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The Black Witch! Ch 14

Hello, everyone! Here’s the latest chap

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Excuse me, you are correct! I wasn’t implying light meant good. And I apologize to the author. I’ve read too many DC comics. The protagonist has done well with putting down threats, righteously. I get a bad taste in my mouth with the DC universe since they believe not ending a threat outright. Again i apologize if it seemed I was harsh

Austin Smith

Light doesn't mean good.

Iori Daemona Angel

I like the track of this story. I disagree with the fact that there’s this overwhelming need to “go light”. She was “shocked and numbed” by the greed and depravity of the Potter family at this point in her story arc? I like the fact that she demolished the mcfinnegan family rather than the potters’ because I could see Morgana doing the same. If she is going to be a villain I like leaning into that. But towing the line between “I have feelings to be good” and “my mentor wants me bad” the whole story is going to get old

Austin Smith