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A snippet - Chapter 15, scene 1

I thought I'd share a snippet of the start of the next chapter, to show it is being worked on!

As ever, this is an unofficial story til it's completed and signed off.

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Quaranteam: Hebridean Hame, Chapter 15

Late morning, Sunday, 4th October 2020

Near Eilean Arthriagh, Inner Hebrides, Scotland

“So what do you… think?” Mira asked, the end of her question broken by her yawning into the back of her hand.

Callu...

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Geography of Hebridean Hame

I was doing a little writing tonight and had to turn to Google Maps - which made me think that while at least one person has successfully guessed the location I've based the story on, there's (probably) no harm in sharing it here.

Note - this isn't a place I've been! The idea for the setting originated from my watching a YouTube channel about life on the island, while simultaneously reading all the QT material I could get my hands on. I was keen to write a QT story set in Scotland, and...

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7/11 update

Just a quick apology - while I've been posting fairly regularly with updates on the new chapter, I'm aware that not everyone has access to them and I've been rubbish at posting much else.

Chapter 15 is currently sitting around 7200 words - I usually aim for nine or ten thousand words a chapter. Editing is ongoing as I progress, but I'll do a thorough review at the end. The long and short of it is that it'll be another couple of weeks before the chapter is available to all.

Befor...

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15/10 Update

A little bit of a lull over the last few days, as I was off travelling again, this time a 'boys' weekend with some buddies. Good curry was had, a few beers consumed, and the world was set to rights multiple times.

Back to doing some writing tonight - progress continues.

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Update 29/09

Work has started on Chapter 15, which will be shared here in its final draft form once it's done prior to release on LitE, as per my previous works.

You might have noticed some other posts that are not visible to everyone. I've set up a higher-tier subscription that gives access to my ongoing drafts as and when I update them. I'm working on how this might look going forward and whether it will continue to interest anyone. I do a lot of re-working as I go!

I'm also planning to do ...

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19 September update

The full draft of chapter 14 has now been posted in the WiP collection, while it awaits official signoff. It's been a while, so I'm unsure how long this will take.

I'm really pleased to have completed the chapter, given the time it's taken. Hopefully, it was worth the wait.

I'm planning to keep the momentum up and get straight on with the next chapter. Chapter 13 will be posted to LitE soon.

Thanks!

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Draft: Quaranteam - Hebridean Hame Ch. 14

The following chapter is a late draft, having been submitted for authorisation to the QT lore keepers. Though I expect very little to change. If you spot any issues, please let me know!

While you may have seen earlier drafts, significant changes are made on a regular basis, so it's worth starting at the beginning.

Note, this chapter is not official until properly given the go ahead.

---XIV---

Late Afternoon, Saturday, 3rd October 2020

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15 Sept update

I let out a sigh of relief this evening, after sending the other QT authors the link for Chapter 14. They'll sense check and do an editing pass for me, then it'll be over to one of the lorekeepers for sign off.

Hopefully, I'll have a draft of the whole chapter to post here later this week, and then I'll get Chapter 13 posted on LitE.

Fingers crossed!

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Brief 5th September update

Holiday over, I am back home and getting into gear. I've managed to get myself writing over the last evenings, so the chapter is progressing!

Thanks for sticking with me!

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Very early WIP - Chapter 14 v2

Below is another draft of Chapter 14 (I've called it v2, for clarity), shared here as it's taking me so long. I think I'm roughly halfway through. Some of this work has been subject to editing and refinement since the last draft, and I've no easy way to show changes, so apologies if most of what you read is more or less the same as the last draft. But I'd encourage reading from the start, as some things have changed.

This is a reminder that the chapter is not 'canon' at this time,...

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20 August update

I am still alive...

Progress on Chapter 14 is slow, but is being made. Your comments on the draft helped, as has getting over one of the 'humps' I had stalled on.

I've got a weeks break starting soon, which will remove me from the computer and take me to southern Scotland until the end of the month. I doubt I'll get much done while I'm away - but I do very much recognise this next chapter is delayed and thank you all for your patience.

I am hoping to use the time to catc...

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Hebridean Hame Ch 14 (very early WiP)

Note - this is as far as I've gotten, having suffered my first period of writer's block since I started this story last year. I'm still chipping away, trying to do a little every night (which sometimes consists of nothing but reworking what I already had down). However, it's been too long and I feel like I owe you guys at least something!

Quaranteam: Hebridean Hame, Chapter 14

Late Afternoon, Saturday, 3rd October 2020

Eilean Arthriagh,...

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26 July update

As predicted, this has been a slow month. Heat, holidays and IT issues have all contributed - I dropped and smashed my phone on the first day of the holiday, leaving me cut off from the digital world, much to the amusement of others.

It's scary just how reliant I've become on my phone for everything.

However, I'm home now and extremely aware that I owe you all a chapter - so I'll get back to the grindstone.

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28 June update

After a bit of a delay, the lore masters have signed off on Chapter 13. As such, I've moved it from drafts into the main listing and will publish Chapter 12 on LitE shortly. No changes were required.

One issue with the stable of QT authors increasing and people having various stories in the works is that the guys who check everything fits the tone and lore are a bit stretched.

Work has started on Chapter 14 - though this might be a slow one. I've various commitments (holidays,...

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Quaranteam - Hebridean Hame Ch.13

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Q

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Miss Emma Roselyn

Age as of 2020: 26

5'8" (173cm), 32DD – 27 – 36, dark-haired with a partially grown-in undercut on one side, and hippie-esque braids (or a plain ponytail) on the other. European in appearance, with French/Spanish roots. Often wearing chefs' whites, but when not working has a 'fashionable' grungy/gothy style. Vibes, often dancing or singing to herself, with swaying hips and a wide grin.

Emma is a high achiever, but made a point to never achieve in the areas her parents wanted h...

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27th May update

I'm still here!

As of tonight, I'm 9184 words into Chapter 13. There's still work to be done, but definite progress is being made...

No one really liked Catherine anyway, right? :P

I am aware that I've not done any character image posts for a while, but I thought I'd leave it up to you guys who I should cover next.

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Chapter 12 update

This morning, I received confirmation that Chapter 12 has passed the loremaster's scrutiny, and so I've moved it from drafts into the main chapter library.

As a result, Chapter 11 will be getting published on LitE shortly.

Work has started on Chapter 13... will it be lucky for some?

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Quaranteam - Hebridean Hame Ch.12

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Qu

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27th April update

Good news! I'm approaching the final stages of Chapter 12. Hopefully, a new chapter will be visible here this week (fingers crossed) - just some polishing/checking/editing to do.

No doubt, most of you will have caught the launch of a new QTUK storyline. If you haven't, S. Bradshaw has been sharing his take on a UK-based story with the other writers, with the prologue already published (you can find it here: 2025-04-27 21:49:20 +0000 UTC View Post

7 April Update

For some reason, Chapter 10 has now taken more than a week for LitE to post. For those not familiar with the process, once something has been submitted it's checked over by them before they publish. Normally it might take 3 or 4 days. I've no idea why there's such a delay this time, but this morning I've resubmitted it in the hope it gets dealt with.

Work continues on Chapter 12.

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27th March update

After a bit of a delay, the lore keepers have okayed Chapter 11. No edits were required or suggested; it's just that everyone's busy with their own lives and writing. I've taken this chapter from drafts and added it to the main chapter list for those of you who prefer to read officially approved QT stories! I'll be adding Chapter 10 to LitE in the next few days - submissions there also go through a vetting process, which holds things up.

I'm currently working on a 'prequel' story based ...

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10th March Update

Chapter 11 is complete, barring any last edits and sign-off by the DH Universe lore masters. I'm not expecting any issues, though there remains a chance that the more experienced writers in the group will provide feedback, which might result in minor changes!

The draft is available for subscribers. Once it's all signed off, I'll post Chapter 10 on LitE.

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Quaranteam - Hebridean Hame Ch.11

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Quaranteam: Hebridean Ha

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5th March Update

I've eventually gotten around to working up another character image and background post - mainly as progress on Chapter 11 has been good. I'm hoping to get the last few scenes written this week and have a working draft for you all next week.

This chapter has flowed much more easily onto the page than the last one - and yes, it does start to move the story forward!

Again, thanks to you all for showing such an interest in my work! 

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Miss Alison Sobieska

Age as of 2020: 24

5'5" (165cm), 28A – 22 – 32, Brown-haired with the ends of her hair still showing the pink colour she's been growing out. Faintly Slavic in appearance, given her family's Polish roots, with a small but pointed nose and light, bright eyes. She prefers baggy, comfortable clothes but looks good in jeans.

Alison is artistic and empathic. However, she has a severe hearing impairment due to a genetic condition that began impacting her in her teens. She wears hea...

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24 February Update

Unfortunately, I do not have much to report - progress is ongoing with Chapter 11. I have a reasonably clear idea of where I'm going with this one, which should make it easier to progress than Ch. 10 was.

I did note, with some pride, that Chapter 9 topped the LitE Sci-Fi "All Time" favourites for about a week. It has now fallen to 10th place. But as a new writer, it was great to see it doing so well, especially since some talented authors are posting in that category, including other ...

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Chapter 9 live

Chapter 9 is now live on Literotica - I appreciate that many of you will have read the chapter here, but if you get a chance, please provide a rating on LitE.

Also, Chapter 10 has been authorised in record time. I've barely even started on 11. I intend to keep Ch.10 available only here until I'm ready to post 11.

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Progress update, 9 Feb

As of tonight, Chapter 10 has been submitted to the QT loremasters for checking.

In the meantime, I've posted the draft here (it's available for paid members).

I've also posted Chapter 9 on LitE, and it should appear there in a few days.

Now onto Chapter 11...

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Quaranteam - Hebridean Hame Ch.10

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Quaranteam: Hebridean Ha

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