Quaranteam - Hebridean Hame Ch.12
Added 2025-05-04 20:49:50 +0000 UTC---XII---
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If I were to guess, I'd say in the next two weeks. I'm not too far off an initial draft, but my writing time has to fit around my other commitments... Sorry!
James MacMillan
2025-06-06 06:59:46 +0000 UTCAny update on when your looking at the next chapter being released?
Luke
2025-06-06 03:16:30 +0000 UTCOh don't leave me hanging like this
Tammy Hoffman
2025-05-17 01:55:32 +0000 UTCAbsolutely amazing, can't wait for the next one! 😍
Kvothe228
2025-05-12 18:37:59 +0000 UTCI find myself very intrigued for the next entry. Excellent work!
Erik Hamsher
2025-05-05 20:07:54 +0000 UTCBody: "Oh, I don't do that " Vaccine: "Hold my beer."
James MacMillan
2025-05-05 11:53:39 +0000 UTCSo, at half-time, the score is Vaccine 1, Anorgasmia 0…. Looking forward to the 2nd half 😀
Christopher.g
2025-05-05 11:30:25 +0000 UTCAh, thanks for spotting that. Grammarly changes without me reviewing them properly.
James MacMillan
2025-05-05 09:52:07 +0000 UTCGreat stuff as always 😀. This sentence looks as if it needs a bit of tweaking (?): “There, Callum received extended hugs and kisses from Sarah and Alison, reminding them both about Karl’s medication warning to warn Alison about setting off to the Lodge before the fog cleared. “. Especially “warning to warn”
Christopher.g
2025-05-05 09:48:25 +0000 UTCA fictionalised version of it, but good detective work!
James MacMillan
2025-05-05 08:47:24 +0000 UTCGreat chapter you might want to put the date for the flash back in bold. Just a thought.
adhosbus1
2025-05-05 06:42:19 +0000 UTCWow. I echo all the above
John Bluck
2025-05-05 05:21:15 +0000 UTCAll that flashback with Catherine only for the chapter to end like that! Please tell us chapter 13 will be soon! P.S. I liked the additional geographic detail in the flashback, is the island supposed to be Eilean Shona?
raptor8525
2025-05-05 03:42:13 +0000 UTCRight?
Tumakhunter
2025-05-05 02:08:39 +0000 UTCI’m already having trouble waiting for the next chapter, and it’s been less than three minutes. I’ve been fully immersed in the entire Quaranteam universe since the very first appearance on Literotica and this has become my favorite of all the paths explored by the entire writing team. Your patience and willingness to fully develop your characters results in a much more gratifying payoff when the time is right. There are times when I’ve had to pause when reading other stories and remind myself who the characters are. No such problems here. Now stop reading this and get busy on the next chapter, please! Oh, and most importantly……thanks!
Dave
2025-05-05 01:50:36 +0000 UTCDamn! I'm thinking right now that hopefully she just bit her tongue, but it's good that there's assistance nearby, since it's actually possible for her to drown in her own blood, something that can be avoided with some attention. Definitely a surprise! I think I like getting the flashback, BTW, and (as appears to be pretty common) this chapter ends on a bigger cliffhanger than it had going into it. I'm going to have some trouble waiting for the next one.
Fumtu
2025-05-05 00:49:41 +0000 UTCFuck.... that ending!!!
Gary Coleman
2025-05-04 22:01:49 +0000 UTC
