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Mini Comic "Love"

Here's a small mini comic about my beans. You can find out more about their personality and past. Hope you like it!♥

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Ohh thank you! I downloadet it!

Chudraw

Aaaaaaah! I love White and how he emotes! He truly has a deep love for Red and it shows! Black is such a jerk, but I love him, and his expression was funny when White loomed over him! [Even if we couldn't see his face XD]

Melissa Zmek

Now I see this error. After reading it six time I still didn't see it until this comment :p If we are talking about grammar, the first panel where Black states "He throws you away" sounds like its missing something. Like "He'll throw you away" or "He will throw you away". But over all. Give a 99% on the grammar, 1000+ on the comic 🤩

Old Lady

That panel with White threatening Black, man can certainly be scary!

Sakurawrs

Thank you @gabriela!

DREAMEATERARTS

I would second Grammarly! It's not flawless and needs to be setup for what you want it for (not hard to do), but it's good for picking up bits. The free version is usually enough to do all of that, too. Premium is more punctuation/refinement suggestions.

Sakurawrs

"It's true what Black told you" is correct grammatically there, since told being past tense is covering off anything needing to be added.

Sakurawrs

I'm not always correct but I don't think you need to add (have) : ) it's ok not sure I hope someone on here corrects me. I'm from America but I'm not entirely sure sometimes our grammar is very different. If I may recommend a site called grammarly it's free and helps with corrections! : D

DREAMEATERARTS

Haha, thanks!♥

Chudraw

Ohh Thank you sooo much!! but then I would have to add "have" too, right? I'm a little confused

Chudraw

I'm glad!♥♥

Chudraw

Awwww my heart!!!! 🥺😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️❤️ I know Rose would have joined in into beating Black to a pulp for saying that to sweet bean Red 😤😤😤 amazing job as always love!!

Katherine Giron

Hahaha 🤣😂 Yes, giant threatening White was hilarious. What a cute comic. Oooh Black, and his mischievous way. Lol, so funny XD That face White makes when he's hoping to spend time with Red T.T Poor guy. I am glad it worked out in the end, a beautiful relationship. Red just need to stop listening to Black. 😮‍💨🫡

Old Lady

Love your comic I've been waiting for it! ❤️ Second to last panel tho is a spelling error "tould" and balck is supposed to be told and black

DREAMEATERARTS

I love the minicomics 💕

Kyra


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