Mini Comic "Love"
Added 2022-03-24 23:57:15 +0000 UTCHere's a small mini comic about my beans. You can find out more about their personality and past. Hope you like it!♥
Comments
Ohh thank you! I downloadet it!
Chudraw
2022-03-25 22:42:51 +0000 UTCAaaaaaah! I love White and how he emotes! He truly has a deep love for Red and it shows! Black is such a jerk, but I love him, and his expression was funny when White loomed over him! [Even if we couldn't see his face XD]
Melissa Zmek
2022-03-25 21:27:00 +0000 UTCNow I see this error. After reading it six time I still didn't see it until this comment :p If we are talking about grammar, the first panel where Black states "He throws you away" sounds like its missing something. Like "He'll throw you away" or "He will throw you away". But over all. Give a 99% on the grammar, 1000+ on the comic 🤩
Old Lady
2022-03-25 15:48:22 +0000 UTCThat panel with White threatening Black, man can certainly be scary!
Sakurawrs
2022-03-25 14:12:54 +0000 UTCThank you @gabriela!
DREAMEATERARTS
2022-03-25 14:12:38 +0000 UTCI would second Grammarly! It's not flawless and needs to be setup for what you want it for (not hard to do), but it's good for picking up bits. The free version is usually enough to do all of that, too. Premium is more punctuation/refinement suggestions.
Sakurawrs
2022-03-25 14:12:16 +0000 UTC"It's true what Black told you" is correct grammatically there, since told being past tense is covering off anything needing to be added.
Sakurawrs
2022-03-25 14:09:03 +0000 UTCI'm not always correct but I don't think you need to add (have) : ) it's ok not sure I hope someone on here corrects me. I'm from America but I'm not entirely sure sometimes our grammar is very different. If I may recommend a site called grammarly it's free and helps with corrections! : D
DREAMEATERARTS
2022-03-25 13:10:29 +0000 UTCHaha, thanks!♥
Chudraw
2022-03-25 11:49:05 +0000 UTCOhh Thank you sooo much!! but then I would have to add "have" too, right? I'm a little confused
Chudraw
2022-03-25 11:44:51 +0000 UTCI'm glad!♥♥
Chudraw
2022-03-25 11:44:15 +0000 UTCAwwww my heart!!!! 🥺😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️ I know Rose would have joined in into beating Black to a pulp for saying that to sweet bean Red 😤😤😤 amazing job as always love!!
Katherine Giron
2022-03-25 03:50:43 +0000 UTCHahaha 🤣😂 Yes, giant threatening White was hilarious. What a cute comic. Oooh Black, and his mischievous way. Lol, so funny XD That face White makes when he's hoping to spend time with Red T.T Poor guy. I am glad it worked out in the end, a beautiful relationship. Red just need to stop listening to Black. 😮💨🫡
Old Lady
2022-03-25 01:55:07 +0000 UTCLove your comic I've been waiting for it! ❤️ Second to last panel tho is a spelling error "tould" and balck is supposed to be told and black
DREAMEATERARTS
2022-03-25 01:32:26 +0000 UTCI love the minicomics 💕
Kyra
2022-03-25 00:20:00 +0000 UTC
