Sibling Rivalry: Chapter One
Added 2017-09-28 23:36:59 +0000 UTChttps://www.dropbox.com/s/mhwzlg4ajlvefps/Sibling%20Rivalry.pdf?dl=0
A new limited M/F series, focused on a hypnotist, his girlfriend and her twin sister. Mary warns her boyfriend Paul about her troublemaking sister Ruth, but after a case of mistaken identity Paul finds himself being blackmailed by Ruth. Mary is unaware of the hypnotic triggers that he's put in her mind to play with her. Triggers that Ruth is eager to use to humiliate her sister. Now Paul has to find a way to stop Ruth before they both end up as playthings for her perverted fantasies.
Comments
I find myself thinking about this story quite a bit. I want to read more almost as much as I want more of "It Runs in the Family." It has some good possibilities for sure.
HardhatDoozer
2017-11-02 01:23:07 +0000 UTCThe hypnotist is a victim! At least for now. I also always like Twin themed stories. There is always so much to explore: themes like Love or Rivalry as here. Or differing twin sisters being forced together to act as one, or, conversely, for 'same twins' to have their slight differences amplified to become divergent from their sister. An extreme example being the tomboy becoming the 'boyfriend' of the more girly sister.
larqven
2017-10-13 05:40:01 +0000 UTCI'd like to see more of this story and if Ruth got hypnotized I'd be even happier.
Feehan1999
2017-10-07 00:59:31 +0000 UTCI assume David can't hypno Ruth because in this universe hypnosis is more delicate?
BarryBarlow
2017-10-01 11:21:25 +0000 UTCI hope to have a new chapter by next month. I've spent this month getting back to a level of writing I'm happy with, before I work on the popular series. I've been trying to work on everything, but my first draft of the next It Runs in the Family was incredibly bad. I'm working on rewriting it and it's already incredibly better. I appreciate all your patience, I'm just trying to make the writing good enough for all of you to enjoy
Sammynona
2017-09-29 18:49:14 +0000 UTCAre you done writing It Runs in the Family? It's the reason I've been paying $5/mo and we've only had one update in the last 3 months. :(
Drow
2017-09-29 16:50:49 +0000 UTC
