward to the new and improved chapters!
QuietlyObserving
2024-08-25 17:11:28 +0000 UTCWhy the name change from Vicky/Victoria (or however the longer version is spelled)? it's based on your name and not copyrighted, right?
dicloniuslord
2024-08-25 17:09:53 +0000 UTCYay! It begins!
Rakkis157
2024-08-25 17:09:33 +0000 UTCAnd here we go!
Runehkt
2024-08-25 17:07:49 +0000 UTCPS is officially out! Yay!
heh
2024-08-25 17:07:41 +0000 UTCTACHIS HAVE BROKEN SNIPPET CONTAINMENT, I WELCOME THE SWEET EMBRACE OF THEIR GRAVITY PANELS
Evertime
2024-08-25 17:04:20 +0000 UTCNice!
Aaron Greene
2024-08-25 17:04:00 +0000 UTC