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Thunder and Black Wings 47

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That first line: "The two most beautiful telepaths I'd ever met sat across from me in the university cafeteria" Kinda falls flat when they are literally the only two telepaths he currently knows. He really should have told his mother before he tested out his teleportation abilities, probably should have took someone with him too. Thanks for the chappy.

Ototsu_Yume

Interesting, we need more.

Iori Daemona Angel

Liked this getting an update

Jeffrey Smith

grosse nuance les heros qui tuen pas les monstres on du sang d'innocens sur les mains comme superman et batman , jocker et compagnie sortent de prison comme rien et continue a tuer ferais longtemps que la police aurais eu l'ordre de nous abattre

yan boul

I hate how Jean and Emma are trying to influence his life choices and the supernatural is supposed to be a secret if he goes out as a fallen angel in public many powerful beings will visit and these beings can read magic signatures they will recognize him even out of costume being in public is not a good idea especially if the reason for becoming a hero is just because he was one in an alternate Timeline it feels like he has no choice also Heroes aren't supposed to kill and Blake is a killer he just now killed Kimimaro without guilt he is a protector not a hero

2010supersonic

Thanks for the chapter ☺️! Great to see a new chapter 😁! I hope to be reading much more of this greatly interesting story soon 😁!

Aeden Emrys

Thanks for the chapter! I wonder if the alternate timeline was in a pure marvel universe or if they had the dxd elements as well.

Lictor Magnus


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