5/20/2017: It Runs in the Family Chapter 12
Added 2017-05-20 19:08:34 +0000 UTCHere it is, the second half of the current arc "It would make me happy..."
https://www.dropbox.com/s/qkiwgscbi935u5f/It%20Runs%20in%20the%20Family%20chapter%2012.pdf?dl=0
Now that Connie has figured out a new trick, we'll see just what kind of fun she gets up to. Will she wisely master this trigger or let it go to her head and get in all sorts of trouble? Read on and find out haha
Once again a big thanks goes out to everyone who helped proofread the story. They're the reason there's less typos then usual, and I appreciated all of the feedback they gave on the story.
Comments
One of the best chapters of all time especially until page 21! Amazing! Cannot wait for next installment!
Pi Xi
2017-05-21 20:03:01 +0000 UTCGood points, and I definitely still enjoyed.
Dorian Alton
2017-05-21 17:59:55 +0000 UTCI don't see it as a filler chapter. We got some nice character building for Connie, both Sisters got a nice push toward independent lesbianism, and we got the dating misconceptions cleared up so now the way is clear for Tara and Connie to really get together. All in all a good payoff for the setup that was the last one, and providing a good point to again switch characters in the next chapter.
Dyamonde
2017-05-21 16:32:33 +0000 UTCI don't have as much to say this time :D In a lot of ways, this felt like a filler chapter. Not a bad thing at all, as we got to see Connie play with her new trigger with sexy results, and some very nice clothing descriptions. Nice to see that the happiness trigger had some obvious drawbacks, with Tara and Jane quickly coming to their senses, but also interesting to see the self-justification continue. Suggests that she can probably push Michelle, Tara and Jane pretty far, though I imagine Gloria would be less vulnerable. Also nice to see she's put some additional limits on the happiness trigger because it would be too tempting. Also interesting to see how much more effective the triggers Gloria has implanted over the years are, with so much reinforcement. Tara didn't even bat an eye. And now, Connie's going to try and teach herself. Lots to look forward to
Dorian Alton
2017-05-21 14:17:21 +0000 UTCHah, guess I better get reading :D
Dorian Alton
2017-05-21 03:20:48 +0000 UTCAnother awesome chapter. I think this Story is clearly your best work so far. Really hoping the next chapter will be about Michelle again :) All that's missing now is the 2000 word Essay by Dorian. Get on it, Mate.
Dyamonde
2017-05-20 21:37:02 +0000 UTC
